sHoTTaBoY vs SinDrome
 

Battle Rules:

4 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 06:30 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 06:31 AM.

SinDrome has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 06:42 AM.

Dogg, I'm Gon Leave You Paralyzed n Thinkin U Really Do Have DOWN SYNDROME..
..This A Grown Manz War Field n Kids Like U Get SENT-HOME..

Hello Everybody n Welcome To Class....
Its A New Year n We Have A Brand New Student, But Please Be Nice Cause His Rhyme Are ASS..!!

...His Parents Beat Him n Hes Hit With Depression...
..Please Show Some Respect While I Teach This Kid His Lesson...!!
...Before We Star I Have One QUESTION...
How The Hell Do U Expect To Defend Againt These Lyrics I Call WEAPONS...!!?

Opener

You could handle my "Main-course" so ill just murk Ya in ~"Mah Starter"~, Dont Think YA death is In Vain, Cos your a ~"Battle-Martyr"~ (hahah)
~Im-Bizarre-and-Insane"~ The Way My ~"Sciptures-Leave-Blisters"~ Mutilate This Kid with My ~"Lyrical-Twisters"~

Heat- Mettas and Multies

Sindrome Deals ~"Punches-n-Fisters"~ Tah Leave Shottaboy with ~"Drips-n-Blisters"~ got him "chasing death" like hes "racing-a-hurse"
~"Encase-n-reverse"~ the way i "desperse-your-verse" like ~Saron-Gas~ at a ~Mecca-mass~ Sindrome is set to ~"Choke-your-class"~

Like "Sadomasicists-Strolling" I got this Kat Walkin ~Clutching-a-Crutch~ .. Hows This Kid gonna "Step-a-gear-up" When IM ~"Busting-his-Clutch"~?
~Watching-Your-Watch~ ??!!.... Its ~"Time-To-Die"~!!.... Got ya Looking like a "Pea" The Way i Left Ya "Black-Eyed"

Finisher

Like "Rastafarians" puffin joints ... Im "Smoking-This-Herb" Got a Fetish For Concrete? ..... Cos i Got Ya ~"Embracing-The-Curb"~
My "Flow-n-Grace-is-Suberb" .... Snottaboy looks like a noob The Way im ~"Displacing-His-Verb"~

Voted For: SinDrome

not very personal but you came with alot more content in your verse ,multi's n meta's were decent,both had mild punches but sindrome you gotta fix your structure,n shottaboy you gotta elevate your punches there pretty simple...

4-8 Lines.............................
There The Rules Man.......................
Ya Verse Was Nice But Your DQ'ED...................
Better Luck Next Time..

they are 8 lines buddy.... i type my spits in notepad.... count the sentences

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Voted For: SinDrome

Punches- Sindrome
Personals..blah
Multis- Sindrome
Werdplay- None..
Vote- Sindrome

Sindrome..take out those ~""- out of your verse it makes it better or at least look better

vote there:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146955

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Voted For: SinDrome

voted for sin...he had betta flow...stronger punches...

he came wit mo energy...

gave it to sindrome

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: SinDrome

Sindromes got this one.... i didnt really like either of yours structures... but sindrome had some good punches ... i liked your mettas... they were tight... Shotta you were alrigth ... alrigth punches ...but sindrome took this one

This was feedback posted for SinDrome
 

jus checkin out the batles
Sindrome: yours was good nice shit nice flow nice punches and ok personals

Shotta: blah yours was iight but it didnt hit hard

Vote: sindrome

damn all of those votes are unexplained

Voted For: SinDrome

SinDrome-yo punches were hard..tha structure was good..and get rid of tha ( ~ )'z shitz..kinda annoyin' but anyway...tha vocab & flow was pretty good..but basically u had it all tho'...

sHoTTaBoY-yo shit was pretty~good...punches weren't hard enuff 2 get my vote tho'...tha flow was 'aight'..and the vocab was ok too..