Eyvon vs Ms.Skillz4daze
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
ILL SHIT ON U!!!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 06:34 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 06:37 PM.

Ms.Skillz4daze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 06:55 PM.

Whether with Hi-tek, I work with QUALITY like Talib works with Brother Mos/
You ran from the first battle and came and made another post/
You little brat. You don't need a mic, you need a whoopin' from ya mama/
I simply gave comments for a rap of yours and then you came with all the drama/How mature is that? /
Artistry is a passion of mine. You wrote a female version of Emimem's song..How pure is that?/For sure you're wack/
And then you wanna get mad because you lack/
'da skills to test Ms.Skillz, I ain't new to rap/
Perhaps you wanted some mindless minions I gave my honest opinions. Maybe you ain't used to that/
You threw a temper tantrum, ranted on like Rapverse phantom. You ain't no femcee, YOU'S A BRAT!/
*smackin' Evyon* Little girl, gimme back my microphone/
Spittin' ya sorry verses like an incompotent witch sends boomerang curses Again, LEAVE 'DA MIC ALONE!/Now while you wilin' KEEP IN MIND THAT I AM FREESTYLING.
During our battles, you be writin' while I KEYSTYLE/
Trust me, if I took even a few SECONDS to write, you would be trying to cop a plea, Child/
I'm still just warmin' up but you don't really want to battle cuz THEN IT'S GONNA BE FOUL

Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin, cause they be actin maniac in action/
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction/
You looking zany whack with just a fraction of my tracks spun/
My rhyming skills got you climbing hills/
I travel through your mind until you spine like siren drills/
I'm sliming grills of roaches, with sprayed on disinfectants/
With some ex rappers till their spinal column disconnects/
We disinfect then check the monologue, turn your system up/
Twist them up, and indulge in the marijuana smoke/
This is the season for noise pollution contamination/
Examination of more cartoons than animation/
My lamination of narration/
Hit's a snare and bass of track fucked up rapper interrogation/
When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing/
I turn the stage into a barren wasteland.../
I'm Infinite, yo cant stop me

uppin for votes yall!
just admit, i murdered this whore!

You murdered that whore? So you refer to yourself as a whore?/
You slaughtered yourself by even TRYING to battle and roar
but after your first thread you lost yo head and saddled for more more/
Talkin' bout you murdered that whore. You sure did cuz suicide is what you twice committed/
You killed yourself the first time which by the way was the WORST rhyme but for some reason you ain't woman enough to admit it/
Oh that's right you ain't no woman, you just a little wanna be emcee with computer access/
Your rhymes are dispicable I'm sick a you. I could VOMIT off ya wackness/
But dig this, again, while you take all of 3 days to write revenge for me I'll/
Keep doin' what I'm doin' now, lyrically SLAUGHTERIN' you wit' my keystyles/
That's just to show you wutz 'da deal
Your name ain't evyon it's ENVYIN', look how you wish you had these skillz/
I'm Ms.Skillz 4 daze/ quick to amaze and leave ya in a daze/
You can't see me yet others can't understand ya lyrics cuz you in a haze/
You a wanna be internet gangsta-chick/
Girl, you ain't even got no gangsta-wit
You wanna be a female 50 cents plus Eminem :GAL go somewhere
wit' da WANGSTA sh*t/
My intelligence quotient is a number you probably couldn't count
'Da crowd sticks to me like Super Glue, don't hate cuz you can't even mount/
You can't even amount/
To a hill of pennies with your ridiculous flow/
Your hatin' got'cha diabolical, I'm mad methodical and meticulous yo
I'm still keystylin' and makin' ya wonder how I do this/
My intelligence quotient makes me even more potent.. YOU just clueless

This was feedback posted for Ms.Skillz4daze
 

eyvon dope verse good wordplay and punches and nice flow and structure but it lacked disses still a 6/10
skill good opener dope cuz i just voted in the last battle good wordplay and flow also structure is a little streched though i aint like the ender but the rest was dope here if you had ended as strong as you started you wouldve won but you didnt and i really think this is a tie so i cant vote 6/10

uppin for votes. i need a win yall... i aint doin so hot...

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

are u in infiniteeyvon and if uare u mad inactive have u eva been in our crew forum

yes im in infinite, and yeas im active, i just can never git on cause i aint got a comp @ home. ill b on again on sat @ 12:30 though

vote 4 me

uppin yall! vote me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Eyvon

Eyvon got diss
better structure better flow had
sum nice punches n good use of vocab
overall good verse


Ms.Skillz
fix ur structure it kinda fucked ur flow
use more wordplay n metas to help punches
but u had a nice verse 2 good battle

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

Ms.Skillz4daze -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in stretch'd~out..

Evyon -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

all n all...dis battle needs work...only bout 3/4s' of it was an actual BATTLE...breakdownnnnn....

Punches - Mr Skillz...only because he actually HAD a few in that strechted ass verse...Eyvon had more of an open mic verse...he wasnt dissin nobody...das da point of a BATTLE..feel me ?

Personals - Mr Skillz...i think he had like 2 decent hitters in there...like i sed b4...Eyvon had more of an open mic verse...personals are a big part in a BATTLE...use dem joints if u know how lol

Meta4s - blahh tie...both verses were str8 forward...no serious metas that made me say OH SHYT lol...

Wordplay - blahh...i'll give it to Enyvon because his multis made his verse wut it was...Mr skillz had most of his shyt stretched out...like u was jus typin just to make it seem more complex...

Enjoyment - blahh...tie..4 the fact that Eyvon's verse had sum decent multis n good vocab...but it wasnt a battle verse...n mr skillz actually had punches so all n all it tied the enjoyment factor...buttttt...

imma have to give it to Mr Skillz cuz his shyt was an actual Battle verse wit sum punches in it...u need them in a BATTLE...das da whole point...feel me...iigh

Vote - oh shyt its MS skillz...lol my bad...MS.Skillz4Daze


drop an honest vote no da battle in my sig iigh


~1~

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

Whether with Hi-tek, I work with QUALITY like Talib works with Brother Mos/
You ran from the first battle and came and made another post/
You little brat. You don't need a mic, you need a whoopin' from ya mama/
I simply gave comments for a rap of yours and then you came with all the drama/How mature is that? /
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH

Artistry is a passion of mine. You wrote a female version of Emimem's song..How pure is that?/For sure you're wack/
And then you wanna get mad because you lack/
'da skills to test Ms.Skillz, I ain't new to rap/
Perhaps you wanted some mindless minions I gave my honest opinions. Maybe you ain't used to that/
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH MULTIZ IN DER TOO NICE

*smackin' Evyon* Little girl, gimme back my microphone/
Spittin' ya sorry verses like an incompotent witch sends boomerang curses Again, LEAVE 'DA MIC ALONE!/Now while you wilin' KEEP IN MIND THAT I AM FREESTYLING.
During our battles, you be writin' while I KEYSTYLE/
Trust me, if I took even a few SECONDS to write, you would be trying to cop a plea, Child/
I'm still just warmin' up but you don't really want to battle cuz THEN IT'S GONNA BE FOUL
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT DAT WAS HOT CLOSA FO SHO NICE GIRL



Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin, cause they be actin maniac in action/
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction/
You looking zany whack with just a fraction of my tracks spun/
My rhyming skills got you climbing hills/
I travel through your mind until you spine like siren drills/
^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOWZ U MASTERED IT BUT PUNCHES WERE WEAK


I'm sliming grills of roaches, with sprayed on disinfectants/
With some ex rappers till their spinal column disconnects/
We disinfect then check the monologue, turn your system up/
Twist them up, and indulge in the marijuana smoke/
This is the season for noise pollution contamination/
Examination of more cartoons than animation/
My lamination of narration/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LIKE I SAID ON DA 1ST ONE FLOWZ U MASTERED BUT PUNCHES CAME WEAK DA LAST LINE WIHT DA CARTOON IT WAS AIGHT PUNCH


Hit's a snare and bass of track fucked up rapper interrogation/
When I declare invasion, there ain't no time to be stare and gazing/
I turn the stage into a barren wasteland.../
I'm Infinite, yo cant stop me

^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE CLOSA GIRL FO SHO

BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT COME HARDER DAN MS.SKILLZ SHE HAD HARDER PUNCHES DAN UR'Z

BUT U HAD BOMB ASS FLOWZ WORK ON DEM PUNCHES DEN U'LL GET BETTA FO SHO

V-MS.SKILLZ RETURN AN FAV

Voted For: Eyvon

eyevon easily wins this.eye had the flow and the better lines down good.the opening was pretty good:

Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction/
To get your brain relaxin, cause they be actin maniac in action/
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction/
You looking zany whack with just a fraction of my tracks spun/

^that was dope and went good with the flow.ms...you were'nt that great in your verse..you came too basic.

for example:

Whether with Hi-tek, I work with QUALITY like Talib works with Brother Mos/
You ran from the first battle and came and made another post/
You little brat. You don't need a mic, you need a whoopin' from ya mama/
I simply gave comments for a rap of yours and then you came with all the drama/How mature is that? /

that was a weak opener and it was too simple..you need more punches and harder hitting metaphores in your verse.both of you need more nameplay and personals too.if you dont diss the name then a verse is nothing.both came a little less than average..but eye gets the vote.

if you'd like both of you can check my thread in the "emergency help" forum for textees.

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

break down

Vocab - Eyvon
Multiz - Ms. Skillz
Structure - Ms. Skillz
Punchlines - Ms. Skillz

Basically Eyvon got murked in my opinion no hate jus statin' my opinion big up`z ta both tho

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

uhmmm
aight, skills got this..
some aight wordplay n punches, the BRAT line was humouress, n humour is always a good thing..
maybe could improve structure? didnt have trouble readin it, but its prolly the thing u need to workon most, on the whole, nice drop...
keep em comin girl...

eyvon, ya flow was neither here or there, ya opener lacked the hard hittin personal that ms skills dropped, ta structure need improvin too, but ya had some hella nice lines in there, an ya vocab seemed more complex than ms skills, but ms skills was humouress n better punches, try mixin ya vocab with humouress lyrics n you'll definately goplaces eyvon!

no hates ladies n keep the rhymes comin

p e a c e

Voted For: Ms.Skillz4daze

ayo this shit wasnt even a battle

eyvon-yo this is a battle not a ryhming session...metas was good..no personals though...intensity none i could see..you was jus freestylin

mrs skillz..your shit was the same...good wordplay though..you had a part of a punch which gives you the vote...elevation is needed though stay up..