Reckless vs World Famous
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

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Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 01:12 PM.

world famous has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 01:16 PM.

16-20 lines, aiight?

u copy RB vets styles & punches, i'll swallow this head
cuz even orders are sick and tired of u following them ..
pussy, i'll tell on u for cheatin, but won't get my tattles far
cuz i realized ur names missing the "W" like ur battles are
im waiting to beat Spul, a must when flowing, fuck..
your hated so much.. u make a-rival just by showing up
i`ll wreck some, with no affection - get whored & perish
if you could step son, it'd be by a former marriage
and remember that, whats the cost to be reminded?
ya sig'll go from winning streak to "Loss to feeble minded"
don't speak in my presence, faggot, itll end with hatred
cuz ur room to talk is about to get fucking renovated
cuz you've got fans on here man, but confess it they ..
gave me more respect than u when I came here yesterday
the lesson? sway, cuz u got no style for boastin kid
matter fact, only kinda form u got is the one u posted in
its no guess i'll protest, but wont let up the beating
i mean.. my fists & ur face should set up a meeting
even Phenom-in-all hates u, nobody bought it though
till he said 'im out like spuls chance of makin good audio'

Btw, all of my lines have wordplay or a punch in them, so if you dont get them ask .

THE FUCK I voetd but it didnt poll and it got it like this

Dopness yo this is a fucking tite battles but why 100 posts to vote and set it up on front lines !??!??! if anybody says this battles was wack or igt there fuckign stupid prollly empire would say that…

Feeble Minded aka World Famous: your shit was DOPENESS, yo that shit was tite I understand all ya stuff and it was hard hitting you had cool punches and good personals also ya structure was good and ya flow was good with all… umm nice shit nice creativity and I liked the last lines the best….
even Phenom-in-all hates u, nobody bought it though
till he said 'im out like spuls chance of makin good audio'
^ dope

Personals: 8/10
Punches: 7.7/10
Structure: 8.3/10
Flow: 8/10
Opener: 6/10-blah it didn’t sound rite “I’ll swallow your head” rofl
Closer: 8.3/10
Overall: 7.71/10

Reckless: Yours is fuckign DOPE too, you had tons of personals and strong punches you was good I understanded all ya stuff and you had more funnyier lines you had good structutre but ya flow on some lines was a lil off but you was good though best lines is
You say you won't merk anyone, cuz it's tru, you're fuckin' wack
What you gon do wit yo verse, when the baboon wants it's ass back?

Personals: 8.7/10
Punches: 8.2/10
Structure: 7.5/10
Flow: 7.2/10
Opener: 7.2/10
Closer: 7.6/10
Overall: 7.73/10

Feeble: Overall: 7.71/10
Reckless: Overall: 7.73/10
This was a fucking close battle but I vote Reckless but both were dope

Voted For: world famous

Sorry, but I gotta give this one to Feebs. He owned in every aspect. Spul came nice, but not nice enough. Nice job Feebs, I was just saying how I thought you were overrated too....lol

Step son line and room to talk line are what won this one :thumbup:

Vote - Feeble

This was feedback posted for world famous
 

Spul did it in mine...so ill do it in this....

Voted For: world famous

V/ world

He had hard hitting punches every bar while SPuL only had 2 good punchs...all them links man...prolly had 50 pop ups....world had witty punches...and wordplay was nice...concepts were more complex and his punches really stood above spuls...

This was feedback posted for Reckless
 

umm damn good battle it would have to go bar for bar and im too lazy so fuck it. but spul you used ass like 10 times in your verse and world famous, you coulda came harder. checkin polls...

Voted For: Reckless

hot battle i gave this one to u tho, cuz u had a better overall verse and better punches. i especially like that punch wit
"Yea, I've seen people jus like you....... but I had to pay admission"that was mad hot

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Voted For: Reckless

this was a close battle both were pretty even...both had nice punches,aight flow,nice personals,okay wordplay,and some nice openers,World Famous 9.5/10 Reckless 9.6/10....world famous would have won if reckless flow would have started bad like it did when he was finished.....Reckless your flow was falling apart

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Voted For: world famous

Reck-

2many damn links.....lol but nice punches some were played wtf baboon and goats ass......not feelin it. and why u explain u messed up the complexity of the punches.

Feeble-

Umm...i seen u come harder, punches were there, personals were there it was hardhitting, nice drop.

aiight uppin' this shiznit. dope battle. 3-3

Voted For: Reckless

yea, this was a dope battle. Prolly the dopest I seen in RV yet.

Feeble, you had some nice lines. I was feelin' yo drop. The flow was good, but it went off near the end. Yo punches were nice. you had some ill ones. I think you could have usesd a few more personals though. It was pretty good verse though. I give you a 9.5/10

Reck, you also had a dope verse. It's like the best I seen you spit maybe. You had awesome flow. Except it went off a tiny bit near the end. too many dots I guess. Yo punches were dope too. You had good personals too. And the punches mixxed wit Personals was the dope part. I think that gave you this win by a lil margin. Yo vers is a 9.6/10

v/Reck dope battle though

Voted For: Reckless

A'ight...hands down this wasnt a great battle...SPul got this with the upper hand in the punches tho...but not by much. Not great verses from either one...world famous had a better structure, both had good flow...just wasnt feelin this battle tho.

Vote- Spul

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This was feedback posted for Reckless
 

Checkin up this btich
my opinion: Feebles was better
Both are dope
I'm doper

aiight, so I believe it's over? is it? cuz Paramik didn't poll. But who knows. .

Voted For: Reckless

Um, ok, you won this one, but a you had some lines i wasn't feeling over all you got this, plus you had links on this guy man, so you controlled the personels, and your punches really hit, but the ending in my mind was weak man

Voted For: world famous

Other guy had weird punchlines, both were well structured and this guy had good punchlines and better worldplay and made more sense.

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Voted For: Reckless

I Was Feeling This Battle...
This Is One Of Those That Will Go Either Way Because All Aspects Were Dead Even So It Just Comes Down To Personal Prefferance...
And I Was Just Feeling Recks More In This One...
Both Had There Strong Point But I Was Feeling Recks Flow More...
And Both Had Tite Personal But I Liked Recks Better...
Vote: Reckless...
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...029#post1544029
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Voted For: Reckless

ouch.... dang Feeble... you let me down... I thought you were alot better than that....

Yeah... I liked Reckless in this one... the meta were brutal... ouch... but it wasn't all that... 7/10... not much for multis either... Your structure was good and I was feelin' ya flow... Nice references lol... great job with the personals and punches...
FAVE LINE: You say you won't merk anyone, cuz it's tru, you're fuckin' wack
What you gon do wit yo verse, when the baboon wants it's ass back?

Feeble aka world famous... that was like a 5.5/10... metas were all right... multis weren't very good either... not much for personals... I liked your punches but I mean this just wasn't a good enough effort man...

FAV LINE: i`ll wreck some, with no affection - get whored & perish
if you could step son, it'd be by a former marriage

VOTE: Reckless... good battle tho... Respect...

Voted For: Reckless

aight i dissected this shit thoroughly.. i'm not finna do the votin' line by line shit takes too long, so anywayz...

both y'all dropped hard for this shit.. good job first of all..

*personals- by far: Reckless, from your nationality plus links,
and the quotes of him catchin' u callin' urself a red neck, etc. nice work.. and nice wordin' for personals Reckless.. the better name diss was the world famous- swan lmfao..
World famous ur personals were nice too but u didn't have many that had a great effect, like the one with Reckless- missing a "W" connecting with him not winning battles (which is not true obviously) but whateva, not too bad..

*punches- pretty much even so no explanation, it's TIED

*flow- even TIED

*wordplay- some how, it's more sided to world famous for step son, a-rival.. which actually not as good as it coulda been but you used more so you get that portion..

*vocab- simple Reckless, he took it becuz his vocab flowed better with his verse as a whole..

*multis- neither..

*metas- neither..

*opener-
u copy RB vets styles & punches, i'll swallow this head
cuz even orders are sick and tired of u following them ..
^ what turns me away from this being the best one- is the i'll "swallow this head" part, that sounds SOOOOO fuckin' gay, it's not even funny... besides that fact, not bad using the "orders", "following them" part, not bad at all.. 7/10

You say you're Irish, Polish, Jewish, white, and... everything else
Also the poster boy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
^nice link to go with the punch, and nice opener startin' off with a unique personal.. nice 7.2/10
RECKLESS took the opener category..

*closer-
even Phenom-in-all hates u, nobody bought it though
till he said 'im out like spuls chance of makin good audio'
^everyone knows phenom-in-all don't like SPuL- repeatin' this in the last line was REALLY weak, but it did rhyme and flow so you get a 5.2/10

Unlike people's beliefs....................................... my rustyness is gone
If you wanna be World Famous............. I suggest you go on Swan
^i didn't like how u separated usin' space between the bar so much, but you started with a nice personal and ended with an even better one.. u didn't have to mention ur rustyness being gone so yours would be.. 6/10
RECKLESS took the closer also..

OVERALL: if i explain this any more, then i'ma fuckin' pass out.. simply put, both had nice verses, good punches, strength fell more on Reckless's side, wordplay more on world famous, explanations very true on both sides.. but the structure completes my decision which is Reckless's he got this, no hate, world famous but you were lackin' more things than Reckless, i already said where, so look ^up there sumwheres.. Reckless you had some down falls too, nigga, use wordplay you might have took this even more easier.. but yea anywayz.. it's done with..
Reckless takin' it.. oh yeah no hate Feeble Minded, study tho..
~L F~