† ArchAngel † vs Trooper
 

Battle Rules:
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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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A.I Vs Council Crew Battle

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Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:49 AM.

â€- ArchAngel â€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:50 AM.

Recognized your Ignorance i'll Dismember ya "Wing" like a Reaper
Not Significant" your Style doesnt sell like a Patrick Ewing Sneaker

In "Advance" 2 Thumbs Down 2 Your "Chants" Your "Not God Sent"
Ya Times Over and Done with Like sprints Performed by Clark Kent

Like Aaliyahs Rememberance your Finished~Like an Unreal Nympho
Learn some Acceptance You and Victories like Shaquille and Limbo

Stop the Speculations~Your Not in Nomination 2 run 4 Domination
Your Attributes Unheard of Like R kelly Legal Age sexual Relations

25-4 Equals "Inconsistent" Like Aritficial Intelligence Inspections
U vs Me~Odds are Lopsided Like Baby Caridges On Inersections


*Under his Title he said he was God Sent*

*Clark Kent was Played by Christopher reeves who is now Crippled*

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

Sick drop Troop, big up's.

This was feedback posted for Trooper
 

^Trooper took this battle hands down, lol.. ha ha nice drop from both though..
just feedback, and no disrespect, lmfao..

Voted For: Trooper

this was a close one, but i had to go with trooper because he came more consistent and didnt fall off during his flow...arch-you fell off at the beginning with a bar or two, then at the end with a bar or two...but yall both had nice punches, trooper had some good multies and shit...yall both lacked on DIRECT personals...work on that...but all around good battle, and nice verses

drop Explained HONEST votes in the sig folks

This was feedback posted for † ArchAngel †
 

good job playa. just peepin the polls .

Uppin

This was feedback posted for † ArchAngel †
 

nice shit just lookin at the poll

Uppin~`~`

my vote
 

Yo first of all both of you are raw as fuck,,,,but like the other guy said ol boy fell off in his flow in the begaining,,,

but trooper kept it going an didnt slip up at all,,,,since ol boy sliped
I got to give it to trooper because he really didnt make a mistake,,,
but both of you are raw as fuck,,an remember i said it,because its true

~The out come~


creativity+ flow+ punches+ hardest bars=Trooper as the winner :thumbup:

Voted For: Trooper

archangel-ya verse wasnt really on point to me here had some nice wordplay in the first line that was nice but the punch was garbage then the midget line was ight everything else wasnt even really a punchline to me just like u was spittin some shit nothin really goin hard at him work on constent wordplay threw ya verse get more personals and fix ya structure that shit is kinda hard to read brah

trooper- finally u battlin in elevated your best way to get noticed u dont need o put all them quotation marks on ya shit though pretty easy to catch things had nice wordplay threw ya whole verse that was a good thing some of ya punchs didnt really connect to me others where pretty nice though but work on more personals and try not to do your 2 lines spacing that shit aint needed brah

vote trooper

RETURN THE FUCKIN HONEST VOTE

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

you punches miss,so how are you winning when you got ripped by -Explicits'-two-line-diss
Don't get smart-kid! have you wrapped up and-tarnished,got asthma? Dawg i'll leave you gaspin regardless..

lol...i liked that line..but anyway my vote goes to Arch...(to me tho) i think his punches were a slight harder den Trooper's...tha structure was a little stretched out...tha flow was pretty decent and wordplay was nice...

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That shit aint explained lol
dont even count dude

This was feedback posted for † ArchAngel †
 

checkin out the battle and the poll
both of you did well

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

Archangel- your verse was nice...i enjoyed it...your punches were nice too...some hit hard but not many but mostly your punches were nice...your structure was aight could have done better with it...your metas had some good ones...overall you got this battle with better punches and a better verse...

Trooper- your verse was also nice...but i liked archangel's more...your punches were also good to but some just werent hard enough...your structure was very very nice...you had some metas...had a few personals...but overall it was close but archangel got this...

v/ArchAngel

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

Yo.. You both chill with me.. Dont get pissed if i vote against you..

Trooper
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was dope.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Arch Angel
structure is ok.. ur lines r stretched though.. flow falls off a little due to the stretchness.. good multis.. wordplay is tight.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal..

Overall
Trooper had the better structure.. as well as the better flow.. both had dope wordplay.. Arch Angel had more multis.. more connecting punches.. and the better personal.. so basing off of that.. Arch Angel gets my vote..

VOTE - ARCH ANGEL

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. thanx..

upp this shyt man

finally no d/ring votes...lets go

for trooper
 

ay yo...this was a sick battle...wish i could vote...trooper u came good...u had punches, personals, multies, and all dat shit...haha...arch...urs was good to G...just troops was a lil harder to me...u had some good hits, BUT, u dropped off the flow in the begining...thats how you lost it...i am really suprised its 2-2...it whould be 4-0 troop...but thats my opinion...good look both of you...~1~


STR8 :shoot:

Vote: Trooper
 

Trooper: had flawless structure, good personals an example of that is the first bar, nice wordplay, good punches, and had good metaphors

Archangel: structure fell off after a while, nice wordplay, good metaphors and multi's, good punches, streched ya lines out

the flow of archangel thru me off, both of u are good as shit but my vote goes to trooper

Uppin

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

ok good battle

let me break it down....
punches
are counted in four catigories:
1.complesxity:AA
2.wordplay: AA
3. impact:AA
4.originality:AA

structure:AA (troops was choppy)

"Recognized your Ignorance i'll Dismember ya "Wing" like a Reaper
Not Significant" your Style doesnt sell like a Patrick Ewing Sneaker"

i swear on everything i love
that you bit this line from somewhere...
i heared it from schema or somebody.....

anyway bit or not AA wins

no hate jus my oppinion

:)


i'm out
~1~

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Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

ima have to give this one to you...i think you won becuz of ya punches...dont get me wrong..Troops punches were good too...but yours were more unique...ya vocab and wordplay was overall good as well...a couple of ya lines was stretched ..so work on that...ya opener coulda been betta..but ya closer was good..

Trooper..ya verse was ok too but the punchlines didnt hit like archs did...his shit seemed more unique..it seemed like yours was main street punches relating things to famous peeps...i just think that you lacked the wordplay and punches that arch had...but still good battle

Lol dr votes
them shitz dont count


we'll see if strobe take em off or not

cuz kno damn well i aint lose this damn battle

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

alright this was a good battle... arch angel came pretty hard with punches..i have seen drop better verses.. trooper ur verse was aiight his punches was aight some kinda played.. like that clark kent line i saw stuff like that before.. structure and flow u both kinda came even on that... so overall this was a real close battle but i say arch cause his punches were better

Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-

damn everyone is going against trooper any more lol

arch has some mad funny shit and it was allnice except for the flow it was a little off. mults<alot and that good. complex rhymes were tight everything hit and it was a mad close battle. best line was: man you gettin crunched-and-then-soiled, How ya verse gonna mix when ya flow is vinegar and ya punches are oil?..
evident you can't elevate cuz all your spits are wack, cuz like "midgets" you can talk shit, but can't "say shit to my face!"...
i got it idk if anyone else did

troop nice flow but not to good in any thing else. good opener good closer. good vocab, and good mults but not feeling the ""'s. best line: Stop the Speculations~Your Not in Nomination 2 run 4 Domination
Your Attributes Unheard of Like R kelly Legal Age sexual Relations

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