upfront vs newkid
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 08:14 PM

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upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 08:15 PM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 08:48 PM.

mayn u fuckin wack step up out mah face..
b4 i dump shells down ya throat 2 let u get a taste..
if i was u i wuldnt show mah battle record cus that sht is a disgrace..

stop claimin philly u makin tha sixers look bad..
tha reason ya nephew look like me cus im ya sista kids dad..
n u flow culdnt b tyte if u was a virgin n tha ass..

u quick 2 beef..
i can put marks on ya face not juss ya sneaks..
i stick u up like a dolphins beak..
n have u n ya crew n tha water floatin like false teeth..


like tha movies.."Sit Down Upfront"
prolli anotha white kid.."Fuck Off Butt Munch"(Shit White Pepl say)

u aint all "Growned Up" u juss still a fuckin rugrat..
i make ya duck(Gurl) quack..
wait till i cock tha slug back..
put a clip 2 ya chik..den leave her bodi dead wea tha mud at..(Ground)

pussi..i creep 2 ya house..
reach threw mah pouch..(Pouch=Pocket)
put tha heat 2 ya mouth..
den get sum cheeks 4rm ya spouse..
go downstairs.. den kick mah feet on ya couch..
so wen ya peeps cum 2 ya house..dey think u sleep but u out..

ayo,

youse a "newkid" thats gettin boxed by vets/
i gotcha ass gettin cold from dem midnight sweats/
i stay puttin poison in niggas mouths killin em quicka than cigarettes/
nigga dis is tha beginnin u act like its da 7th innin stretch/
burn y0o skin from da heata lookin like da new york mets/

mayne u think u a philly balla get off da fuckin site/
u like a vanilla hershey kiss u sweet and appear ta be white/

cmon now iverson dont mix wit cam/
u spit elementary ryhmes go take ya final exam/(hah)

naw fuck ya record thas cuzza ya dick ridin friends/
u da opposite of remarkable like white out pens/
ppl ask whether im unna drown u in shallow waters or shoot ya, at depends(deep ends)/
if im in a bad mood ill jus beat ya ta death/
but if im in a good mood ill shoot ya instead/

nigga cmon now u a one hit wonder sumthin like sisqo/
u act real hard but ya softa than crisco/
flip s0o many chips u can call me nabisco/
send s0o many bullets at ya head like garcia from san francisco/

get more oats than quaker does/
get more victories than da lakers cuz/
fill u up wit more lead than paper ,,,trus/

uppin mayne^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^get at me wit sum votes thanks

ill return da fava

uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin mayne ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^

Voted For: NewKid

im gonna have to go with your verse on this one......both verses were good though....both had nice rhymes.....but i just felt u beat him out because u had some better multies and some personals too....i liked the one about his record lol.....ya'll both need to work on multies not just rhymin one word at the end like...

im gonna give u a pound/
then u can blow rounds/

i'll tear the shitty grin off this wack-thug/
then send his ass home to pack-fudge
you'll get votyes by doin this instead of basic rhyming but none the less my vote is for......
New Kid

by the way return the favor and vote on my battles honestly

Voted For: NewKid

NewKid gets my vote...had alot of Multi's in there...some pretty nice punches in there...tha structure was aight..tha flow was 'ok'..and tha vocab was good..ez 2 read...

upfront...yo shit was good to...punches could've been a little harder...tha structure was ok...tha flow was good..and tha vocab was aight...

overall- NewKid took this one..punches were harder than upfront's and they landed...

Voted For: upfront

upfront sounds like you came out to win you had the better harder hittin punches flow was riddic especially your finisher personals you came better.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146120
I will say this tho both of you bring your verses together and don't put ...or / at the end of your lines it's newbish.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146120
NewKid you was good but what can I say it always happens to the 'NewKid on the block' i say learn from this battle and make your punches hit harder as that wins battles. Get some personals for the ooh effect. Always have a dope nice openin a dope finish, cuz people mostly read them, and then be consisitent in the middle. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146120

Voted For: upfront

youse a "newkid" thats gettin boxed by vets/
i gotcha ass gettin cold from dem midnight sweats/

upfront came out bustin hard i felt wit pl's dat hit hard i like ur metta's and u win on structure fo sho i feel upfront understands da concept of bars better den who he faced

NewKid ur flow came nice u started slow but and da end u came hard but ur structure wuz off and ur bars were kinda of off key or jus laid out werid or sumthing but overrall both had good sheit .......... both stay up

Voted For: NewKid

ooo shit...... nice shit from both you guys...

i was feeling both but i gotta go for newkid on this stuff
nice multis all over the place... iwas feelin the ryhmes and i liek the shit... keep on goin man

favorite line -
pussi..i creep 2 ya house..
reach threw mah pouch..(Pouch=Pocket)
put tha heat 2 ya mouth..
den get sum cheeks 4rm ya spouse..
go downstairs.. den kick mah feet on ya couch..
so wen ya peeps cum 2 ya house..dey think u sleep but u out..

This was feedback posted for upfront
 

i think both yall did good n this was a close battle but i kant vote so yea...lol

Voted For: NewKid

new kid takes this by a few better lines...it was funny, hard and he had good punches, multies, metas,,,all dat shit...upfront ures was aight to, but he got you on the creativity part...both of your structures are way off, u both need to work on that fo sho...other than that yall did aight...vote goes to new kid, it was just overall better

Voted For: upfront

my vote goes to upfront. the sturcture for both was good but newkids was kinda hard to read into the middle of it. flow was good for both and upfronts multis were way better and upfronts closer was tight newkids was kinda weak draged on to much.

Voted For: NewKid

this was a pretty decent battle,, but overall i gotta hand this one to newkid

Upfront
you had a pretty decent verse.. but something's i really wasnt feeling .. your structure was like a fukin heart beat .. that shyt kept on moving up and down . and around .. next time keep constant... punchlines were okay .. some were hitten hard but some where also played .. all of your lines were pretty lame to begin with .. The line about the mets come one man you could have worded it better.. but dont get me wrong some lines were pretty decent but you were just not .. really good in this battle, overall your verse was like a 4/10

New kid
nice verse dog.. you had a pretty decent verse.. some punchlines were really connecting hard .. and some mad alot of sense or should i say all compared to Upfront.. your strucutre was iight but the sames as upfront... Personals were decent ... overall decent nothing spetacular battle so ima have to give this one to : New kid

please hit my battle HONEST vote with troop if you have enought wins iight pz.