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Shake-spear vs LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-30-04 at 04:31 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:04 AM.
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shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:11 AM.
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Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it//
But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"// My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards// Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers// After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights// This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”// Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck// Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”// After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin// This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s// |
check on check one twodis dude a fake gangsta all he gon do is talk bout killin-me/
he could take novacaine to say he dope and he would still be feelin-me/ but its ok im ya idol and i aint mean to kill-ya-hope/ its gon be a "mirikal" if dis wack emcee get-a-vote/ im da type ta leave ya bones pokin out like u was mad skinny/ broke ass, ya pockets stay low on presidents like monica lewinski/ he talk bout guns and shit bout we all know he dont own-no-Tecs/ and from the look of things he prolly down wit homo-sex/ so stop talkin bout guns cause im quick ta smack a kid/ he wouldnt be runnin shit if his name was laxitive/ i know not that good bout i did it in 6mins |
i did mine in 14 but none the less good drop
lets get some votes |
nice verse i like it sorry i came weak but u caught me in the middle of anotha battle so i was in a rush on both them
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its kool just get some votes that all.....hit me up tommorow and well do a round 2
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uppin for some votes do so and ill return the favor just send me the link
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still uppin for votes....if you want votes on your battles send me the links...pace n wun
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
ok shakespere that opener was whacked as fuck i liked the monica line that was slick good flow but punches and disses lacked hard and that hurt you a 3/10 lrical good ass flow and wordplay ok vocab that defeat line is played out hard but your other punches and disses were decent and that took this for you a 5/10 |
Voted For: shake-spear
I vote for you because dude is a biter... LyrikalMirikal: Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it// But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"// My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards// Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers// Quote:
After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights// This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”// Quote:
Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck// Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”// After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin// This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s// Quote:
biter biter biter...consider yourself banned... |
thx for votin .................... and does this mean we still acceptin votes
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
LM Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it// But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"// ^woah, nice My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards// Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers// ^yeah bitch!(you gettin me hyped) After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights// This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”// ^he killin em so far Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck// Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”// ^didn't register for me After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin// ^decent This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s// The finisher sucked because you lost the flow you had goin from the beginning. But this was a cool verse overall. Strong. S-S check on check one twodis dude a fake gangsta all he gon do is talk bout killin-me/ he could take novacaine to say he dope and he would still be feelin-me/ ^HORRIBLY stretched but like the way you was goin with it. but its ok im ya idol and i aint mean to kill-ya-hope/ its gon be a "mirikal" if dis wack emcee get-a-vote/ ^weak cornball ish im da type ta leave ya bones pokin out like u was mad skinny/ broke ass, ya pockets stay low on presidents like monica lewinski/ ^decent, or maybe just below decent he talk bout guns and shit bout we all know he dont own-no-Tecs/ and from the look of things he prolly down wit homo-sex/ ^very weak. so stop talkin bout guns cause im quick ta smack a kid/ he wouldnt be runnin shit if his name was laxitive/ ^clincher... last line held the weight of this. Lyrikal wins this just overall better skill displayed. shakes rushed his that's why his is lacking to lyrikals. |
thx for votin ....................................so i guess this battle is still gon count
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no it wont..go to battle forum problems here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=111970 and give them the link to this battle and tell them he bit his verse and you want the win...theyll erase his votes and give you the 5-0 win
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Both sucked bad i'm being honest, u guyz need to elevate, sum lines from both of u didn't even rhyme, structure was better with lyrikal, punches go to shakespear, flow goes to lyrikal, lyrikals made more sense but shakespear had better nworldplay but i'ma give vote to lyrikal...very weak battle. |
if im a biter i would atleast bite good shit i used some old recycled lines from over year ago when i was on nbs.com under the name j-high.......why would i bite weak shit u guys make me laugh i love rapverse lol
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
LyRiKaLMiRiKaL killed shake-spear...i mean..his punches were harder..his flow was good..tha structure was in place and not strected out...and all 2gether LyRiKaL killed it.. |
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