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E Looch vs Phantom
Battle Rules:
14 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting No Pms or Aims For Votes No D/r Votes Minimum posts to vote: 700 Check in by: 09-03-04 at 12:43 AM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:44 PM.
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sacrificin good punches for 'heavy' vocab, and you think ya gone scare me?...
watch as i leave your weak punches missin, and make ya 'dictionary'... hmm, a biter that sucks, why didnt you choose to use 'e leech'?... you think you gun win cuz you prayin, guess what? im the one to preach... son you like im my home state, quickly blow by you with ease... i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'... of course im gonna win, your flows ass, you basically rappin wit farts... begin your verse with "Phantom wins" so it can finish before it starts... faggot, wearin mini skirts and high-heels aint a 'he-man' strong thing... i wanna "disperse" my verse, but then i'd be battlin ya personal belongings... you a poor bitch with torn clothes, constantly throwin his punches weak... plus your the only rapper whos house gets emptied at least once a week...(dumpster) I rule you hoe, you wanna switch places? you only got one hope... cuz if the weak inherit the earth then i guess youll own the whole globe... *fuckers with 700 posts better get the damn wordplay... |
E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 11:30 PM.
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hang phantom quicker than surf lynchers hangin 10
kind 15 on a 10 speed givin new meanin to pussy peddlin* his sexuality like thinkin & drivin he not sure which way 2 go like condoms wit lungs his raps are known to suck an blow sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams make a.i change his number when he facin the worlds greatest** u no originator ya whole sig makes u a second hand plagiarist paper come from trees so with ease i de-root prewrotes*** like friends signin on his cast i got phantom takin foot notes rip his cotton text,peelin buns of sheeps hierloom versus passin down defeats kid nervous heart in his throat so he can chatter wit beats u ill? is like sayin satanic writins in eden ya scripts will never reign i'll inject ya own cereal in ya arms so u know that ya lifes in vein *peddlin pussy is porstitition **think olympics stupid *** dude pmd with a already set 14 lines spit LMAO add up the facts |
blah i only said 14 cuz i thought it was a nice amount. w/e i dont care its ok, its just a battle. *takes deep breath and counts to ten*
uppin |
Voted For: E Looch
you both had extremely good verses and i got to say i definitly jealous of both of you... Empire you had Sum hard punches and also better flow... Phantom you had good punches but you had wack flow... v/ Empire.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo sry i was goonna vote for Empire shit i'm so stupid... i'll stay wit dat vote cuz you were both even...
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what the fuck............i dont get it......obviously wasnt paying attention.....*has to take a deep breathe and count to ten again* okay whatever.
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thanx man lets havve a round in dastreeetz.......
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i should merk u for callin me empire
and u better not whine a n bitch abnout every single fuckin vote or ull lose respect quick an ill do the same fuckin thing about gettin em removed u lost just except an move on kid |
Voted For: E Looch
sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams That was sum ILL shit right there. You took the whole battle wit that one bar. Punches'Personals'Wordplay..... Flow'Meti4s'Structure.... All E Looch. Not a close one at all. -1 |
glad somebody caught that punch
uppin for more honest and explained votes |
this battle gettin slept on
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Voted For: E Looch
hang phantom quicker than surf lynchers hangin 10 kind 15 on a 10 speed givin new meanin to pussy peddlin* complex but decent his sexuality like thinkin & drivin he not sure which way 2 go like condoms wit lungs his raps are known to suck an blow nice similes sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams this was a dope line not personal but nice make a.i change his number when he facin the worlds greatest** u no originator ya whole sig makes u a second hand plagiarist decent paper come from trees so with ease i de-root prewrotes*** like friends signin on his cast i got phantom takin foot notes lmao this was dope (2nd part) rip his cotton text,peelin buns of sheeps hierloom versus passin down defeats kid nervous heart in his throat so he can chatter wit beats decnt not personal though u ill? is like sayin satanic writins in eden ya scripts will never reign i'll inject ya own cereal in ya arms so u know that ya lifes in vein decent simile sacrificin good punches for 'heavy' vocab, and you think ya gone scare me?... watch as i leave your weak punches missin, and make ya 'dictionary'... dont understand...unless a dictonary is heavy hmm, a biter that sucks, why didnt you choose to use 'e leech'?... you think you gun win cuz you prayin, guess what? im the one to preach... first part is decent son you like im my home state, quickly blow by you with ease... i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'... this was a nice line of course im gonna win, your flows ass, you basically rappin wit farts... begin your verse with "Phantom wins" so it can finish before it starts... decent but not personal faggot, wearin mini skirts and high-heels aint a 'he-man' strong thing... i wanna "disperse" my verse, but then i'd be battlin ya personal belongings... blah not a good punch you a poor bitch with torn clothes, constantly throwin his punches weak... plus your the only rapper whos house gets emptied at least once a week...(dumpster) blah I rule you hoe, you wanna switch places? you only got one hope... cuz if the weak inherit the earth then i guess youll own the whole globe aint feeling this line too much vote e looch for a harder hitting verse |
cause u didnt get my closer obviuosly more wordplay then u could comprehend
cereal is life not that shit u eat with milk i didnt think i would have to explain that least u voted though uppin |
This was feedback posted for E Looch
i'd vote for elooch but im fucking lazy so i'll juss check the votes
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ummm... i gotta agree phantom is elevating you got good punches in ya verse
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Voted For: Phantom
ok e alot of your shit aint rhyme here and it had good punches but no real personals or good disses it would have made a good punchline verse flow was ok and structure and vocab was good a 5/10 phantom good opener good diss in second bar eleech lmao good herb line too ender aint rhyme that giood though nice disses and equal punches helped you win this barely by a hair 5.5/10 e if you disses more instead of reling on all punches you couldve won either way this is weak verses from both of you i expected better but with better disses phantom gets it...barely |
^ im sick of your bitch ass givin me hate votes u talk shit duck, me in a battle and then come and vote against me cause i didnt vote for you think its about time u get banned :thumbup:
this should have been an easy k.o leave it to this site to make it a close battle uppin |
no its wasnt a k.o he spit better then you stop being such a cocky bitch but ill show you a k.o since your still yapping our battles up check in whore
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ok e alot of your shit aint rhyme here and it had good punches but no real personals or good disses it would have made a good punchline verse flow was ok and structure and vocab was good a 5/10
what the flyin fuck..... CAN YOU NOT READ? the whole lookin for E like eye Exams....(E Looch) you moron... and the whole....your my Phan....(fan)Phantom....you moron... Why are people like this so god damn bull-headed.... read the verse's.....not the last word of each line! WORDS DONT HAVE TO LOOK ALIKE TO RYHME!!!!! |
damn im actually tied up in dis, i cant believe he didnt get the dictionary thing: i said he used "heavy vocab" and ill leave his "dictionary" as in "airy-diction".....which "air" isnt heavy. but damn looch i guess its a good battle.
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Voted For: E Looch
Ima give E-Looch the vote on this 1 i thought his verse had better creativity than Phantoms plus i felt the connections with the punches in his verse were better...personals E-Looch used the PM thang which was good i think the flow was a bit off wit Phantom whereas E-Looch came quite good there too also i felt E-Looch had a better structure his verse was better layed out...all in all E got this... RTF (Mad Dog vs One-Man-Band) |
yo this is a sry i voted on da wrong battle and i thought this was a epire battle shit... sry guy's...
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lol he didnt spit nothin better then me u gave me a hate vote cause i voted for forsaken u fuckin geek and preciate ya carson need more voters that realize that on this site and mothafuckers wonder why i dont battle on here that much the voting is a fuckin joke uppin bitch |
Voted For: Phantom
Wow, this shit was close. Both of you came with good structure and plenty of strong punches. Both of you guys came with some good personals, and I like how you both managed to play off your opponent's name so well. But E some of your punches fell short, like the "suck and blow" line. Although you managed to save it with that line about the eye exams (good stuff, that was one of my favorite lines in your verse), I'm gonna have to give my vote to Phantom. He kept his strong punches consistent through his whole verse, and his finisher was just a lot better. Looch your last line made sense, but I feel you could've used something a little better than "cereal" to get your point across. No hate though, this was a good battle on both your parts... Vote - Phantom |
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Sorry Looch, guess that one was just a little over my head there. But now that I think of it, your closer was pretty good... |
DONT FUCKIN VOTE THEN U GOD DAMN IDIOT
fuck outta here |
damn, i will have to admit i lost this one now that ive seen more but maybe its the voters preferenc in style that makes them vote the way they do, looch thanks for the battle, you could win and id still feel happy bout how i did but over time we gunna have to have a rematch. maybe someone will nominate this for best battle.
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Voted For: E Looch
Phantom- had the better opener, a fair amount of punches.. some hard hittin' to, wordplay was good.. structure was a lil' shakey.. but not bad at all.. very nice Phantom.. (8/10) E Looch- had the better closer, his wordplay out-weighed Phantoms with the complexity.. as well as the creativitie, esp. in the closer mentionin' the cereal-life-veins-inject-arms, it was simple yet complex.. ya structure was better barely.. vocab was sic as usual.. punches delivered very smoothly however, Phantom had better punches in my opinion.. but as personals go u took it, since the first bar... although i did like Phantoms.. part that said: faggot, wearin mini skirts and high-heels aint a 'he-man' strong thing... i wanna "disperse" my verse, but then i'd be battlin ya personal belongings... ^very funny.. lmfao.. hee hee.. this is one of the closest battles, i've seen thus far but E Looch took this barely... but both of y'all were fuckin' sik wit it.. best lines: Phantom.. "son you like im my home state, quickly blow by you with ease... i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'..." best lines: E Looch "sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams" lmfao.. good job and good luck with this 2 both.. ~wun~ hold up i spent this time voting, and writin' a good explanation, y'all should visit my battle in my sig drop a vote, highly recommended!!!!!!! lol ~jus blazin' niggas~ ~~1!~~ |
Voted For: Phantom
OMG... Phantom wins this one... ouch... tite... Phantom I was really feelin' your wordplay... I got it... lol Metas: Phantom Punches: Phantom Structure: Phantom Wordplay: Phantom E Looch you came good man... much props... I seen you merk Empire...lol... Phantom just got you on that one... just keep workin' on it I can't tell you really what to work on cuz you two are vets and you know what you gotta do... keep it up and gl to both of you. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Phantom
Aight, Nice Battle.... Kinda Hard To Choose Who Got This One.. I Think Phantoim Had Better Wordplay n Used His Vocab Alot Better, Couldda Hit Wit Harder Punches But On The Whole Nice Drop Looch Ya Rhymes Was Aight, U Lacked Creativeity, Didnt Really Say Anythin Humouress Or That Caughty My Eye, Ya Know? Nice Drop Tho, Keep Em Comin Ya'll.. Return The Fave P E A C E Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
up for non idiots to vote
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awww looch, you were talkin bout all dis "dont bitch about the votes" but got it reopened, i dont care tho, shits a good battle, none of this net-beef crap neither....up.
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fo real this was a really good battle both did well
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Voted For: E Looch
E Looch Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent...shit was kinda stretchy tho... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... [b]Phantom[b] Punches were good too not as hard as E Looch's tho... Structure was good..yo shit was too strechy tho... Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... |
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