tha flash vs Feeble.
 

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6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 04:18 AM

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Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 03:52 AM.

Feeble. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 03:53 AM.

I'm Letting Slugz Fly From The 45 Into Ya Head,
And Letting Ya Blood Run Faster Then Sars Spread//
My Glock Will Leave Ya Body Bleeding And Throbbing,
U A Faggot So U Sweeter Then Baskin Robbins//
Fuck 31 Flavors I'll Kill U And Ya 31 Neighbors,
And Leave Shackles On Ya Ass Like U Was Part Of The Slave Labor//
Ya Niggas Need To Guard Ya For Safe Keep,
Cause The Next Time They See U You'll Be Smoking Just Liked Baked Meat//
And I'll Leave U In The Past Just Like Jojo And K-ci,
Or Have Ya Ass Disappear Like Scott Did Laci//
I'm Setting Ya Ass Up Like Furman Did Oj,
And Leaving Ya Head Spun And Scrathed Like A Record From Kayslay//
My Punchlines Hit At High Speeds,
And Leave Ya Ass Laid In The Hospital Hooked Up To Iv's So Don't Fucking Try Me//
Cause I'll Knock Ya Ass Out Like A Punch From Ali,
U A Track And I'm Gonna Run U Like A Trolly//
I'm So Nice Cause I Got The Skills Of A Vet,
And I'll Leave U With Cotton Mouth Like Pills In Ya Neck//
Cause I'm Thrilled With The Checks I Recieve,
The Lead Flying Towards Ya Mouth Will Make The Inside Of Ya Neck Bleed//

u can't win, cant come close, we all know ive had it dude
cuz like distance from the equator. . its just ya L - atitude
if i was as bad as U, i'd quit cuz the win is fast secured
ur like a peasant w/ a little land, i'll turn it to a Mass Acre
& im trashing your whole battlin son- what u guessin at?
lightning strikes twice - the flash does even less than that
my wesson's strapped to do damage & ravage this hoe
and i dont even need to put this slut on damage control
sit in a hammock & go to sleep, ya been dry, pout ..
i'll turn ya ideas inside out after turnin ya insides out

Voted For: Tha Flash

both verses were well structured and flowed well but what i think made the diferrence here was the length and the conitinous flow of flashes verse it kept me interested throughout the whole verse....even thought both verses were pretty much predictable and didnt show any signs of complexity or superb wordplay...
some advice for both battlers is to be more creative....but besides the point my vote goes to ThaFlash for continues flow and good structure......

Vote: Tha Flash

This was feedback posted for Feeble.
 

nice verse homie. peepin the polls. but nice battle.

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uppin for votes people come on, vote up on this, we'll return the favor

Voted For: Feeble.

Cool battle
I'd gotta go with feeble on this because his wordplay was good and creative also he had nice cool and funny personals and ok punches you had goood flow and ya structure was great nice creativity and worplay

Flash: it was ok but i wasnt feeling your verse as much as feebles , yours had some ok punches and decent personald but ya flow is not that good and so was ya strucute

Vote: feeble

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Voted For: Tha Flash

FLASH, FLASH, FLASH.....took this one with ease!!!!
opener - flash
closer - flash
flow - flash
punchez - flash
v/ FLASH, man no hater votez but he took this all the way

Voted For: Tha Flash

flash cause i thought his verse was better n i don't believe ive read the exact same lines elsewere......!!!!

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Voted For: Tha Flash

like ya style... but i know that you can come a lil' bit harder then that...my vote is for you