Tha Flash vs LIL'DREW
 

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Check in by: 08-31-04 at 11:47 PM

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Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 11:18 PM.

LIL'DREW has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 11:20 PM.

it's fantasy to me how crushed ya spine and ripped ya face
ya dead so u ain't coming back like mase
and the only way u can win is by the hands of god's grace
nigga i'll step on ya head like it was grape
and i'll admitt it i should be locked up for rape
cause my words touch u like michael jackson does the kids
and my words molest u like ya father's side of the family did
bitch my lyrics are hot why ya lyrics are not
the only heat ya near is when ya mother's cooking in the pot
i'm looking in ya spot taking what i want
this ain't the apprentice and u ain't donald trumph
nigga i keep my eyes open while i'm closing yours
and leave a echo in ya head like i'm closing doors
i'll lay ya ass down flat and laid on the floor
nigga ya to soft so why step to me i'm hardcore
u step to me and i'm reaching for my handle like it's part of my car door
so nigga get ya cake up
and it's me you'll see standing over ya body with the glock when u wake up
and i wouldn't blame u if u rhymes were late
cause i'm not kit kat but i'll give ya dumb ass a break
and i'm ripping u lil drew
ya heading for the hospital straight for the icu
ya like a ghost i done ripped u so i don't see u
take a look at ya avatar
cause when i'm done ripping u that's gonna be ya battle scar
so nigga back down before u get fucked up
and u don't have to spit cause i know u don't want none




explanantions: 1.)u step to me and i'm reaching for my handle like it's part of my car door
answer: the handles that open up car doors

2.)cause when i'm done ripping u that's gonna be ya battle scar
answer: everybodies gonna make fun of it, that's how i'm gonna leave his head

yo,
dis dude thinks he could rip me, dis dude couldnt rip paper/
he couldnt rip a skirt if he was da southside rapper/
u need to eat ya wheaties to cause me lyrical harm/
u couldnt win dis even if u was lucky charms/
no beef dawg, dis is just a friendly battle/
but u couldnt stear a rhyme boat wit a 10 foot paddle/
by da time dis battles over, u goin beg fo yo rattle/
Ill lite ya ass on fire like a blazin' saddle/
i read yo otha battles, Ill admit u pretty ill though/
but yo rhymes coudnt amuse anyone if dey was a vibrating dildo/
i embarass u, wait till ya dicks erect/
cut it off and make a gurl ask u fo sex/

no beef dawg..........................just a friendly battle..............................fo sho........................

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Voted For: LIL'DREW

ight though... i give you props on that one... holla at cha boy

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Voted For: Tha Flash

Flash Took it..

Better Punchlines and metas.. wordplay was okay from both, so was structure.. I enjoyed Flash' a little more though, because his was more thought out, and he had more writing that called for more content..o Flash you get my vote

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Voted For: Tha Flash

your metas are tight and you clown on him a lot more funny
plus your whole verse is longer
drew had some tight metas too but a couple dont make sense
this one goes to flash

Voted For: LIL'DREW

my vote goes to lil drew had way better flow and didnt drag on and on punches were good in both but flash's punches were stretched he tired to made the lines rhyme way to hard. and didnt really have any good multis in either one. the closer for flash was weak drews was alot better. so overall my vote goes for drew.

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Voted For: LIL'DREW

yo aight battle punches sucked for both but there was harder ones with lil drew here he had better vocab and his stucture was more set up easyer to understand v/lildrew
flash you are a rank battle but take my idvice only battle people you have beef against its easyer to write punches on them o and ya
v/ lil drew
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Voted For: LIL'DREW

DREW...took it...he had more punches and betta flow...betta wordplay and betta structure...even though it was shorter...drew's verse was betta...
THE FLASH tried to hard...his lines dragged on and were hella stretched...work on structure dawg...
v/ DREW...

Voted For: Tha Flash

Aight Tha Flash obviously merked LIL'DREW here. Lil had about 3 good personals, a few so-so punches, and rough sketchy flow.Drew, no offence but you need madd elevation.Fix your structure,//'s look very elementary.
Tha Flash,you had sum pretty good personals,your flow was aight,and your punches hit hard.You had crap flow near the middle,you shouldve left that part out.It was kinda long and boring to read but it was way better than DREW's verse.DREW, I might consider you better after you get your crew and d/r's to vote in your battles like you did in mine. You can say what you want with your little sigs,your wack as fuck.Any vet could see that.

V/Tha Flash

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Voted For: LIL'DREW

this battle was kinda of weak for me......but i think drew took this....the other cats flow was fucked and i really didnt like it wit lines like my rhymes are hot while urs is not....he needs to work on flow he needs to up his vocab and fix his structure.....drews urs was bettter but u kinda had the same problem fix ur structure up ur wordplay and flow so yea drew gets the vote

Voted For: LIL'DREW

Drew gets my vote..his punches were a slight harder than Flash's...structure was in place..flow was nice..and tha vocab was pretty good..but all 2gether his punches were just harder...

Flash..yo shit was good too..(to me) yo punches could've been a little harder to get my vote tho...your flow was pretty decent..structure was good and didn't stretch out...and tha vocab was aight..