MaN-DeM vs MjGrEeN
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 06:43 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 06:44 AM.

MaN-DeM has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 06:44 AM.

Yo, when u breathe i see ice,
you tried to sell your mom for my lyrics, but you'll find there twice the price,
i'ma roast you with my lyrics cuz i'm #1,
i'll burn you like the powder from my Colt 45 Gun/

I'm like a samurai when i'm provoked i'll slice you,
like the 'Terminator' i'll annihilate you,
you wanna act like 'J-Kwon' and threaten me with a gun,
i'll kill you with my lyrics because i am the chosen one/

Getting beat seems to be your number 1 forte,
now your complaining cuz i'm straight and your too gay,
I'm like 'Samuel L Jackson' and i got that clinical style,
i'll beat you so bad you'll take tips from '8 Mile'/

Your like 'Britney Spears' because you think your toxxic,
i'll get redneck on your ass cuz you know i 'rocks it',
I'm the winner of this battle and the fact is you lose,
i've got your mom and your sister here, the one i'll fuck you can choose/

Dont try and spit ur grimy rhymes to me
ur just a fucked up wannabe , im gonna merk u down to the ground then slap u around an put u bac down

i'm gonna fuck up your world andthen fuck your girl, bitch screaming cuz i am rocking her world, Mj i'm like a tazer, when u attack me i shock you in defense, your rhyming sucks so much ur lookin dense,

nice job u copied one of my verses from a previous battle i put 'I'm like a tazer i shock you in defense, your getting pissed on dude your looking a little tense' u need to elevate.

Voted For: MjGrEeN

Okay, Hands Down, MJGREEN Gets My Vote..

Not Really A Contest, MJGREEN Hit Harder With Better Punches, Better Vocab n More Personal...

Man-Dem Ya Flow Was A Lil Weak, You Need 2 Elevate Your Rhymes, Broaden Your Vocabulary n Experiment With Diffrent Styles.....

Good Lookin Ya'll...

Holla Back With Honest Votes On My Battles

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im a newbie at this i need some help and advice

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This was feedback posted for MjGrEeN
 

good shit keep writin i hope to see more .....................

well cud u vote lol...............................

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Voted For: MaN-DeM

what the fuck is this but nun the less he gets it for meatas in both bars he got them but wack stucture but flow he had
v/man-dem
return the favour in my battle between dapunchlineking thanks peace

Voted For: MjGrEeN

man no structure no no punches no disses equals a bad verse very bad elevate then battle 1/10
mj good flow structure needs help punches and disses were ok but need work vocab was good still you aint need a dope verse to win here 4/10

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

I Give This One To MjGreen

Man-Dem ... Structure Was Fucked I Didn't see Tha Six Lines ... Ya Flow Was Real Bad ... Tha Punches That I Did see Were Weak ... Couldn't Really Tell If You Had Multies Or they Were Jus Ya Lines Coz Of Ya Structure ...


MjGreen ... Ya Structure Was Much Betta Than Man-dem's ... Decent Punches ... Nice Wordplay And Metas ... Try To Work On Ya Personals/Punches ... Ya Punches Wern't Great But Still Knocked Him Out ... I Think I Hear A K.O Hea ...

Vote:MjGreen

Voted For: MjGrEeN

MJGrEeN-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

MaN-DeM-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

Voted For: MjGrEeN

mjgren took it cuz more lines and thats really all... no hate yo...punchlines werent bad...4/10
mandem you rap kinda like dis dude but you came weaker and wit less wordplay...2/10