RymheReaper vs big_boy
 

Battle Rules: its a topical on ur life as a druggy. GOOD LUCK

5- UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 05:12 PM

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RymheReaper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 05:13 PM.

big_boy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 05:15 PM.

Yo my weed smokin ass started at and AGE//
when all my pops thought my life was gonna FADE//
But now I have this animal living in my MIND//
that tells me that all my drugs is takin up my TIME//
I know my life is gonna END//
But I need to be thrown into the PIN//

Yo ma eyes goin red ma life goin dead ma carcuss lays ina-jail-bed
Yo spend all ma money one drugs child support how I-be-fed
I be flatlined At banks no money I be denied Try to go to college dey say im a druggy and get declined
Yo wish at a star that I quit but I take a shot and smoke sum pot
Ma body crashes full of suspence tha chances of death are imence life gon waz ma consequence

uppin

Vote mutha fukas

ok people we are open for votes and yo they are not mutha fuckers but they are my peeps. ;)

Voted For: RymheReaper

this battle was wack and wasnt even worth my time but u kno wha im gunna pick rhyme cuz ur vocab was ova tha top compared to his(age fade mind time end pin) no word is over four letters thats sad cmon now big u can do a lil better

vote=rhymereaper

uppin yo

uppin

Yo uppin

Voted For: RymheReaper

well nun the less rhymereaper took it wit ease RR gets a 7/10
prettygood bigboy wahta raper name lol but he had shitty ass lines 2 year old rhymes lol to start it off 3/10.
v/rhymereaper
return the favour in my battle vs mookie in my sig please peace no hate votes eather

Voted For: big_boy

wow neva seen a 5 line topical b4 lol

hmmm
the outkast dude takes this
even tho he had a basic rhyme sceme
and flowed better

explained^^^

Voted For: RymheReaper

Aight, Not The Strongest Battle...

Big Boy, No Offence, Ya Rhyme Was Pretty Ass n I Couldnt Really Make Any Sense Out Of It...

But now I have this animal living in my MIND//
that tells me that all my drugs is takin up my TIME//
^^^
That Was An Aight Line Tho..

Keep Elevatin Big Boy, You'll Come Good With Practice n Elevation..

Rymhe, This Aint The Strongest Verse I Seen U Type, U Got This Battle Tho Caause Of Ya Multies n Metas....

The Last 3 Lines Nearly Let U Down, But Keep Elevatin...

Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles

P E A C E

Voted For: RymheReaper

I liked your verse cause you had abit of a story going on. Close battle..both of you should have showed abit more so the battle could of been judged abit better by me. Your structure wasn't all that great but you got the win. Big Boy was right on dat ass though. Nice battle. Return da favor and peep my battle.

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Voted For: RymheReaper

i have to go with rhyme cause his was more deep and on point yo nice

Yo ma eyes goin red ma life goin dead ma carcuss lays ina-jail-bed
Yo spend all ma money one drugs child support how I-be-fed
// nice mayne paintin an picture believing dat u was there

I be flatlined At banks no money I be denied Try to go to college dey say im a druggy and get declined
Yo wish at a star that I quit but I take a shot and smoke sum pot
Ma body crashes full of suspence tha chances of death are imence life gon waz ma consequence
// aight da last bar was good nice, nice closa

Yo my weed smokin ass started at and AGE//
when all my pops thought my life was gonna FADE//
// its good when u talkin about life on da opener

But now I have this animal living in my MIND//
that tells me that all my drugs is takin up my TIME//
// ok nice u tumble a lil bit (off da topic)

I know my life is gonna END//
But I need to be thrown into the PIN//
// ehhhh not an good closa

so i gots to give dis to rhyme cuz he stayed on point

v-rhyme