Wreckage vs Tha Flash
 

Battle Rules:
Unlimited lines
No dickridin
No crew votes
3-0 knockout
5-1 win

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Tha Flash

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 12:53 PM

Must drop verse in 69 minutes after check in.

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 08:16 PM.

Wreckage has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 08:23 PM.

nigga now u know i'm metaphorically crazy
i'll have u wandering off after ya loss like ya eye was lazy
i got devastating punches that will rock ya jaw
and leave u with bad news like a doctors call
so nigga stop the frontin
or i'll carve a face in ya body like a halloween pumpkin
u record means nothing
i'll still crush ya lyrics
and shove a blade in ya throat that will crush ya larynx
i'm brushing my losses off
and i'm back up in it
i roll ya dead body over in the ground like cingular's back up minutes
and i'm aiming to leave ya ass without a plan
and leave u a myth just like the abominable snow man
u can't cling to what i spit
cause my lines are sick i'll blow ya head off with no care
and leave ya ass soft like the downy snuggle bear
u can't beat me cause i'm equipped for more things
and u can't hurt me so it's like i'm sipping on morphine
and ya flow seems to be a wreckage itself
so i'm gonna leave u like a chicken straight pecking ya self
i advise u to watch ya shit
cause i steal ya dream and put where my pockets sit
u think u hot but u not cause i'll rock u bitch
i'll leave ya ass swollen up with bruises the size of popcicle sticks
i got a glock on my waist and when i reach for it you'll think my pockets itch
so i'm gonna spring ya sprockets and launch ya ass in the air like a rocket bitch
and leave u dead body under water like u was with a lot of fish
u think u good but my glock will raise hell
and leave echoes of my verse in ya ear like u was a seashell
so go step ya rap game up before u come back here
cause next time i'll chew u up quicker then tyson did holyfield's ear

I'have'already'taken a picture of my spine,
So when U lose,U can Go-back wit' that"flash-back"

"Let's Prtend this is "NFS" Cuz'IM'Puttin'you'underground,
In a "isolated" box, Wit'no'sound//

You look into the mirror'Lift your shirt, You was flashed', I will make sure your the first "fag" That gets bashed//

U try to "smash" Newb's you aint' No "jesus",
Slap the bible in your "Face" U shrivel In shame like-Ice-2-penis//

Chip-teeth'Break nose's I make it work,
U hoppin' In my ring, With this mic, damn U still wearin your skirt//

bye bitch

My lines are short cuz' Family trama lol, I went off on busdriver, and blah blah blah didnt take my meds there trippen' But still I think I murdered him Uppin' 4 votes

Voted For: Tha Flash

da flash...hands down...he had hella more punches...and they all were tite and made sense...he had hella energy...and went str8 for it...nice job flash...ill as hell...

Uppin'

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uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and we'll return the favor

Uppin' for votes bitches

This was feedback posted for Wreckage
 

that was really some thing.... wow ive never seen any quite as sucky as that... good thing you left when you did

uppin for votes, vote up on this battle we'll return the favor

Uppin for votes'

UPPIN' vote, I return favors...

Uppin for votes, Geez......... Cmon, Im uppin and uppin, and damn.,...NO VOTES

Voted For: Tha Flash

its a def whu won dis i mean his rhymes were tight the flow was hot n tha punchlines were hot to the vocab it was iight jus a lil werk but its obviouse whu my vote goin to.....
vote=the flash

2 reasons this vote should be taken off.

I murder'd him, It could be considered a "hate" vote, "Violent Type" and "b.a.m" Dont get along. Aswell as him not exsplaining vote.

Seems like after we "murdered" Bam, there tryin 2 fuck Us. Mod take care of THESE votes, this is horseshit.

Its a Rap battle, Not vote against your enemy's.

Voted For: Tha Flash

damn took me like 5 minutes to read but overall.......i think wrekage took the personals category........his flow was ok style was original nothin really creative....had a couple of complex lines ......didnt really have a nice finisher....his vocab was mediocre....structure was ok...so overall her didnt do so bad

your verse had so nice metaphores...im glad to see that....had good flow.....structure was ok......didnt really see ne multies from any verse....your vocab was slightly better then wrekages.....you had better punches then your last battle which is a good improvement....u came harder and more powerful this time....and despit the fact u dropped 400 lines u still stayed on top of everything and kept a good pace and for that i think you should get ym vote......
Sole*

Voted For: Tha Flash

nigga now u know i'm metaphorically crazy
i'll have u wandering off after ya loss like ya eye was lazy
nice 7/10
i got devastating punches that will rock ya jaw
and leave u with bad news like a doctors call
nice 6/10
so nigga stop the frontin
or i'll carve a face in ya body like a halloween pumpkin
u record means nothing
decent 4.5/10
i'll still crush ya lyrics
and shove a blade in ya throat that will crush ya larynx
kinda un even 6/10
i'm brushing my losses off
and i'm back up in it
i roll ya dead body over in the ground like cingular's back up minutes
good 6/10
and i'm aiming to leave ya ass without a plan
and leave u a myth just like the abominable snow man
nyce7/10
u can't cling to what i spit
cause my lines are sick i'll blow ya head off with no care
and leave ya ass soft like the downy snuggle bear
decent 5/10
u can't beat me cause i'm equipped for more things
and u can't hurt me so it's like i'm sipping on morphine
dont get it 3/10
and ya flow seems to be a wreckage itself
so i'm gonna leave u like a chicken straight pecking ya self
nice 6/10
i advise u to watch ya shit
cause i steal ya dream and put where my pockets sit
u think u hot but u not cause i'll rock u bitch
i'll leave ya ass swollen up with bruises the size of popcicle sticks
i got a glock on my waist and when i reach for it you'll think my pockets itch
so i'm gonna spring ya sprockets and launch ya ass in the air like a rocket bitch
and leave u dead body under water like u was with a lot of fish
lol nice multies 8/10
u think u good but my glock will raise hell
and leave echoes of my verse in ya ear like u was a seashell
ehh decent 5/10
so go step ya rap game up before u come back here
cause next time i'll chew u up quicker then tyson did holyfield's ear

Played 4/10

I'have'already'taken a picture of my spine,
So when U lose,U can Go-back wit' that"flash-back"
didnt rhyme 1/10

"Let's Prtend this is "NFS" Cuz'IM'Puttin'you'underground,
In a "isolated" box, Wit'no'sound//
decent 5/10
You look into the mirror'Lift your shirt, You was flashed', I will make sure your the first "fag" That gets bashed//
lol 6/10
U try to "smash" Newb's you aint' No "jesus",
Slap the bible in your "Face" U shrivel In shame like-Ice-2-penis//
sucked 2/10
Chip-teeth'Break nose's I make it work,
U hoppin' In my ring, With this mic, damn U still wearin your skirt//
nice closer 6/10



Punches: The flash- i seed lots but was kinda weak


the structure sucked on tha flash, u shud make it more evend out



Wrekages opener i didnt like cause it didnt rhyme
Tha Flah's closer was played

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Voted For: Tha Flash

Flash had way more wordplay and also had harder punches but had terrible flow...
wreckage you gad less wwordplay and you had way weak punches... flow was off and structure sucked...