illuson vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-04-04 at 07:29 AM

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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 07:30 AM.

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 07:37 AM.

maniuplation
is like constapation
his shit wont come out
fukin up pussys is what im about
what ya gonna do when ya see me wit a gun
then yall know this isnt just for fun
im callin out names manuplation and wannabe master
cause when ya both spit all ya hear is laughter
ya a frodent slip ya wornt supoosed to happen dawg quit rappin
befor i gat a can of ass whoppin crackin

fuck droppin unlimited bars...i uncover ya rust like rung cars..
no wonder u cnt spit hard..u "underwired like cheap bra`s..
this no illusion...im about to "put a hole"in ur mental confusion
your breath`s more deadly than cars ozone layer pollution
your punches missing like a handicapped golfer to the swing..
after this battle,b so envious..rename u "the swamp thing"..*
your raps "underfuelled"...like netto cheap centurion lager..
your head so "soft" up top...they call u illusion the "targa"..**
u couldnt cum any harder if you woz hanging outta j-lo..
when u step on stage...they think its the new "muppet show!"
ive sonned you...now u can call me your mother...
its over...backwards like your record,now u start ta stutter

*swamp thing is green...........green with ENVY
*TARGA TOP......another name for convertible or SOFT TOP.....

blah.......

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

you came with harder punches//like the style, thats all i could really say

Voted For: illuson

to be honest both sides sucked but illusion got my vote cause he had a better stucture and flow and that constapation line had me laughing

vote: illusion

omg...im not sayin a word./........................


uppin 4 closure of this attempted battle.

say what ya want no ones stoppin ya ass

Voted For: illuson

illusion came harder wit mo energy...betta punches...betta flow...

yall should b banned..............................

upp

why because (GASP)some one didnt vote for ya take it like a man and shut the fuck up. punk pussy

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

blah illsion came fucking wack not even trying its bunch of shit
manipu get a fucking easy win
she had better punhes and personals
Vote: Illusion LOL

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

People need to fuckin get dick riding off their case...how the fuck is this shit 2-2?!? Manip girl u got this no problem u had punches personals your structure was decent had nice wordplay flowed real good and all in all murdered this twat!....no no this aint hate i jus can't comprehend how this got like this? Illusion you really need to work on your verses dawg coz ur style is still on an extreme newb level and u need to start readin other verses perhaps to get the idea on how to prepare a verse or to improve the way it's layed out because u'll never win a battle usin shit like that!

RTF on ma sig

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

MaNiPuLaTiOn
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

illuson
Punches were good too not as hard as MaNiPuLaTiOn's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

mayn this wasnt a battle at all, you took this no problem, you at least had an idea of what flow is.......... nice punches and shit, so manipulation you got my vote.......\

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