ruff_tuff_thug vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 09:26 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

ruff_tuff_thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 08:57 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 08:58 PM.

yo man this is gonna be even so dont go over how many lines i have... which is 15...

you a pussy and you are as soft as lard...
battle me that isnt good you fuckin retard...
you a rapping shame and should leave the game...
you hate me so much dawg i feel the same...
you wear panties and bras like a fuckin queer...
you a bitch layin for doe and you stay away from here...
i'll smash you wit my rhymes and kill you wit my style...
its amazing that you punk ass will even last a while...
you gonna go to your fucckin grave and live in hell...
your skillz suck and they cant be good or repelled...
you a pussy callin a greater rapper then you a herb...
keep fuckin around and your gonna get killed and served...
believe me this is the word that made the rap game good...
i do good and dont fuck around and do wut i should...
you cant beat me and you neva will and neva can...
i could kill you with no weapons and only one fuckin hand...


aight bitch even it up...

This dude is wack...ready


CHECK IT

He says he's a thug, but this cat talkn soft
Probably looks at Idlyyic Queens photo's just to get off (he's on her nuts
...His crews so wack it should be labeled a sin
Its sad when you gotta pay the pussies , just to get a win
...I could spit a bar and kill this guy
I dont need no sick punches, my personals will gimme 5 (votes)
One-Band-Man continously clowned him many times here
Yo crew gets clowned also, who's droppn the real rhymes
This is facts, fuck punches, nigga just fall down
Since yo names a bluff, i'll substitute it with pronouns*
6-15, good choice on not showing your stats
Battled yo own crew cat and lost, cause your wack
...Look, yo life is animated, just like yo sig
I'll disconnect yo brain...like a black girls wig

*names are nouns...pronouns substitute em

yo at least i can admit i can take a loss you cant... hahahaha...

dawg if i lose its cause i made myself or the person was just better than you...do me a favor...admit this loss before it happens

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

Clearly J DOT took this, he was all over the personals. Flow was about even and shit, and I think ruff tuff thug and J dot both needed a lil better structure. J Dot just came wit the punches hard, and wordplay was ncie too.

Voted For: J DOT

ok:
ruff tuff~your verse was good,your flow was ok, but your words seemed to be forced into little space, which is hard to do, overall decent punches and nice structure....
jdot~your verse was very well done, you had nice flow, strong punches, and good personals, nice battle, i liked your last couple of lines, very funny........nice job

um uppin...

uppin...

i murdered you...i read that like 10 times already...wow!!!
see wut shit talkn do, you 17 year old homo thug

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

checkin battle........................................

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

the first kid was aight, but he lacked the hard punches i like to see in a verse. J dot was clearly better, with a substantial amount of personals compared to his opponents lack of them. vote - j dot. hit this up plz.

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upnn this battle needs some votes on it

votes are needed on this shit...lets go...people.........

yo uppin dis...

This was feedback posted for ruff_tuff_thug
 

Just Curious As To Who's Winning, Not Voting..

upnnnnnn this again......sad lets get some votes in here

Voted For: J DOT

aight heres my breakdown on da verses...
J Dot~you had a whole buncha personals but ur structure wasnt that good... you had some good punches too~7.5/10

ruff tuff thug~your structure was better but your punches were weak... you didnt have any personals but u had a pretty good flow to it...5/10

Voted For: J DOT

no comp at all...

ruff got murda with every line....

flow nice, personals hot, punches decent, all around hot..

ruff flow was average, punches was weak personals ???, all around just under average....



He says he's a thug, but this cat talkn soft
Probably looks at Idlyyic Queens photo's just to get off (he's on her nuts
...His crews so wack it should be labeled a sin
Its sad when you gotta pay the pussies , just to get a win

HAHA NICE.....

6-15, good choice on not showing your stats
Battled yo own crew cat and lost, cause your wack
...Look, yo life is animated, just like yo sig
I'll disconnect yo brain...like a black girls wig

good ending N nice hot personals....

This was feedback posted for ruff_tuff_thug
 

yo man im part of ya crew n all but seiousley homie u need ta step ya game upp i mean i kno im not that greatest but comon dawg u a leader supposably so ccomon dawg step up

^that had nuthin to do wit this battle..stop freeposting..another weak ass BAM member..hahaha


aiyo...uppn this to da top, thanx for the votes

Voted For: J DOT

J DOT gets my vote cause his punches were just harder,tha flow was pretty good,and tha structure wasn't stretched~out...ruff yo shit was good too...tha punches could've been a little harder and you would've gotten my vote...

thanx uppin...

upppppppppn nnnnnnnnnnnnn thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssssss ssssssssssssssss

uppppn thissssssss againnnnnnnnnnnn

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

I'm not voting here for personal reasons, but J DOT, you merked the fuck out of him lol. Ruff, step up to The Kid now, 'less you still shook...

yp uppin dis battle...

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

easy vote J Dot got this ruff you still suck man when you gon learn to rap oh wait special ed doesnt teach that subject hop on your little yellow short bus and leave ths site you suck but i aint gt 200 posts i cant vote to bad

Voted For: J DOT

both was a lil wack but ok
Jdot: you was iight not the best ive sen from you and a lil weak but its iight you had mesed up strucutre and a lil ok flow but ya had good punches and ya personals was good nice verse overall tyhough you can do some rewording but its good

Ruff: you was good too you had nice strucutre and good flow but ya punches werent ass god and some were played same with ya personals they were ight but not as good

Vote JDOT