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Just an advanced warning......
Just be glad you heard it from me and not someone else, i'm goin easy on u dawg.......now go home wack nigga sleep on mistah tate? u crazy as hell gotta sound so familiar, make yo mind ring bells they say that boy crazy, his screws gone loose but they wont say it to my face, i put they neck in a noose neva said i was a gangsta, but i'm far from bein wanksta so watch yo valuables when tate around, wont hesistate to jank ya lyrically spank ya, put yo head on spin make u wish u never approached me with that fake ass grin corny ass niggas, yall just aint got what it takes flames come out my mouth so yall flakes stay baked i'd put you on the bus and school you, but i'll just fool you till you learn that even you with voodoo couldn't stick bitches like i do murda for pleasure? naw, i just do what i got to respect that and your spinal cord will remain intact if neccasary i'll squash you like sumo, and that be a fact u say you mad, you say you ill, but your statements lack truth you cant record in a studio, they kick yo wack ass out the booth when you rhyme you dont make sense, but you claim yo styles dense and tell me if you the king then why yo punchlines full of dents? don't hate on a nigga, just respect his evidence drop after drop, and you wonderin why you aint gettin no replies take a hint fool, your a pest, sumtin like summer flies and i'm supa fly, look up to see me cuz i be that high i got you askin yourself like jada, oh why oh why? time to stop inquirin your position and start lettin the game go by i gave you that push, that nudge, now take yo ass on and dont cry on your way out, cuz bitch you claim to be grown now you can guess or you can ask to who this was directed you know who you are, and now you know that u rejected |
nice drop...it had a steady flow...unlike some other shit i be readin'...
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uppin fo feedback
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shit that is hot ... flow was off the chain , super steady flow, i wasnt thrown off at all by what i read. it was tyte 8.5 out of 10 so nice drop . peace out keep em comin
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pretty nice liked the structure also
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uppin ^^^^^^ dont sleep, it aint nap time
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uppin this summabitch, thanx for all the feedback so far
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that shit was nice keep it up
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^^^thanks for the compliment, uppin once again
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just one mo up, ^^^^
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I liked that joint...the flow was steady and it had a good point to it. Nice drop...keep postin them and i'll keep readin um.
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^^^^appreciate the feedback, uppin
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it wasnt the best but it was good. u had tha flow and ur strucuture was good.
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yeah i agree wiht hood u can improve but it was good.. o and making ur font smaller does not hide stretched lines..
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well damn, guess u read that move like a book, cuz thats exactly what i was tryin to do, cant even front ^^^uppin^^^ |
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I see you doing your thing,,
nice drop hommie,,I really cant judge you because im not God,, but i'll give you my opinion,,,I think you put it down with a good structure 7.8,,,God bless all...1 feed back wouldn't hurt any one http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764 |
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