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SinDrome vs phive
Battle Rules:
3-5 barz (6-10 lines) 20 mins drop from check in No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-03-04 at 03:55 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
SinDrome has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 03:57 PM.
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Time Ta Reserve-A-Geek?, Wait! This Freaks Verse-Is-Neat!...Sit Down... Here Urge-A-Seat!...Cuz Sindrome'll Leave This "Bitch Hanging" Like The Act In Me..When I "Swerve-In-Greet"...(Missing High "phives"?)...
You Testing Sindrome?? Get Skooled!...As phive Starts Subbing-For-Rap-Too!...Ja Wanna Drop Led? Start Scrubbing-A-Gat-Nude!...But Fuk Slang! Cuz I Aint "Feeling Ya Pack!"..Like "Rubbing-A-Fat-Dude!"... ..Got This Kids "Hands-Dirty" Cause he Knows Hes "Feeling-my-Shit"! Him getting A Personal-Hit? ... Kids Inclined to drop "Crappy Spits" Eversince i Taught him 2 Spit-Shit!! ... Got This "Kat" On "Phive" Lives cos Ive ~"Killed-Him-in-4-Barz"~, Only Time This Kids Exhibition is When i "Pack-him-in-glass-jars" "Finish This Shit Off" Like an "Contracting Asshole" .... The Only Time Ya Winning "Gold" is when You Takin pets Out My "Fish-Bowl" |
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 04:09 PM.
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arg .... my spit ended weak .... but im damn rusty and new at this
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aight check it
imma split dis nigga wit a nine and some moonshine, he only has 30 minutes to think of a new rhyme, its about time i rose up and took whats mine but how can i sindrome dont have a dope line, youlike 50 cent you aint worth a dime the money you have is not from rap but from commiting crime, you shit is busty and sour like a lime, i sick you the finger and tell you to read the sign, fucking poor bitch, i come out and shine, you nothin but slime, while you eat shit im in ma prime, you cant rap yo gimmick should be a mime. now who dunnit who smoked ma mutha fuckin kronic imma blast one in sindromes fucking stomach, whats wrong wit you kid are ya sick or ill well ive got the syndrome ta fucking kill, now pussy dont pop that pill, yo you wont make it in this rap buissness,cuz your syndrome and you illness, ive got tha power ta spill this, my style will hit you like a shotgun at three feet, what are you crazy,you cant defeat me rapping this kid unda the table was pretty fun, but i didnt even try i havent begun, i still have lyrics thatll hit any mutha fucka like a ton, |
nice battle man just holla if you want round 2 or sumthing
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upping for some votes....................................
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uping,............................................
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we need votes on this battle comeon peeps vote hook us up
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Voted For: phive
ok i say 5 take it his punches were better because he didnt have no self glory in every line and his flowed very nicely except for that 50 line you dissed him and not your opponet and it ruins your originallity cuz everybody here hate on dude and plus 50 cent is MORE then a dime....:( but everything else was kool to me-nice drop :) return the favor and DON'T hate vote on it plz they only get reported http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144192 |
upping for the next voter (lets hope he actualy read the spits)
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yo lets get some votes here man i wanna ko this guy today
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Voted For: phive
Is it just me or did both of you go over the 10 lines max? w/e... Opener - Phive, sins was wack... Closer - Sin, phives was sefl-glorified... Punches - Tie, both were even... Personals - Neither, didnt really see any... Metas - Sin, Phive had some but werent half as hard as sins... Multies - Sin, he had so many big multies, phive only had like 1 or 2... Structure - Both were wack, but I will go with Phive as it is cleaner and easier to comprehend... Vocab - Neither, both were kinda weak... Flow - Tie, both were aiight... Overall it was a tie by statistics above ^^^, But I feel that this one is gunna goto Phive cause I didnt really like Sins structure at all. No hate ya'll...just givin an honest vote, props to both for the effort tho. |
Drop an honest vote/feed on my battle as I have kindly done for the both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141124
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Voted For: phive
Phive gets my vote... Punches were harder and they landed... Tha Flow was pretty good... Vocab was 'ok'...easy to read... Structure was good too...and not all-that-stretched out... |
thanx fo the feedback bro ill try ta vote on your shit peace out
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Voted For: SinDrome
im gonna have to give this one to sin beacuse he came with complex metaphores, which were better then phives.... sin was creative...phive was original...... sin intertwined nameplay with his punches...(talent) i didnt really see any multies in either verse except for the one sins had about the "rubbing a fat kid" i preffered phives style over sins because he came with them stretched bars...phives was original theres really nothin else i can say about this battle except.....phive needs to elevate and as far as sins goes he needs to hit me up and talk business |
man you dumb dude you should battle me man sometime soon like real soon
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i won 3 categorys vs Phives 1 .... now how is this a tie .... and then ... how do i loose the vote?? whack vote |
Voted For: phive
my vote goes to phive ........ i liked both verses but phive had better punches |
This was feedback posted for phive
not voting, just checkin it out
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Voted For: phive
im give it to phive cusss your punch lines was tight and you had a tight flow with words but the other due had tight use of words to he used cilables |
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