phive vs String9487
 

Battle Rules:

10 bars max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 02:15 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 01:46 AM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 01:59 AM.

okay i know why this guy chose me ta battle cuz im the only mc that dont shake a rattle,

string you know i flow wit style and your scared cuz you know you rap will crumble like a porcelain tile,

this bitch is scared of me cuz he knows i dont die easily cuz i aint no damn easy-e

you wanna step up ill smack you down you think your winnin this really im the one wit the crown,

hey string come on outta the shade you wanna battle me your gonna fall like the trade,

you think your lyrics are ill and sick well im gonna feed off ya blood like a 7 foot tick,

im your god obey me bitch or ill cut ya throat good luck wit a stitch

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING

eh yo ya guts get cut up like a pie in ya middle
u couldnt "handle" String wit Iverson's dribble
he so desperate he paid me to battle him
fuck it, u get "phive" shots in ya abdomen
my raps a sin, i'll burn u, and half ya men
but wait! back.. to.. him
i aint lyin u get popped more than a pack of as-per-rin
if the world was like u we'd all start bitin
my punches make ya head roll back like wal-mart prices

hold up i need to post tha rest my comp froze up
im too brit to outshine, like luminescence
u spit like the birdman this dudes pathetic
me lose forget it, ya rhymes n pencil can split it
only place u need to check in is a mental clinic
u crazy thinkin u can win, u must b psycho
i cop hot toys, n not from RC or Tyco
ima drop these verse on ya head, my punches bombin ya chin
when tha tech "blows" at u, u'll b gone with the wind

Voted For: String9487

ya flow was decint ryhmes were ok n ya punchlines need a lil werk but u got dis battle in ya palm
vote=string

uppin for votes holla at the kid and i'll return the favor wit honest opinions

Voted For: String9487

ok phive ok vocab flow and structure was off and punches or disses aint hit 2/10
string ok verse punches and disses were ok i liked the ender opener was played vocab good flow was ok and structure was a little off still good verse but far from your best you slacked here 4/10

uppin for votes holla at the kid and i'll return the favor wit honest opinions

uppin for votes holla at the kid and i'll return the favor wit honest opinions
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uppin for votes holla at the kid and i'll return the favor wit honest opinions
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Voted For: String9487

lol string got my vote cause phive had very weak punches his struct and flow was off had no good wordplay if any and no multis on the other hand string had some alright punches some good multis good flow and that obvously means that string gets my vote

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uppin for votes holla at the kid and i'll return the favor wit honest opinions
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Voted For: String9487

open: 6/10
close: 3/10
personals: 5/10
metas: 4/10
punches: 6/10
multis: 8/10

win:string

for the other cat phive:
open: 0/10
close: 1/10
personals: 4/10
metas: 0/10
punches: 2/10
multis: 2/10

yall return the favour in one of my battles in my sig peace

uppin for votes holla at the kid and i'll return the favor wit honest opinions

Voted For: String9487

String'z gets my vote...his punches was just harder den phive's tha structure was 'ok'...and tha flow was pretty decent...phive yo shit was pretty decent too....tha punches could've been a littler harder and you would've gotten my vote...and tha flow was 'ok' too...