Abstrakt vs * Word *
 

Battle Rules:

Topical Battle.

Topic : Abstrakts Mom



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-04 at 10:36 AM

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* Word * has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 10:37 AM.

Abstrakt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 10:41 AM.

I shit in Abstrakts moms mouth daily.

It all started about 5 years ago.. when Abstrakt was just a twitch in my nutsack.

Rather than just piss down her throat.. I though I'd get creative.. and poured last nights curry into her mouth.

She still chokes quite a bit.. but I'm sure she'll get used to it.

I once strangled her with my pubic hair.. which was fun at the time.. but now I seem a bit sparse down below.

.. back to 5 years ago.

After filming the dog fucking Ab's mom for a few hours.. I noticed a little dribble of doggy sperm on the bed.. which I mixed with my own.

I then proceeded to add to this already toxic mixture.. my saliva.. and some grease that I took from Ab's moms bathtub.

A few mins later I re-entered the room.. and shot the sperm mixture into her wide hole using a football pump.

She had already passed out by now.. so I took her money and jewellery and set fire to the house.

I guess she was rescued.. as the doggy sperm baby is here.. as Abstrakt himself.

Aside from having biohazard body odour.. Abstrakts mom is also quite a swimmer.

Last spotted on the coast on Portugal.. she laid on her back.. doing the breaststroke while climaxing.. shooting a huge spray of lady juice into the sky.

Many fisherman watched this happen.. and said 'Well!!!!'.. which over the years has been mis-interperated as 'Whale'.

This is how we have the common myth of a 'sperm whale'. It all originated with Abstrakts mom.

Another common myth.. again.. mis-interperated is the shaving incident.

After a weekend camping, and without shaving for two days.. she was spotted by some hunters.. who nicknamed her 'Bigfoot'.

Alas.. it is just a mis-understanding.

A few years ago.. I had the pleasure of meeting this strange young lady again.. and proceeded to plunge a fire poker into her rectum.

As per usual.. she passed out.. and seemed to be convolting.. altho this cannot be confirmed. Maybe she was just cold eh?

I still try and keep in touch.

I write to her at her home address.. but alleyways have no postboxes.. so I doubt she ever gets my correspondance.
I did recieve word from the police department that she still has sex with animals.. usually when high on a cocktail of dirt and puddle water.

Thats basically what I know of her..

chavs own you yo.

Gimme 50p bruv.

Went Poetic On This...
Used That Type Of Structure...
.One.


No, Noooo, STOP IT!
LEAVE ME ALONE!
Noo, No
Pleeeeeeeease! Just Stop IIIIIIIIIIIT!
I CANT FUCKING HANDLE THIS PRESSURE!

*Sitting Ina Mental Instatution*
With my thoughts scattered in such a dessarea what am I to do?
My burdens girth grows of a weight forwich my shoulders no longer can hold or push threw
Pushed back and forth, I the rope to this game of tug-a-war between the sane and insane
And in times past this piece of rope belittle to thread has been shattered as if glass from pain (Window Pane)
The fragle mindset for wich I rest broken
never to be placed into a formation supassing the abstract moment
This mind of such brilliance trapt within its self
with nothing more then time when all I wish for is the few seconds of choice wasted in on the past's shelf

No, Noooo, STOP IT!
LEAVE ME ALONE!
Noo, No
Pleeeeeeeease! Just Stop IIIIIIIIIIIT!
WHY WONT THESE VISIONS JUST GO AWAY!

*Flashing Back To A Past Event*
Holding my mothers hand as if a brace to a cripple
In my inocents the visions blurred within my perefrial was such a frighting scene for wich I stood in the middle
I hold my mothers hand titer because she was my security in a world of such curruption and stife
Walking by, my mother see's a co-worker, to me he looks like just another seedy criminal type
She tells me to wait as she goes to talk over some buisness
Waching my mother speak I grasp my self titely amist this
Turned and faced the other direction because I was told to watch my back
Feel so alone at this moment, a lost boy in a place where only a man could survive it's grasp
Then suddenly a ear piercing sound shattered my thoughts
As I looked around I saw my mother laying on the ground entangled in shots
Her once peaceful yet vibrent face was now filled with strife and the color of death
As I broke down into tears, as strand by strand the threads to this rope were so violently ripped away by each breath

No, Noooo, STOP IT!
LEAVE ME ALONE!
Noo, No
Pleeeeeeeease! Just Stop IIIIIIIIIIIT!
WHY CANT I ESCAPE THE PAST!

*Re-gains Conciousness In A Violent Sweat*
My past once again strangling my attemps to procede with my life
As I attemp to slip into my own thought once again, but this time to find peace in the light
Into the darkest spots of my mentals I reach out to a quiet oasis in a dessert of angst
My place of tranquillity where my pain in the form of water still yet beating at my freedoms pace
A place rapped in a orange hase to keep my thoughts from sinking into another dark depression
Were cotton clouds just barely brace the weight of my painful pasts re-runining sessions
As I take form, myself the rocks but not by choice
The one aspect I could not re-arange because not even I couldn't make my mind believe I could ever move from my current posistion filling these voids
But here I sit just waiting for my own demonds to break through serenity voice.

Pssh.

You missed the deadline yo.. unlucky.

I still beat that trash anyway.

Voted For: Abstrakt

Seriously, this battle was a fuckin' joke. lol

Word, you had some lines that made me laught, but yo flow and structure were all off. But damn, man, be more serious about this shit lol.

Abstrackt, you had a vrery nice piece. You actually took this shit serious, unlike Word. lol But yea, it was real deep, and I liked the flow that was in it. Very nice job, man. Tight shit. You got this easily.

v/Abs

I bet you enjoyed reading mine more tho yeah?

Gimme 50p bruv.

yea, lol I did. funny shit, but you kno it jus didn't work for a topical, you kno? lol but still funny ass shit. lol

I'll eat your brains.

Voted For: Abstrakt

man this was one sided.

-Ab

fluent, flow was good. transitions could be lil betta, creative i liked it...story tellin...nice way.


Word- u did pretty good neva seen yo stuff before. but u could have put them together differently so ppl could understand. flow was on and off, not creative, transition was there...overall aight drop

Voted For: * Word *

*dies*

ommfg!.. this was strait illin` yo!

damn at the `twitch in my nutsack` line.. i get that all the time.. rest was dope.. great storyline an the imagery was graphic yet deep an meaningful.. you get my vote.

^^^...
You Dummass You Can't Vote...
You're Both In The Same Crew Shit Stupid...
That Doesnt Count...
.One.

Gimme 50p bruv.

I own you.. get used to it.

Chavs will take any of you retards down.. and use your credit cards for months yo.

Voted For: Abstrakt

Abstrakt......you took this all the way.....i loved your shit even tho it was stetched......the other dude was wack and his verse was played......not creative at all.......i mean it didn't even rhyme lol.....i like the way you made yours more poetry than hip hop.....it was tight......smooth......i enjoyed reading it.....everything was tight man keep that shit up

*Word* you were so fuckin wack in this........your shit was played.......not even intresting......didn't rhyme at all......i didn't like it.......it was horrible......i didn't like your verse at all......it was boring and sooooooo predictable....man elevate.......not a little man......ELEVATE a lot

V/Abstrakt

return the favor and vote on my battle......it needs votes.......thanx!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Abstrakt

ha.. Word.. What can I say.. There was no rhyming in your drop.. You need... Nah fuck it your beyond needing elevation.. Just uhh, learn to rhyme??

Abstrakt, Your right it was more poetic than normal rhyming.. But in a topical that is what makes the verse good.

This wasnt even a competition..

Vote- Abstrakt

So you want some?

Bring it.

I'll Chav you all to death.

Gimme 50p bruv.

This was feedback posted for * Word *
 

checkin this out..

Voted For: Abstrakt

Hmm Abs u got this...and pretty easy too ya know...word ur verse was wack mom lines are played so when u dissed Abstacts mom in a topical...u kinda dug ur own grave really...plus u had no real point in ur topical no structure flow rhyming it lacked and im being modest...

...Abs nice verse nuff said