Wrecker vs J Dollar
 

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accept it, then i'll drop...
no gay votes..


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Check in by: 09-02-04 at 03:01 PM

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Expired battle win

J Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 02:38 PM.

my bars gonna rape u like jackson with the kids
tech heat up ya body then pop ya lid (head)
have u voting on my bars like an ebay bid
let ya cardiac fluids leak out ya body put a whole in the middle
and play with ya life like ya fucking soul was a fiddle
let the nine box u up like a packaged lego's
have u needing insurance like the geico gecko
leave u bloody like ya on period popping some midol
let the heater speak for me and flatline ya vitals
get ya girl wet then clap u with the tech, and have ya mind relasping like the butterfly effect

Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 03:00 PM.

*- Memph Bleek- Round Here; Mr. Cheekz Was In A Group Called Lost Boys
**Lloyd Banks..

Voted For: J Dollar

WRECKER!! YOUR STRUCTURE WAS UTTERLY HORRIBLE, PLZ, THAT WILL REALLY MAKE YOU LOSE BATTLES, DON'T WRITE LIKE THAT. BECAUSE HONESTLY, WE DON'T HAVE TO READ YOUR BATTLE, BUT WE DO, AND YOU'RE JUST MAKING IT HARDER BY SCATTERING WORDS AND NOT LINING UP YOU'RE LINES. BUT I THINK THAT J DOLLARS OPENER WAS STRONGER, AND HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE CONSISTENT ANYWAY, ALSO HIS STRUCTURE WAS FLAWLESS, AND IT GAVE A VERSE A REALLY GOOD FLOW, WHICH I ENJOYED MORE, BASED FROM THIS, I HAVE TO GIVE BATTLE TO J DOLLAR...

RETURN THE FAVOR RIGHT HERE CUZ, THANX..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146839

structure..this is such a bullshit vote, friggin herbs man..punches his were stronger you dont even understand my punches kidd..dont ever vote on my crap if you dont get it you idiot..structure, what an herb..

uppin for votes, vote on this battle and i'll return the favor

Voted For: J Dollar

My vote is goin out to J Dollar I think he had a betta flow and betta punches!!

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wHY DO I HAVE TO BE A HERB JUST BECAUSE I DON'T THNK THAT YOUR VERSE WAS GOOD.. I READ THE BATTLE OVER 3 TIMES, HE ATE YOU.. YOU DON'T DESERVE TO WIN, SO WHY ARE YOU COMPLAINING? AND YOUR PUNCHES WERE PLAYED, YOU READ MY BATTLE RIGHT, DID YOU SEE WHAT EVEYONE SAID ABOUT MY PUNCHES, I HAVE ORIGINAL AND CLEVER SHIT TO SAY, YOU DIDN'T GET AT THIS MAN THAT HARD. YOU'RE THE HERB JUST FOR BEING A SORE LOSER, AND YOU CHALLENGED ME TO A BATTLE? WOW KID, DO YOU REALLY WANNA GET EMBARRASSED AGAIN, LIKE THIS DUDE J DOLLAR IS DOIN TO U?

SEE, I'M NOT THE ONLY WON WHO THINKS THAT YOU GOT RIPPED..


ANYWAY, CAN YA'LL RETURN AN HONEST VOTE IN THIS BATTLE..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146839

lol kidd, played punches..haha

shut up you fag, i hate d/r's..only herbs vote on structure and flow..

his punches were really better?..quote one of his punches that were better than any of mines..

d/r's please stay out of this thread..! only honest votes..

uppin for votes, vote up on this and i'll return the favor

Voted For: Wrecker

IIGHT THIS WAS A CLOSE BATTLE BUT I HAVE 2 GO WITH WRECKER HE CAME A LIL HARDER OK STRUCTURE OK PUNCHLINES BOTH CAN ELIVATE A LIL MORE

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Voted For: Wrecker

wreker took this...was better...had punches...personals...multies...and the structure was hella wierd...but i got it...it had good flow to...dollar...u just need to get more creative...both can elevate...vote wreker

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Voted For: Wrecker

u took this with better vocab, word play and multies...it also had good flow, harder punches and better personals...you both came at each other...just wreker came harder...both of you can elevate alot...be more creative wit ure shit...vote wreker...just was over all better

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uppin for votes, vote up on this battle and i'll return the favor

vote up and i'll return the favor just let me know who ya battling

Voted For: Wrecker

blah one sided battle
wrecker... you elevated yo yours was veryy good and killed all of j dlooars verse ya had nice personalds nice punches though ya flow and structre wasnt that good

J: yours was basic no hard hitting shit all basic and it was plain wack try harder

Vote: Wrecker

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honestly, you are a fuckin newbie herb bitch who can't take critisicm.. and i'll battle you any time, you suck, and ask anyone on here, they'll tell you that i'm better than you.. plus you have a couple of d/r votes, they don't even explain bitch, so get a life you internet nerd..

what the fuck is this? now that's a D/R vote, atleast i explained why J Dollar merked you in more than 2 lines.. haha, u suck ass..

Voted For: Wrecker

Wrecker gets my vote..structure was good..tha punches were harder than's J Dollar that's what basically Wrecker took this one..

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how come all of my votes have been taken away..i've had like 6 votes, thats wack..ssome of them had good feedback, it doesnt take an essay to give feedback!!..

thats wack, he got two votes overall and got one taken away and i got like 6-7 and all of them got taken away..

payday, paramik, and lyrical all had good explanations and thats only on the second page..

can we get some explained votes, dont sleep on this..

Voted For: Wrecker

flow: wrecker
punches: wrecker by far each line was slick and hot
wordplay: wrecker
creativeness: wrecker

Call Me Memph Bleek Coz Battlin Wreck?|..Ye Not Seen Round Here..|N Yell Get Left Wit A Loss|*lost*|Boy Like Mr Cheeks
JDollar Beatin Me? |..Is Plain Blasphemy..|Coz Wen Movin Microwaves To Kitchens Is The Only Time This Kids Packin Heat*
Swearin Ye Nyce But On Da Reel Kid|..I've Seen Ye Writtens,And They Suck..|Like A Vaccum Cleanin Device, N Yea Ur Gay
Its Like Test Drivin Downhill |..Coz Elevation Isn't Geared Ya Way..|N Ye Only Goin From Bottom To Top On Opposites Day
Reachin Me??..You're Not Elevating|..I'm The General & Your The Bitch..|You Can't Stand To My Rank
Your See-Thru Kid|..Coz The Only Time I See Dollars..|Is When Robbing Banks**
Never Gett'n To Me|..Dude You Can't Reach My Level..|So Learn Son You'll Never Be Considered Important..
And I Don't Consider Myself A Thug|..But I'll Shoot Up J's..|Like A '94 Version Of Michael Jordan..

i had to copy the whole verse cuz it was simply sick...

thanks..

uppin'.. .

Voted For: Wrecker

Vote Wrecker

For better punches, wordplay use of vocab and basically getting in that ass with some dope lines

Reachin Me??..You're Not Elevating|..I'm The General & Your The Bitch..|You Can't Stand To My Rank
Your See-Thru Kid|..Coz The Only Time I See Dollars..|Is When Robbing Banks**

DOPE^^^


J DOLLAR learn more consistent punches and some personals and work on uppin ya vocab some

NO BEEF JUST ELEVATE

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Voted For: Wrecker

Wrecker
ur structure u should fix liked da wordplay
n da punches flow wasn't 2 good kuz lack
of structure but i gave u da battle

JDollar
u coulda used more wordplay n ya flow was
kinda odd ya structure was better but Wrecker
got u his wordplay gave his punches a lil edge
but good verse overall good battle

vote honestly on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

uppin', thannks for the votes and f/b..
drop your links i'll get back to 'em

uppin' this crap for more votes.... .

uppin............................................. ......................................

Voted For: J Dollar

jdollar gets this cos his flow was better and his verse had a better structure...punches hit harder and wordplay was good too..wrecker i honestly didnt c ya lines flow and the structure slacked a lil...both verses were good but dollar gets this for an overall better verse...


hit mines up


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uppin', this has been up for centuries.., .

Voted For: Wrecker

wrecker won better flow 2 da braincellz connected da bars an stuff an da finisher killed diz other nigga i liked ur flow wrecker dope rhymes homie u get my vote

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