Maku JaiiLiin vs Limited Edition
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 07:53 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 07:53 PM.

Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 06:11 PM.

Are you gonna show or what? Doesnt take long......

you to the slaughter I bring, herb, till aorta and things hurt//
from this part of his team, exposed as a lord of the rings nerd//*
ya couldn’t see my fist comin, now ya lip has been broke//
so the “blow” was unexpected,~ like a surprise shipment of coc//
If I’m seen packing heat, with the bullets to blast ya team//
I’ve killed one ya, I’d just need limited editions of magazines//**
Ya personal best, when I serve you a verb in a breath//
could turn to a mess, like epidermis from burners and teks//
externally wet, blood in turn stick ya shirt to ya chest//
and turn ya life into it’s second birth, before you learn that its death//
soften ya actions, cuz I’m too grimey and hard for you//
ya couldn’t be a rider, if bill gates cosigned on a car for you//
Defeating this lame, with a new lesson easy to gain//
I’ll reach in his brain, with bullets signatured, and teach him my name//

*dissing on that whack, frodo baggins post on poetic scriptures.
**i battled a member or former member of his crew named syck, and got a 5-0 win on him. the rest is a play on magazines, talking about magazines in a gun, using his name in it too. you get it. i don't need to shoot at him much.

Slept on....uppin'................................

Here's a battle that I really enjoyed.



Very nice punch.



LOL when I clicked the link.

I'mma keep this one real short.


Opener-Maku
Structure-Limited Edition
Punches-Maku
Multi-Maku
Closer-Limited Edition (That last line was pretty good.)

Final- Maku Jailin

Both have good battling skills, but Maku took it with more punches and personals, especially with that LOTR shit.

Keep battling both of you.

uppin 4 votes on this one............................................... ........................

Voted For: Limited Edition

Limited Edition gets my vote...nice punches they were pretty hard...and they landed...structure was in place...and not stretched-out..and a nice vocab...easy to read & all that....

A'ight...thx uppin this shit..............................

uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin'............................................ ..........

Voted For: Limited Edition

limited good ass ender the opener is good too i liked the manson bar lmao EXPOSED anyways i liked the whole flow and vocab was good disses and punches gave you a hot verse 7/10
maku good vocab good ass wordplay opener was corny FUCK YOU I LIKE LORD OF THE RINGS anyways the line was still decent that coc shit was whacked as fuck thoughthe verse was a lot of self glorification and i hate that punches and disses lacked they aint really hit work on disses and youll be dope cuz your wordplay and flow is good as fuck a 6/10
basically you lost cuz limited had better disses and punches and thats what wins battles

A'ight, thx...uppin' for this to be closed....................

Uppin this slept fuckin shit.......................

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

wow, nice verse both of you.....
maku~your verse had nice flow and structure, it was more in depth then LE's verse, and had creative punches as well, a good personal about the thread, but the other could have been better, because it was on a crew member, not him, but ok, i liked the opener a lot, it was a nice starter and you came into this with some intensity, i especially liked the last 3 lines and the funny punch "you couldnt be a rider if bill gates cosigned a car for you", funny line......
LE~you verse had good flow as well, kind of shoet but you siad a lot in it, with the personals, nice closer too, but i vote for maku because of his content and descriptive vocab.....nice job both

Uppin ' this slept on fuckin shit...what the hell is wrong with you people?

Uppin' this fuckin shit...Why the hell has it been slept on so much!? Come on get it closed...

Uppin'.

Uppin' on this slept shit...for fuck sakes........

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Aiight here we go......
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Opener-Limited
Closer-Maku
Punches-Maku
Personals-Limited
Multies-Maku
Structure-Limited
Metas-Maku
Overall Best Verse-Maku
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.aaight this is a very close battle as you can see....now i dont go for quanity over quality but it seemed like Maku had both of them......Limited if you would have came a lil harder you probly would have won.....Maku work on your structure it was relly the only thing wrong wit your verse..........oh and by the way i would like to see a round two between yall!!!!........V/maku

uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Werd, let's get this shit closed already...for fuck sakes people sleep on shit...

uppin on this one

uppin............................................. ........................

Fuck, let's get this bitch closed..................

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

aight
close battle.......
real close...
limited ya had some hella nice wordplay, finisher didnt come strong, but overall ya flow an punches were pretty decent...
just needed that finisher to kill him off, but it didnt come...

maku, ya verse was solid as hell, opend it kinda well, an the finisher was tight! punches landed an the personals hit hard, for overral lyrical content maku got this battle...

no hate an return the fave

This was feedback posted for Maku JaiiLiin
 

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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 

checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573

This was feedback posted for Maku JaiiLiin
 

maku ur verse fuckin sucks quit rappin..ur wack

uppin ......................................

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uppin 4 votes on this shit............................

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin


...A'yo...

Like your battles...ya blinds need to be closed...
Keep to yaself...nobody wants anotha geek exposed
4/10
Ya gotta fucked up name...wat is a Maku Jailiin..?
Must be part of the reason you have a pic of Marylin Mansen
4/10
What are the Omens..? Bunch of rappers who are Gothic?
With faces so cold and pale...how can you drop hot shit?
2/10
I know I have shocked you...in a way that you cant breathe...
The only fact that I'm ill backs up...

..."I am what you Can't Be"...
2/10

2 much self glorification
vocab wasent there
and ya drop structure was off
seems like u were tryin 2 freestyle not battle
metas werent there
had ok similies
good personals


you to the slaughter I bring, herb, till aorta and things hurt//
from this part of his team, exposed as a lord of the rings nerd//
4/10*
ya couldn’t see my fist comin, now ya lip has been broke//
so the “blow” was unexpected,~ like a surprise shipment of coc//
If I’m seen packing heat, with the bullets to blast ya team//
I’ve killed one ya, I’d just need limited editions of magazines//
5/10**
Ya personal best, when I serve you a verb in a breath//
could turn to a mess, like epidermis from burners and teks//
4/10
externally wet, blood in turn stick ya shirt to ya chest//
and turn ya life into it’s second birth, before you learn that its death//
3/10
soften ya actions, cuz I’m too grimey and hard for you//
ya couldn’t be a rider, if bill gates cosigned on a car for you//
2/10
Defeating this lame, with a new lesson easy to gain//
I’ll reach in his brain, with bullets signatured, and teach him my name//
2/10

Ya vocab was beter
ya structure was bad
ya punches were ok
had a lil self glorification
Personals were alot better

Maku for better personals and better punches

This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 

checkin polllllllllsssssssssssssssssss......... decent drops....

This was feedback posted for Maku JaiiLiin
 

just vewin polls... good battle to both of yall... close to call

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin