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Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 08-31-04 12:58 PM

nomercy vs Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines..go over n get dq'd
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


check in yo....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 03:58 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.


NoMercy DQ'ed for asking for votes in Bitchslapped: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146712

NoMercy 08-31-04 01:04 PM

naw not 10 14 man you suck fat ones then if its 10 hha

System 08-31-04 01:04 PM

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:04 PM.

System 08-31-04 01:06 PM

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 01:06 PM.

NoMercy 08-31-04 01:12 PM

This wanksta wants to go me/
But cant he even see hes a fuckin wannabe/.
Truly sucks fat ones every day like yesterday/
Fuck hes gross caught him in the back suckin it, cuz hes gay/.
He was back watchin me rap everyone caught this bitch dazen/
I spit like a flame of fire must of made this happen phrasen/.
You asked for a puff I told you to fuck off, and punched you in the face/
I made you cry I dint even try, and the cops couldent even figure out the case/.
Ill drop you off in the hood and see what happens, probly get raped/
Then you tried to escape but got caught and then so scared you got shot/.

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 08-31-04 01:29 PM

u couldn't come "up w/ a punch" puttin ya "hand's 2 da sky"...
ya'll like da "ginger ale" cuzz every rapper from "canada's-dry"..

i hate targetin gay's..u suck y would u put a bar on dis page??
say u da youn cat n u "14" well ya record aint far from ya age
(1-3...14..get it)

all it take it a couple punchlines da harrass dis dumb fukk....
ya moms is ugly she need da take dat mask from "young buck"

see ya bar's ppl star n just laugh..true dis quer is just trash
from 2 of ya L's..u must hate "camera's" u scared of "the flash"
(he got merked twice by him)

when im aimin dem glocks....trust me dat stainless a pop....
fukk "packin pic's when u movin" ima put ya "frame in a box"

dont try da lie bout ya bar's sayin it was a old joint ya spit...
n battlin u like a "brand new pencil" y? its "no point" in it......

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 08-31-04 01:31 PM

uppin 4 some votes yo

Tanto 08-31-04 01:38 PM

This was feedback posted for Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
 
hot damn man here we go again, eat'n up like a med steak... dude hungry!! big up to DA punch line king

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 08-31-04 01:46 PM

goodlooks....vote ppl

Tanto 08-31-04 01:53 PM

unfortunately i cant vote right now... but i just got a challenge by Nomercy
never the less it was declined by the same challenger... o well!!

NoMercy 08-31-04 02:11 PM

well if that was yer best for punches you suck and realy i could beat you im just playin wiht these noobs but ya you go tthis battle prob

Tanto 08-31-04 02:18 PM

look little man... battle rap is not your forte'.. go to sleep

Tanto 08-31-04 02:19 PM

one more thing homie speak english... dontchaknow!

Pro. 08-31-04 02:22 PM

Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

(see ya bar's ppl star n just laugh..true dis quer is just trash
from 2 of ya L's..u must hate "camera's" u scared of "the flash)-that line alone killed nomercy!

then...

(dont try da lie bout ya bar's sayin it was a old joint ya spit...
n battlin u like a "brand new pencil" y? its "no point" in it......)-that was the knock out punch,even tho that shit been uused so many times!

my vote goes to-punchline king

thats my vote..no hatin or nuffin..jus fact!

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 08-31-04 02:33 PM

okay uppin 4 more votes

Tanto 08-31-04 02:56 PM

you got him.... hands down.. he's dead and never to return

Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG 08-31-04 07:02 PM

more votes ppl

Barburyin 08-31-04 08:15 PM

Voted For: NoMercy

ya was nice in dis battle personaly i think this was 1 of ya nicest verses. ya flow was iight ya ryhmes was tight ya vocab needed a lil werk n ya personals was ok but....
vote=no mercy

Sik Wit It 08-31-04 10:27 PM

Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

Da PunchlineKing had slighter harder punches than NoMercy...tha flow,structure, and vocab was all good...NoMercy yo shit was good to..punches could've been a lil'harder..and dont stretch~out yo lines 'n' shit...

NoMercy 08-31-04 10:41 PM

ya ya ok thanks for the vote homes and sik thanks for that honest vote bro

fluidmoon 08-31-04 11:06 PM

Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

DaPunchLineKing~nice strong verse here, good punches and personals, nice flow as well, liked ya opener as well as ya last line, overall good job
NoMercy~decent verse as well,but punches werent as strong and flow a little off, no hate at all just some pointers,but decent

G_$peed 09-01-04 12:03 AM

Voted For: NoMercy

no mercy has it cuz he had harder punchlines and nice rhymin... flow was off and structure was off too but you won...
da punch you had weak punches... structure was coo tho.l..


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