Empire vs j dot
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No links
No Quotes pasted on thread
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 07:56 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 11:57 PM.

he said 15 min after check in cause he pre-wrote when he ducked my callout yesterday...but i aint trippn...

check it
your not respected, got them gloves to get knocked out/
1 week in BAM.. the same week you'll clock out/
You switch crews more than J-LO's men, i think its a shame/
You still gunna be wack, dont matter if you changed yo name/*
look, your not hard, get rid of them 'G' dreams/
Stop talkn shit in threads, and take off yo G string/
I'll expose you to those that dont know you, caliph licks balls/
The type that'll stand in da mirror with a wig, just to admire Rue Paul/
You'll never get respect, remember when you posted yo pics/
The caliph one dawg...and you still talked shit/
After gettn clowned back and forth, you never quit at wut yo do/
Except crews...how you get kicked out of one made by you?/*


* his old name caliph
* his crew violent type, he's not in it no more...he started it

caliph your a fag...just like you to not check in...and set 20 post to vote...wtf...

i had to rush to post my vote and shit, and yo prewritten shit cant even get posted in 15 min?

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 12:24 AM.

Attack with them same raps all of um whacked
Like a 'slut' he stay on my 'nuts' his sig say 'KING OF THE SAC'(1)
You 'gay b' just another 'jay-z groupie in 'rap'
You 'hating' not 'elevating' ya bars moving you 'back'(2)
It's 'fucked up' but ya 'lucks up' still you used to 'losing alot'(3)
But keep 'talking' the heat 'sparking' next battle you losing to 'PAC'(R.I.P)

FINISHER-
'Curse me' then 'research me' damn yous a 'fan'
Know all my 'names' huh 'lame' damn yous a 'stan'(3)



1)his sig says king of the sac(yea hanging off my nutsac)
2)his name is j-dot hes abviously a jay-z groupie and he has madd battles and still sucks obviously hes getting worse instead of elevating hes moving back
3)he has 10 losses and only 12 wins hes used to losing by now.. lmao..
4)he knows all my aliases and madd shit he trys to learn about me hes a fucking fan ass groupie why else would he stalk me?

Voted For: Empire

opener-empire
metas-none
punches-empire
structure-empire
flow-j-dot
closer-j-dot

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^that votes gunna get dq'd..its not fully explained...aint worried about it...looks like he's a groupie^ with a poor vote

empire yo bitch ass told me yo names in a pm...stop frontin...thats why you waited hella long so you can front...upp votes...still 0-0

^explained fuck you j dot pussy crying to strobe like a bitch thats all your crew does

i dont even know a strobe..i just said it will but you tracked him down and told him to explain...good for you...


d/r

Voted For: J DOT

j-dot

your not respected, got them gloves to get knocked out/
1 week in BAM.. the same week you'll clock out/
^opened nice
You switch crews more than J-LO's men, i think its a shame/
You still gunna be wack, dont matter if you changed yo name/*
^another decent punch
look, your not hard, get rid of them 'G' dreams/
Stop talkn shit in threads, and take off yo G string/
^Funny shit here
I'll expose you to those that dont know you, caliph licks balls/
The type that'll stand in da mirror with a wig, just to admire Rue Paul/
^not feelin this one
You'll never get respect, remember when you posted yo pics/
The caliph one dawg...and you still talked shit/
^weak punch and kind of a bland line
After gettn clowned back and forth, you never quit at wut yo do/
Except crews...how you get kicked out of one made by you?/*
^oh dang you should've left a link for validation.

Empire

Attack with them same raps all of um whacked
Like a 'slut' he stay on my 'nuts' his sig say 'KING OF THE SAC'(1)
^ha damn that was a nice punch with a weak opening line.
You 'gay b' just another 'jay-z groupie in 'rap'
You 'hating' not 'elevating' ya bars moving you 'back'(2)
^average, not real hard hittin.
It's 'fucked up' but ya 'lucks up' still you used to 'losing alot'(3)
But keep 'talking' the heat 'sparking' next battle you losing to 'PAC'(R.I.P)
^ha that faggot ass dude think he a don using a legends name. But this bar wasn't all that

FINISHER-
'Curse me' then 'research me' damn yous a 'fan'
Know all my 'names' huh 'lame' damn yous a 'stan'(3)
^this was cool

This is tough as hell but I think I'm a have to give this to j-dot on this one cause he came harder with the punches, even though he had a couple dud lines. Empire stuff was flat. You had that nice bar in the beginnin but that unfortunately was your best one out of the whole keystyle. J just came with more heat.

Appreciate the votes empire but I ain't helpin nobody unless I give honest feed.

cool then i dont care as long as you vote for me or not dont matter just vote :thumbup:

thanx for the votes in here...i'll return ALL votes Honestly...even the ones that were blind and voted against me

Voted For: J DOT

in my opinion this would go to j dot, he got this one in my eyes because he came a lil harder with the old name and the crew shit

ups to both of u

vote: J Dot

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Voted For: Empire

both verses were good empire came with better personals then j dot......flow and structure was the dame on both sides.....what made it hard to vote on this battle was both verses were all personals..which just makes it hard to breakdown.....i just felt empires were more complex and he came harder with the finisher....thats what seperated this battle...my vote

Vote:J Dot

Voted For: J DOT

felt ya shit more specially da last line wit da kicked out ya own crew it wuz hott no hate 2wardz empire tho he had kool shit 2 tho

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Voted For: Empire

Aiight ima multi man i like those.......Jdot try to be more complex wit ya rhymes i could actually tell what words were coming next and most of them didnt make sence "look, your not hard, get rid of them 'G' dreams/
Stop talkn shit in threads, and take off yo G string"< didnt relate.....give the voters an explination of why he needs to get rid of those 'G' dreams feel meh???....................Empire nice multies i was feelin those.....but try to make the verse longer next time that was the only thing wrong wit yours....

V/Empire

More explination on empires part.......Empire i felt came harder.....now im not a person to grade quanity over quality at all..........but i felt that empires had more complexity
than Jdot's.....




Peayce

Voted For: J DOT

aight i liked both PS j dot im not sure if his name wus caliph but if it was then w/e, u both had good punches but j dot u just connected more, structure was off a bit for u though, the lenght of bars and shit, but the vocab definitly goes into j dots favor

Voted For: Empire

very close battle

Punches - jdot
Flow - empire
Structure - empire
Multi's - empire
Personals - jdot
Opener - empire
Closer - jdot

Vote - empire

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Voted For: J DOT

i think dot took thise one with more personals and better structure...he had some nice lines in there, and he had a couple punches that connected.his flow was tight from start to finish
empire had a nice flow, but he fell off in some places.he didnt have as many personals as dot, but he made up for it with punches, but not all the punches connect like he thought they would.this was a nice battle.J DOT i wanna battle you i think that will be a competition

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

JUSs checkin

aight good lookn people...i'll return a honest vote when you start battlin city...good lookn...lets get some more votes in here...

Voted For: Empire

I think Empire won this battle........... the flow was off in the opener but u killed him wit punches (next time u dont needa explain em so much) but u did ur thing and i really think bar 2 won this battle for u, it got me laughin and shit......... JDot did ok but his punches didnt hit me as hard as Empires, especially since all of empires lines were good personals and punches

damn close ass battle......................i think one of these votes should be taken away in my opinion tho/////

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Voted For: J DOT

damn ya was in the same crew once.....i cant tell now!!!!

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Voted For: J DOT

iight...heres da breakdown...

Empire -

punches...blahh they were weak...nuttin hard hittin son
wordplay...it was pretty simple...nuttin to challenge my thoughts
metas...blahhh...they was pretty wack 2 fam
creativity...it was just ok i guess...nuttin complex
enjoyment...wasnt feelin ur style...n its dumb how u put...FINISHER...that jus makes the verse even gayer...up ur game fam !

J Dot
punches...they was jus str8...alot better then the other nigga cuz at least ur had metas mixed in
wordplay...decent...alil more complex but some barz dint rhyme but i understand wut u was tryin to do tho...decent shyt
metas...u had a few that were str8...all n all it was pretty decent
enjoyment...ur shyt kept me interested...i was feelin some of the barz...good shyt

Vote - J Dot

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Voted For: J DOT

I liked J-Dots verse his was more direct. He had some good punches.Structure was ight. It jus seemed like his punches hit harder.

Empire verse was good but it jus needed a lil more(lines).
What you did spit was nice man. I would jus like to have seem a few more barz.

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Voted For: Empire

yo i think this goes to Empire n he aint in my crew no more so dont try to bitch out n dq dis, n its no hate,

empire had punhces he had some goos lines and vocab my sug wud b to work on wordplay i mean it was str8 but ive seen betta from u dawg

yo j dot man no hate but look u had dose lines but da g strign line was kinda gay n dint really get it rite threw me off da enitre fukin verse so i wud say dont use dose lines alot, but besides that it was all good jus empire got punches ov au n overall had da beta verse

v/empire

yall return da favors NO HATE!