String9487 vs CODEE
 

Battle Rules:
15 bars max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 11:54 PM

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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 11:26 PM.

CODEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 11:27 PM.

aight man let's see what u got go head do yo thing.
I'm bout to own u man like a lil puppet on a "string."
u somewhat of a nobleman and I am the righteous king.
I'm like a bumble bee I'm cornered and I'm ready to sting.
I don't sing but got a heater that'll make u stay "N'Sync."
My rhymes will lyrically cripple u put yo whole body in a sling.
So come on dog let's hear somethin we ain't bout to mingle.
Yeah I knew yo punk ass was fake somethin like Kris Kringle.
So go get yo ass a hot fresh donut from some Krispy Kreme.
Only time u get sticky is when eatin one or havin a wet dream.
And my best bet is they ain't nothin but bitches on your team.
Come on at me man and I'll send u straight off into heaven.
but Hell is your only choice so get ready to burn "string9487."
I'm gonna make this battle count so I'm takin ya ass down.
and don't come back at me beggin to go for another round.

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING

punk ass niggas is walkin out...

eh yo
i was better than u about 3 years back
ya girl pumped full of white stuff like an Eclaire snack(ooooh)
u aint hot son, u wacker than all who spit
n got dissed mo times than that nigga Ja rule did(hahaa)
a pool of blood is what U fall in
u can "scratch" this match like u hit tha cue ball in
u must b frustrated cuz ya lead wont squrit
my punches pop i hope u got meds for ya hurt
dog i'll put ya head in tha dirt
wit red blotches on ya T like u spilled "CODEE" red on ya shirt
u a liar watch the truth get told
dis nigga codee get stepped on more than my shoe insole
homie the tech spray will bless ya chest
no stress ova u, u a defect at best
ima block ya bars, n deflect tha rest
Febreeze tha bullets, n Codee b "fresh" to death(oooooh)
ima spit fire, watch me rip this boy
only time u "turn heads" is when u flip a coin
ya shits destroyed, homie the clips a toy
if u copped a Megaphone u still couldnt "bring tha noise"
dis nigga aint on my level, bump u dude
u so wack a desperate hooker wouldnt even "fuck" wit u
HAAAAAAAAAA

n thas what we call a wrap

uppin for votes these punches about puppets r gettin played out freall lol

Voted For: String9487

This battle was over from the beginning

String-"ima block ya bars, n deflect tha rest
Febreeze tha bullets, n Codee b "fresh" to death"
you had me sayin ooohhhh a couple times outloud during this shit man, keep up that sick shit.. consistent, every bar hit hard
CODEE-You didn't really have any punches that effected the way you were gettin ripped, no hate but you really need to elavate

uppin for votes these punches about puppets r gettin played out freall lol

Voted For: String9487

not bad string but i still beat ya Vote: string9487

uppin for votes let's see those votes comin in here keep them honest

uppin for votes these punches about puppets r gettin played out freall lol
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Voted For: String9487

ok codee good structure and flow and your punches and disses still need work but thier getting better vocab is ok a 4/10
string good opener diss good ass flow wordplay was on point and punches were ok as well as disses thats what gave you a better verse here 6/10

uppin for votes these punches about puppets r gettin played out freall lol
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uppin for votes these punches about puppets r gettin played out freall lol
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Voted For: String9487

i got to give this to string he had betta wordplay and personals i like the codee red line codee ur verse was good too but u need betta punches and more personals no hate but string took this fair and square

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uppin for votes these punches about puppets r gettin played out freall lol
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Voted For: String9487

I think 'string' took this one with more consistency. I think he came hard from start to finish, and never fell off. He had some nice punches in there that connected well.

Codee- had a nice flow. He had some nice punches in there. But i think he fell off near the end, so i couldnt give him the vote. Good Battle

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