NoMercy vs sin
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Recycling
No Biting
just spit some shit freindly battle

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-04 at 08:50 PM

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NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 09:01 PM.

freestyle here for ya also i went 2 lines over limit o well heres the song:

i aint a bitch like you that thinks hes from the hood/
but cant even spit harder pronouns then me, you aint no good/.
I aint a fronten bitch with gats and bombs, but one thing I got is a knive/
So after you get caught stealin from me I will be at yer place waiting for you to arrive/.
Take you out with one stab to the gut/
Now yer fucked cant do nothing, so I could fuck yer bitch, cuz shes a slut/.
Even kno its true your bitch is a slut/
I make her scream its so big, and you in the back sayin what!/.
After that I slit yer trought you dirty fuck/
Cut your ass off, leave you in the back to rot and hope god gives you no luck/.
Cuz you goin to hell hope the devil don’t be a rank hater/
But who the hell cares you just a wanksta that’s a harsh faker/.

sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 09:05 PM.

yo im new here and i got to show niggas im not wack/
so no mercey perpare to fallback/
ima youngcat but i tell u ya done/
but a shottie to ya face nigga come get ya head sprong/
ive had many battles and my gunz wont more/
my gunz not dancin but they a have lean back to da floor/
my blade a cut ya face just like dis dude/
i lace ya ass up and rock ya face on my shoe/
if my spit dont hurt u mercey keep safe/
cause yall be under da ground wit a stone fuckin face/

holla

sin
 

nice battle son i got to give it to u but lets wait

lol ^ wack realy i didnt even spit good haha this si a weak battle lol

uppin lets get some votes

Voted For: NoMercy

nomercy had nicer flow...this was a weak battle though you both should've tried ta get personal n more complex in your lines...fix structure/even out your lines n ya'll should get better...

i am better then this im playing around with these bitches to show them the real nomercy later

This was feedback posted for sin
 

Ight Youngsta You Got A Flow, But Where Are You Taking Me?

Holla At Cha Boy

^what the fuck get outta here goof you dont even got any wins or loses and yer calling him young hes 16 and im better lol

are you serious... get the hell outta here... im callin' him youngster cuz of age. don't get it twisted, i aint scared to battle BUT i havent found a worthy apponent... holla at cha boy...

2 more posts after this... and its on... im getting excited

This was feedback posted for NoMercy
 

this battle is wack!!!!

im not freepostin or hatin..I cant even deem this a worthy battle,so no vote for a unworthy battle.

Voted For: sin

i voted for sin because he had a punchline atleast and his flow was betta this battle was weak but i thinks in won it by a long shot

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no mercey you wack as shit dont ever say u betta then me ur younger then me but i merked ur ass u stupid if u thing that u beat me u a dumass actually battle me again i promise u ur going down. u said spit a friendly battle dats what i did nigga u weak as shit i could beat the fuck out of u fuckin youngcat. no one want to join ya weak as crew plus i just started last year and i got a real group wit a producer and shit u wack u just a dumrapper scared to battle punk ass nigga take a fuckin nap bitch

Voted For: NoMercy

Nomercy had alot more flow to his, both had no good punches,..Mercys stuff just made more sence, not much else going down i just think yall need play with ya words, and try to use better vocab 'actin hard online Aint shit' be a comedian in ya verses aight..

Vote No.

Voted For: NoMercy

yo man u killed it tha flow was nice n tha ryhmes was tight ya gettin sum nice vocab but need alil more n ya punchlines killin it so....
vote=nomercy

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Voted For: NoMercy

no mercy took it with more punches...his flow was decent...but the structure was a little off...


sin didnt have da same energy dat no mercy had...not as many punches...didnt attack hard enough...gave it to no mercy

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Voted For: NoMercy

even tho this was a wack battle nomercy gets my vote cuz he had harder punches than sin and they connected...structure was a little stretchy..and the wordplay was ok

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wheres all my votes i had a win?

uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

ight, Ima vote No Mercy jus for the sle fact that he brought a basic style mixed with some multis..

The structure n metas go to Sin but the way the punches hit with the more focus on Mercy deff. Could have gone either way, but with flo, punches, n mets Nomercy takes it..

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yo upppin

Voted For: NoMercy

yo im new here and i got to show niggas im not wack/
so no mercey perpare to fallback/
[No punch, never talk about yourself on a battle]
ima youngcat but i tell u ya done/
but a shottie to ya face nigga come get ya head sprong/
[No punch, mayb a lil one.. but deminute]
ive had many battles and my gunz wont more/
my gunz not dancin but they a have lean back to da floor/
[Makes no sence, once again talking about your self]
my blade a cut ya face just like dis dude/
i lace ya ass up and rock ya face on my shoe/
[This was better, but still wack]
if my spit dont hurt u mercey keep safe/
cause yall be under da ground wit a stone fuckin face/
[The 'fucking' made the punch fall, not good]

Complete though = 0.5

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i aint a bitch like you that thinks hes from the hood/
but cant even spit harder pronouns then me, you aint no good/.
[No punch, weak opener]
I aint a fronten bitch with gats and bombs, but one thing I got is a knive/
So after you get caught stealin from me I will be at yer place waiting for you to arrive/.
[Man This Was WaCC, But Better Than Before]
Take you out with one stab to the gut/
Now yer fucked cant do nothing, so I could fuck yer bitch, cuz shes a slut/.
[This whole fuck your bitch content = played]
Even kno its true your bitch is a slut/
I make her scream its so big, and you in the back sayin what!/.
[Slut and slut, repeating rhymes?.. no good]
After that I slit yer trought you dirty fuck/
Cut your ass off, leave you in the back to rot and hope god gives you no luck/.
[Still no punch, This was forced.. ugly]
Cuz you goin to hell hope the devil don’t be a rank hater/
But who the hell cares you just a wanksta that’s a harsh faker/.
[Weak ender, nothing good]

Complete though = 0.8

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WACKEST BATTLE EVER!.... Vote NM

Voted For: NoMercy

one-sided.. No Mercy had harder punches, better vocab sumwhat... structure sin took that category, creativity leans more to No Mercy with the pronoun.. portion very creative, both y'all need to elevate and No Mercy wathc your bar line cuz that could mean a win or lose in these battles.. good luck, y'all..
~wun~