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intensify effect vs schema
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4 bars (8 lines) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Stupid Voting Shit No Ducking...(accepting battle then not dropping...if youre scared hit decline) Put your money where your mouth is... LOSER PAYS WINNER 1000 RAPPERZ DOLLARS Ducking Counts As A Loss 200 posts to vote Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 08-30-04 at 11:31 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 11:11 PM.
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 11:17 PM.
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I’ll be shocked if he even gets my verse…
Our levels are so far apart, for battle calls he has to press one first *get it* never readin ya verses, so you best practice i'm your worst nightmare... so you'll wake up on a wet mattress *lol* floor schema wit advanced weaponry my damn telepathy will end a premonition so damn perplexingly.... Nastrodamus'll look like just some bearded man next to me *danm* on some sarcophogus shit when I splatter on ya flows can't out wit me if Egyptians started pullin brain matter outcha nose *ouch* dump this hoe 2 do the film industry a favor when I repel 'em cuz Kodak would go outta business.... trying to helpin' ya skill level develope BITCH*get it* BANG-BANG-EARLY..... i was sorda waiting for u...... |
it took us a while to find a council cat to verse you
sorry...its just eighty percent of our crew's done merked you... i know the truth hurts duke...but you came at me so Im not gon stop especially when ya records got more 5-0's then a donut shop... you not gon pop...youre garbage...nineteen losses do the math youve been here a month...that means youve gotten merked every day and a half... and when you back out this shit I want that thousand quick...pay yo bill if you aint scared then why you keep duckin shit like a tornado drill... in a tornado drill you duck and put your head between your legs...hes ducked like 50 battles...i know you get it... |
8 is almost the same as 12.... whatever I wont get it closed...
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I did 5 bars....
i always go 5 bars..... READ IT CAREFULLY ITS 5 BARS... TOSS ONE MORE N THERE IF U WANT TO BUT ITS GONNA STAY....... |
Voted For: intensify effect
wow........after this battle......and CS.....you'll be 15-31 lmao |
oops i meant feed back.....take that vote off.....i
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This was feedback posted for schema
Nice drop should be a no brainer.
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Still 0-0 cause Ecko ment his as feedback I was wondering bout that.
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^^^^^ u only sticking up for ya teamate but u know danm well he's verse wasnt no-where near as good as my verse......
upp'in |
ha...whatever you say...lets get some votes
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upp'in this joint for some vote i will retunr the favor......
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
hot damn dawg... cant read words... i have a problem with them could i get a tutor lesson
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yo plez no feed back only votes man......
only votes....... |
vote!....conichiwa bitches.......
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Upp"im!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Voted For: schema
Schema gets my vote hea...his punches were just plain~out harder than effect's...tha "ninteen loss" shit..crack'd a grin on my face...but anyway he had harder punches...a pretty~nice flow...tha structure was kinda good..and tha vocab was nice...(Eazy 2 Read)... |
Voted For: schema
DAMN yo schema came right out atchu dawg im hafta go wit him he killin it tha flow was crazy n tha rhymes was burnin hot. he had sum nice vocab n punchlines were killa to so... vote=schema Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in this joing...................................
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Voted For: intensify effect
I.E. got diss battle his wordplay was good his vocab was sik n he had a pretty nice flow wit his structure Schema yo shit hit 2 I.E. just had a lil edge over u wit da vocab he used but i liked ur personals dat shit was funny good battle ya vote on da battles in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
intensify effect won dis shit...he had betta punches...structure...wordplay and flow...
his verse was just plain betta... gave to I.E.... |
Voted For: schema
I’ll be shocked if he even gets my verse… Our levels are so far apart, for battle calls he has to press one first *get it* honetly, i don't get it, and i won't rack my brain to try, u should of made it simple, simplicity is king.. 5/10 never readin ya verses, so you best practice i'm your worst nightmare... so you'll wake up on a wet mattress *lol* why would it be wet? 5/10 floor schema wit advanced weaponry my damn telepathy will end a premonition so damn perplexingly.... Nastrodamus'll look like just some bearded man next to me *danm* not feelin, no real diss to him, plus you used those big words just to rhyme, they were forced.. 6/10 on some sarcophogus shit when I splatter on ya flows can't out wit me if Egyptians started pullin brain matter outcha nose *ouch* no punch, nice wording tho, but bad structure.. where the personals & punches.. 6/10 dump this hoe 2 do the film industry a favor when I repel 'em cuz Kodak would go outta business.... trying to helpin' ya skill level develope BITCH*get it* finally, this was your best line man.. 8/10 it took us a while to find a council cat to verse you sorry...its just eighty percent of our crew's done merked you... haha, nice personal.. 7/10 i know the truth hurts duke...but you came at me so Im not gon stop especially when ya records got more 5-0's then a donut shop... i don't get it, his record is 2-1? unless he reset it.. you should of explained it at the bottom.. 5/10 you not gon pop...youre garbage...nineteen losses do the math youve been here a month...that means youve gotten merked every day and a half... even though i can't see his old record, that is a ill concept you came up wit.. 7.5/10 and when you back out this shit I want that thousand quick...pay yo bill if you aint scared then why you keep duckin shit like a tornado drill... 7/10, average line, made sense tho.. all in all, schema had less low score, his average was maybe 6.5, while intensifies was 6, so you guys both should of tried harder in this one, but schemas punches and personals were slightly better, so i vote for you.. holla back right here.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147255 |
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dont vote in my shit again if u dont understand my verse or just plain and simply HATE'IN............ |
waa waa...you write your verse for the voters thats your fault if they dont understand it...go try to get it dqued but i bet it wont be...i bet that unexplained bullshit vote for you will be though...be my guest...
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Voted For: schema
schema structure is pretty good.. a few of ur lines are stretched.. flow is good for the most part.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal in the opener.. intensify effect structure is ok.. a few of ur lines are stretched as well.. flow is on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but that shit came out wack.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals.. Overall both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. schema had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. schema gets my vote.. VOTE - SCHEMA |
Voted For: schema
well the vocab was shit for both the other guy had shity punches lol shrema took it to him with metas n all that shit but not stucture thats the only thing he didnt take to him shrema 7/10 IE: 4/10 v/shrema return the favour in my battle vs mookie thanks peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
re-opened...need more votes...uppin
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
i thought intensify effect had the better verse schema verse was ok
flow effect punches effect last bar did it vocab effect 3ed bar was sick vote effect i see you geting better not bad but not good enough still |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
haha just checing how come you always say bang bang early LOOL
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uuuuuuuuuuuupppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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thats just my trade mark at the end..... u know u gotta be different or have our own style, every raper got soomething and i have that.... |
kill this battle...2 more...
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uppin like muffins
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VOTE MOTHERFUCKERS...please...
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Voted For: schema
i.e.- uh uh.:nono: bad rhyme scheme, punches were bad,vocab was coo, but other than that its just all a ----> :nono: i think ive seen you come better. keep elevatin.....5/10 schema-the punches were iight except for the day and a half one cuz that was fuckin hilarious. structure was coo, wordplay was ehh and your multis and vocab was iight....8/10 RTF.....links in da sig.:thumbup: |
werd...1 more vote...i might get my record cleared after this
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yea uh huh, just remember to rtf,fa shizzle:thumbup:
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Voted For: schema
AIIIIIIGHT, THIS IS SCHEMAS BATTLE, HANDS DOWN.. Better structure, punches, wordplay an personals... only suggestion is more humouress lines @ schema.. nice drop tho, keep em comin! effect, ya flow lacked origninality, still it was aight tho, just add some humour an creativnss an maybe some harder hittin punches on the whole nice battle! return the favor p e a c e |
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