shake-spear vs codee
 

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Check in by: 08-31-04 at 12:43 AM

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CODEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 06:13 PM.

Well let's see another battle and this bitch bout to get took down.
U say that your not from the circus but to me u look like a shook clown.
and u also say that u don't like shit but why is your mouth so brown.
Tryin to pull it off sayin u was eatin brownies when u was packin fudge.
All this shit I'm sayin is to bring u down but still yet there is no grudge.
and your rhymes are shitty like u straight spittin some cow dung.
U slid down your hand down a man's pants when LL said get a "headsprung."

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 07:13 PM.

ok ok ok ok ok check it

yo ima be known as a hacker the way i break-"Codees"/(codes)
cause he still wouldnt win if he hacked into the system and changed-votes/
so sit back and take-notes stupid u might learn-sumtin/
dis hilbily and his sister prolly grab a goat and take turns-fuckin/
and i dont mean to stereotype virginia but hey im not the only-one/
u gon have bout 6 losses after this im still gon have only-one/
but no matter the outcome you should feel proud for trien/
cause it dont matter if u win or lose lol nevamind im lien/
dis dude a virgin unless u count his sista, has to look at my avy to see-butt/
u should be happy u the "head" of somtin ur "Co" of "dee"'z-nuts/
he gotta be-nuts to think u wasnt gonna lose/
trun dis dude to a ghost to fit ya style cause all u get is boo's/


lol its stupid cause i think u suck hopefully i didnt underestamate u

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uppin 4 votes let's see'em comin in here keep'em honest

Voted For: shake-spear

weak battle but if i have to vote i vote for shake because he had betta wordplay, punches, multis, prettymuch everything he took this battle wit ease codee was weak.

oh and vote on my battle too me verse nomercy be honost

uppin 4 votes bring'em and oh yeah keep the shit honest aight

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Voted For: shake-spear

Yo shake, pretty nice... u put down some funny shit, 'n had a good flow 'n personals...

both yall g'luck.

^^
i didn't mean to vote That was meant as feedback damnit.

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Voted For: CODEE

Yo man CLOSE CLOSE battle in here

Peep mine return the favor dog

(cod)
Well let's see another battle and this bitch bout to get took down.
U say that your not from the circus but to me u look like a shook clown.<<BEST line in match

(shake) U came weak

yo ima be known as a hacker the way i break-"Codees"/(codes)
cause he still wouldnt win if he hacked into the system and changed-votes/
(Nice but codee killed it)

Multis :Cod

Overall CODEE

Vote:"Codee

Return the favor

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Voted For: shake-spear

alright, props to both here, but here's the verdict.

codee-good effort, i can see that you are new to this, just keep at it. the problem was rhyme scheme in this one. the third line had no following line to rhyme with it. you just jumped into a new rhyme. sometimes this is good to hear on a track if it is done right, but unfortunately in your case it was not done right. points off for that. The flow was jumbled, but your structure was decent.

shake-spear- you had this one on better punches and flow
yo ima be known as a hacker the way i break-"Codees"/(codes)
cause he still wouldnt win if he hacked into the system and changed-votes/

nice opener.
this verse wasn't spectacular, but it wasn't just average either, it waas a good all around verse

u should be happy u the "head" of somtin ur "Co" of "dee"'z-nuts/
great personal.
so with good punches, and personals, you get this one.

thanks for the vote uppppin..........................

Voted For: shake-spear

shake spear took this one...his punches were harder...he had betta flow...and structure...

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Voted For: shake-spear

well damn i wasnt feelin the flow really until second to last bar that was nasty lol that pretty much won teh whole battle for wit the personal about Co of dee z nuts lol that was hot son
both structure was ight
code's flow was pretty basic n unimaginative really so ima give this to spear bcuz of that personal at the end and punches hit harder
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Voted For: shake-spear

I go wit shakes-spear. Good verse some ight wordplay n punches,good structure also.

Codee, ya verse was ight but there was no fire,no aggresivness. u had no good punches.. RESPECT to both MCs