-Noble- vs DrasticMeasureZ
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines QUICK
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


QUICK LETS DO IT AND REMEMBER DIS NOT AN 6-UNLIMITED ONLY 6 LINES

Minimum posts to vote: 0

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 12:54 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 12:24 PM.

-Noble- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 12:27 PM.

My techniques, indirectly hit with sarcastic punches, don't miss like Jet Lee/(1)
I'm just skimmin slow over your "flow" like a lyrical unphased-"jetski"//(2)
Put some "concrete and vibe" in a blender, show you some "street flava'"/(3)
I got newbies thinkin' they emcees follow yet "sick" to them is not behaviour?//(it's an illness???)(4)
Call me the "deadly breathelizer", I'll verbally "take~away~ya~breath"/(5)
HTML tombstone on "cemetery.com",apologies to ya mom, for the first "online~death"//(LOG OUT....)(6)


great act trying to act like a thug u just recieved the noble award bitch!

3 minutes until verse due hurry up mayne

*his avy
** he spells his name wrong

‘give him a break’, cuz someone needs to ‘help this dude’
400 posts in 2 weeks… damn… what ‘else do you do’?!?!
I will X this man…laugh and ‘leave him pissed‘..*
He starts unneeded beef.. Just so his ‘threads get hits’!!!
Already hated on!!! Or at least that’s what kids ‘felt to express’
I hate to break it to you dog… but measures, is ’spelt with and S’!!!**

Da 2 Links Are Da Same Thing I Dont Know Why U Did That But Its Cool Mayne Lol I Like Dat Mayne Ur Good

Voted For: -Noble-

Noble
Already hated on!!! Or at least that’s what kids ‘felt to express’
I hate to break it to you dog… but measures, is ’spelt with and S’
<<NICE,Won game right there....

(Drast)
HTML tombstone on "cemetery.com",apologies to ya mom, for the first "online~death"//(LOG OUT....)(6)
<< dumb line man Keep elevatin'

Meta:Noble
LMAO LINE:Noble

Vote: Noble

Return the favor on my battle...VS Certfied HONEST VOTE

Word Uppin

*his avy
** he spells his name wrong

‘give him a break’, cuz someone needs to ‘help this dude’
400 posts in 2 weeks… damn… what ‘else do you do’?!?!
I will X this man…laugh and ‘leave him pissed‘..*
He starts unneeded beef.. Just so his ‘threads get hits’!!!
Already hated on!!! Or at least that’s what kids ‘felt to express’
I hate to break it to you dog… but measures, is ’spelt with and S’!!!**

sry for posten my verse 2wice my comp froze...

lol yea ur good 2 nice battle

Voted For: -Noble-

It was a close one but i felt like Noble took it, his lines werent long and they had plenty of power when they hit keep dion ya thing......as for the other guy your sentences were way too long try and shorten them up...and the only good line in the whole thing was that online death one....it was a one sided battle to me.....

Vote/Noble

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Aiiiiiight, Noble I Didnt Expect A Verse Like That From You, It Was Siiiiiiiiick, Nice Punches n Metas, No Multies An Ya Wordplay Couldda Been Better But 6/10

Drastic Wins Tho, He Hit Harder An Has Some Phenomenal Wordplay, The Boys Got Skillz, Ya'll Better Watch Yourself With This Kat....

HTML tombstone on "cemetery.com",apologies to ya mom, for the first "online~death"//
^^^^
Dope As Hell n Humouress Too....

Drastic Got My Vote

Voted For: -Noble-

-Noble-
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. most of ur punches connected.. personals were pretty good..

DrasticMeasureZ
structure isnt good.. all of ur lines are stretched.. flow falls off.. due to the stretchness.. good multis.. dope wordplay.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
DrasticMeasureZ had more multis.. and better wordplay.. -Noble- had the better structure.. the better flow.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. -Noble- gets my vote..

VOTE - -NOBLE-

Please return the favor with an honest vote here..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172
Thanx.

Voted For: -Noble-

Noble got it.. punches, hah.. this battle was kind of weak but he just made me laugh

u both could get better.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic You Had Some Nice Punches but I Didn't See Any Personals ... Nice Metas and Wordplay ... Good Vocab Too ...

But I'll Give This To Noble Because Nearly Every Single Line Was A personal Although He Didn't Have Wordplay, Multies, Metas Or As Good As Vocab As MeasureZ ... Battle Is To Diss Tha Person As Much As You Can And Drastic Didn't Do That ... No Hate Though

Shit I Voted For Tha Wrong Person ...........................................

Vote : Noble

Switched

This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
 

yo cuz dude may have gotten u on this 1 cause u ain't come wit no personals, try ta up ya game EVEN when battlin a NEWBIE aight -1-

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

YO DRASTIC,KNOW WHO DIS IS? HIT ME UP.

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

i got to vote DrasticMeasureZ i caught his flow it came nice and had sum pl's dat were complicated but if u noe how it goes it comes nice he also had sum good wordplay


-Noble- ur flow wuz lacking lyrical content and brinning up dose threads is wack u should of focused more on breakin down his flow instead of drama u had sum koo word play tho

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

Drastic gets my vote his verse hit
had mad wordplay n his punches hit
Noble urs was tight 2 if u had a lil more
it would've been a lil closer but u stopped
short nice drops dough
vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: -Noble-

-Noble-

took it

his flow was on throughout the battle.. unlike drastic who kinda drifted at times... Noble real dope had some witty punches...and hard hitting personals.... nice job witht he thread links even though they lead to the same place...lol still serves the purpose..... and nice finisher...

overall- noble

drastice just even out ur verse and try to rip it consistently thoughout the verse