J Dollar vs -..Jono..-
 

Battle Rules:

5 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-04 at 06:16 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

J Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:46 PM.

-..Jono..- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 05:49 PM.

i'm bout to stomp a hole in this nigga jono
the tech split ya body have u screaming out "oh no"
how u gonna lose to a newb that u don't know
u couldn't cum harder if u had a super model lick ya dick then jerk it quick
i'm flawless my lines are perfect
got niggas in the background saying "go ahead merk em"
u couldn't beat me dog even if ya father abused u
so i'm gonna slow my lyrics down so they don't confuse u
ya lyrics couldn't touch me even if they were michael jackson
45 leave u on the ground like the ying yang twins saying "ah, what happened"
the 45 started clapping dislodging ya anatomy
u couldn't even "merc me" if u was a battery
so nigga don't be mad at me cause i'm blowing ya brain up
the tech unclog ya system like a bottle of draino
battling me is like doing drugs nigga just say no


1.)"u couldn't cum harder if u had a super model lick ya dick then jerk it quick"
he couldn't try any harder

2.)"u couldn't even "merc me" if u was a battery"
mercury use to exist in batteries

Aint no Bridge to pass this Watah, don' Botha suckin up to Me yellin Hollah..
Me? Equivalent to Jdolla?, Its impossible to compare 'Navigators' to n' 'Impala'
First letter of Your name, Begins wit "J"(ay) n its all gonna end the Same
Jay re-incarnated s-carter left the game wit fame, you jus leave a "No-name"..

..Boring Rookie, N ill give you your basic Self Assessment...
You aint the next rookie, Your jus Jono's next bitch
Whos the rookie of the month, Shit you jus gon' n Guess it
Cant beat me christmas is over, better go onto your next wish..

..for me to succeed, don' worry you cant prevent the inevitable
This bitch thinks its better, realinzin he was a Homo before a Heterosexual
It doesnt take n Intellectual, to be labeled n emcee spittin Respectable
The only time this "Faggat" spits, is from his bois asshole bein Sexual...

is somethin all i can be, Cop all you want say i copped the slogan of the AR-MY
there aint nottin you can do to scar me, even if i was in a Jail you couldnt "Bar" me
Take it from a vet, who 'Is' in here for a battle to the death
You the same as a bitch who chokes in there sleep, aint gon' make it quit wastin your breath..

vote up people and i'll return the favor, vote up on this

This was feedback posted for -..Jono..-
 

juss check tough i would vote for jono

ight, uppin for votes..lets get this closed, n more goin ~Hollah

Voted For: -..Jono..-

this was a cunfuzing battle but nun the less jono took it:
opener: 4/10
closener: 5/10
metas: 6/10
multi's: 6/10
punches: 7/10
v/jono

return the favour in my battle vs mookie in my sig thanks peace

Voted For: -..Jono..-

.-..Jono..- took this 1 this time..his punches were harder..decent flow..nice vocab (ez 2 read)..a nice structure (was almost stretched out)..

ight, uppin for votes with adequte feedback, will return the favor properly..hollah back

Voted For: -..Jono..-

Damn damn damn...hell of a verse.

Jono:Dominated this battle. The wordplay, punches, multis, and flow. You had the whole package. This is like a 9/10 verse to me. You got the bar joint and the christmas wish thing. This was a overal hot joint.

J Dollar:I wasn't fillin your verse. It had a nice flow to it but lacked any good punches. Gotta get them punches in there is you wanna win a battle.

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Voted For: -..Jono..-

jono took it...his punches and his flow...just dominated the battle...he had betta strucure too...and he just came wit mo enegy and hard hittin punches...
jd...had a nice verse 2...but i wusnt feelin it as much as jonos shit...didnt flow as much as jono's shit...

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Voted For: -..Jono..-

Aight, Jono Got This...

Better Structure An Metas, Couldda Upped Ya Punches n Hit Harder Jono, But Proppz, Nice Drop...

Dollar Ya Need'a Work On Wordplay n Add Homour To Ya Punches, Work On Structure Too

Nice Battle Tho, Ya'll Keep em Comin...

Return The FAVOR..!!

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