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QBsmasher 08-31-04 09:14 PM

Drop a punchline and rate above you!
 
I can go line for line with this cat like a welfare office
I bet he came to get his foodstamps and feed off this

Logic The Goonie 08-31-04 09:17 PM

ehhh.....7/10

I went thru all your verses and everything you bring's whack...
dumb fuck, you scared to hit puberty
.....cuz you think it'll swing back

SycklyFlowetic 08-31-04 09:18 PM

LOL...7/10

mY RHYMES WILL CONNECT FASTER THAN CHARTER CAN TO THE INTERNET,
YOUR RHYME ARE "WHACK" AND "WEAK" I GUESS THEY JUST INTERSECT...

QBsmasher 08-31-04 09:19 PM

4/10

If flowetic really is syckly, then ill deliver the antiseptic
Cause this cats got poor flow, just like a diabetic

anxiety 08-31-04 10:10 PM

7.5 dog...

I go for the gold, shootin you in your groin and bladder...
This aint "Whos line" dog, the points do matter...

UntouchableFlowz 08-31-04 10:33 PM

lmao that was funny man 7/10

He drops pussy lyrics, claims he pull panties like hugh heff
The closest he got to a G, was his english grade, F!

Da Vinci 09-01-04 02:08 AM

Creative but lacked a punch I'm say 6/10

You pull'n off a win is like a six year old with his liquor,
Only diffrence is, your loss comes up a little quicker.

MadProphet 09-01-04 02:20 AM

pretty nice....im not with the number rating shit but ill give you a ...*shrugs* 8/10?

cliam to be totin guns but we know thats absurd-playa
cuz the only nines youve ever seen were-third-graders

La Cosa Nostra 09-01-04 02:30 AM

^7/10... Not bad...

Whos this bitch.. Ill rip ya worse then Biggie Smalls wearin tights..
So you can smell the shit ya spittin, like talkin to anus lickin dykes..

Eh.. I aint battled in a while..

past perfect 09-01-04 02:34 AM

4/10 .. it showed some creativity, but not much ..

this liar is prone to cheat in battle but my fire is known
everyone's senior shit like you live in a retirement home

Eclipsik 09-01-04 02:34 AM

If ya punches was on water they'd be ~ugly~ducklings~
Better step it up to "do" me like ~Mugsy~fucking~

Mugsy Bouges formerly of Charlotte Hornets.

Eclipsik 09-01-04 02:36 AM

and 4/10 with that last punch before me.

past perfect 09-01-04 02:43 AM

you wouldnt know wordplay if it slapped you in the face

Eclipsik 09-01-04 02:48 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by past perfect
you wouldnt know wordplay if it slapped you in the face
What you think I didn't get it? You can have all the wordplay you want but we ratin PUNCHLINES, something you didn't have.

4/10 damn it

past perfect 09-01-04 02:48 AM

edit

Eclipsik 09-01-04 02:50 AM

more like it dog. funny shit. 7.5/10

Da Vinci 09-01-04 03:01 AM

You pull'n off a win is like a six year old with his liquor,
Only diffrence is, your loss comes up a little quicker.

there wasn't one for me to rate

Eclipsik 09-01-04 03:22 AM

If ya punches was on water they'd be ~ugly~ducklings~
Better step it up to "do" me like ~Mugsy~fucking~

Mugsy Bouges formerly of Charlotte Hornets.

Da Vinci 09-01-04 03:25 AM

6/10


someone rate mine above this one

QBsmasher 09-02-04 08:28 PM

Da Vinci.... like 5/10, then again maybe I didnt get it.

Ignoramous gotta steal his name from someone famous
This painter, must be huffin the fumes from his container

For$akeN 09-02-04 11:36 PM

6/10

Random Member: Will A Peer(no offense)

death unmasking shadows out of reach and kids shriek in fear
putting a friend on her dying wishes list is how she "will's-a-peer"

Logic The Goonie 09-03-04 12:21 AM

10/10 :thumbup:
(this is a punch i used against e looch, rate it)

"sun" ya like my home state and breeze by you with ease...
i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'...

E Looch 09-03-04 12:25 AM

4/10 choppy flow sun punches are old and a weed punch? LMAO

your closer was better then that

sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans
but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams

I used against him

EyeDuel 09-03-04 03:12 PM

eh...sorry i aint really care for urs! lol...yeh im cocky...
this is againt Looch cuz its fits his record perfectly!

my lyrics not only show my shine, but bring trouble too...
but like dat lil bitch group you'll see '3L' before the 'W'

pc

Raptor 09-03-04 04:58 PM

reply
 
that was cool 7/10

U fear me-like Jews, When an Arabs wearin uh jacket
I det-O-nate an go irate, Leave u in fragments

Capital B 09-03-04 05:14 PM

5/10

lines streached, call you lanks, im great but thanks for the doubts
you couldnt spit fire money with Lloyd banks nuts in your mouth

Yvonne 09-03-04 05:24 PM

lol 9/10...tight

the only way you could show off is if you put my name on ur clothen
cos,many are called but few are chosen,u best keep ur 2 lines froozen

Raptor 09-03-04 06:09 PM

6/10

Is 'Mike' Phat? He worthless like uh fag to uh bitch
Even at iz best, he don't amount tuh 50 cent

Capital B 09-03-04 06:18 PM

2/100....that was fuckin horeable....

kill you like ice t did to cops and they precinct
leave raptor's skill like him...extinct

Capital B 09-03-04 06:26 PM

10/10 thatwas the shit

Stare me back fuck ya hunger, dreams kid u'd butter ur wonders
raptors strugglin tryna G-G-Gun it from me like stuttering runners

Raptor 09-03-04 06:30 PM

HA HA I dirt'd your ass 4 talkin shit, and I guess that PHAT DIKK in yo mouf is the reason that your reply was so fukkin weak bitch!!!! laugh out...fuk that!! HAHAHAHAAHAAH!!!!!!
*GURGLING NOISES ARE HEARD AS phat mic CONTINUES CHOKING ON THAT DIKK LODGED DEEP INTO HIS TRACHEA*

Raptor 09-03-04 06:36 PM

HAHAAHAAAAHAA!!! please stop imbarrassing yuhself-u been dirt'd, stop with the lameass attempts at a comebak(HOW U GONE RATE YOURSELF STUPID), they let evryone know what a weak trik u r. I mean this 4 real though..HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAHAAHAAA!!!! I'M OUT.1 :laugh:

DV8 09-03-04 06:46 PM

like brand name suits your name fits you well cuz you only kill in packs,
obviously hated n disliked amoung peeps jus like the government state tax,

quick but stretched..

* Word * 09-04-04 08:02 AM

3/10

Pssh.

I should just post one simple bar and be exempt..
This kid thinks a one-night stand is a record attempt

DV8 09-04-04 09:32 AM

Punches Suck Unless There Personal In My Opinion...so Here Ya Go...
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by * Word *
3/10

Pssh.

I should just post one simple bar and be exempt..
This kid thinks a one-night stand is a record attempt


ok....lol....5/10

sticks n stones right?..but really words will never MERK me,
kids k.o'd so often he repeatedly types stars in memory RV,

Yvonne 09-04-04 09:48 AM

5/10


your punch was just invisible son dont fucking pull rank
cos if you was to "clap" a gun "back" u'ld only shoot blank

*bleh*


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