NoMercy vs Livin Legend
 

Battle Rules:

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No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 11:11 PM

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NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 11:12 PM.

takin these newbs like you, would be done with ease/
your always in my thread posting gay replys your just like a little disease/.
i make you run for your life the way i spit dangerous it makes you freeze/
drop you fast not to say to much and make you bow down on your knees/.
you thought you could take me in a flash/
but naw i took it to you like you were a old stinky bag of trash/.
im never gonna let back on this motha fucka he thinks hes a baller/
but ill make him run for his money cuz i took it and he's broke with no dollar/.
i aint the kinda playa to lock you down/
cuz i aint like a cop, cuz when they around me they make me frown/
but you remind me of a cunt bitch like a cop/
that makes me fell like nockin you up and make you drop/.

ill be waiting for you to spit now i got my freestyle in now just go ok!

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 12:04 AM.

nigga curve ya attitude cause i know ya jealous
faggot walking around trying to stunt wearing perry ellis
so i show "no mercy" when i crack down on wack emcees
hollow tips blow through ya head leave ya skull all empty
desert eagle throw slugz thru ya fitted
lyrics leave stains on ya career like i just shitted
u trying to pull a win on me u dumb fuck
head shot so gruesome cops cover ya face like young buck
from letting lead fly my heater stays hot
and leaves white lines around ya ass like a acme parking lot
when u see me u better stand up like a field of crops
and u still couldn't win if u had michael jordan take ya last shot


his sig has a picture of young buck with a mask on

vote up on this people, and vote up on my other battle Livin Legend vs SoLe

ya so what if i got a pic of youngbuck witha mask on what you gonna do about it!
o and uppin

This was feedback posted for NoMercy
 

no mercy is known for chaeting.. he gets on other accounts and votes for himself.. rofl

o ya how do you kno you won by cheating im niot cheater lol im gonna get caught cheating when i got all my wins more then you already and i wasent cheating shut up loser^^

uppin for votes in this battle, vote up on this shit

Voted For: Livin Legend

My vote goes to Livin Legend...

Flow ~ Legend had better flow to his post, while NoMercy's seemed a little more choppy and off-beat. The structure needs sortin', but I have problems with that too, so it's all gravy.

Punches ~ "You couldn't win if you had Michael Jordan take ya last shot" is a great line, and it made an otherwise even punch battle go in his favor EDGE: Legend

Vocab ~ Both were kinda weak on vocab, but no hate.

Vote goes to LivinLegend

Return the vote, and vote on my battles against:

Illusion

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konfused suck a fat one you suck so bad ill merk you so fast this liven legend goof is jsut a loser plus how can i be off beat what beat are we rapping to? this is text you dont need flow or any of that shit think better wannabe

uppin, vote up on this shit cause we needing votes

Voted For: Livin Legend

yo i was feelin this niggas flow more then that nomercy nigga i like this flow better plus u shit on that nigga mayn

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Voted For: Livin Legend

livin ledgend takes this...he just had better punches and personals...both of ure flow was on, but it came down to who was harder...nomercy...it was an aight flow, but u just didnt get creative enough...so my vote goes to livinledgend ,,,was just better

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Voted For: Livin Legend

livin legend your stuff was mad simple. No real personals that "no mercy" line was so cheesy and not creatively used. You had a couple metas that weren't all that bad.

NoMercy you just was ranting on. This verse had no creative content in it. choppy with no flow and tons of overstretced lines. Not even an attempt at personals.

Livin legend wins.

please vote on my I.Mind battle. check the signature.

uppin, vote in this shit

uppin

Voted For: Livin Legend

faggot walking around trying to stunt wearing perry ellis
LoL...wassn't great but funny as hell to me

head shot so gruesome cops cover ya face like young buck
good line...personal too cause of his sig

and u still couldn't win if u had michael jordan take ya last shot
Damn....got him the win if you ask me.

Didn't really see anything from NoMercy stick out...he had acouple good punches in there. But nothin to really get him da win. Keep it up do Mercy...you got da talent.

uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

punches - NoMercy...he had more decent punches then LL...LL prolly had like 1 or 2 decent punches...da rest was weak

meta4s - blahh...TIE...wasnt really any...simple ish !

personals - tie...u both had 1 a piece...weak tho

wordplay - tie...both were pretty simple...get creative n shyt !

enjoyment - No Mercy...his punches were alil harder then LLs shyt...LLs first line was ill but he fell off after that...no mercy stayed consistent wit his verse wit decent punches, not great but they were decent

Vote - NM

yo thanks uppin if anyone votes for me ill return the favour

Voted For: NoMercy

yo man i think dis realli was a lil close of a battle but nbo mercy jus pullled up his flow was hot tha vocab was iight koulda bin betta. the rhymes were iight needs a lil bigga word n tha punchlines i thought were pretty hot so
vote=no mercy

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uppin

Voted For: NoMercy

my vote is for NoMercy

is style was just nice and disses was harder
and i liked his structure

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^what a dumbass he didnt even explane good enough that votes getting doscollifid now

Voted For: NoMercy

No Mercy
they both aight some simple rhyming but good structre on both sides but no mercy had a better flow

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what goofs like cereal explain yer vote or dont vote goofs

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Voted For: Livin Legend

livin legend wins due to just having a better verse, everything was better....structure...syllably counte...punches./..you name it...it was better....no mercy your showin signs of improvement but you still show many signs of weakness..keep at it playa

Voted For: Livin Legend



takin these newbs like you, would be done with ease/
your always in my thread posting gay replys your just like a little disease/.
5/10
i make you run for your life the way i spit dangerous it makes you freeze/
drop you fast not to say to much and make you bow down on your knees/.
4/10
you thought you could take me in a flash/
but naw i took it to you like you were a old stinky bag of trash/.
2/10
im never gonna let back on this motha fucka he thinks hes a baller/
but ill make him run for his money cuz i took it and he's broke with no dollar/.
2/10
i aint the kinda playa to lock you down/
cuz i aint like a cop, cuz when they around me they make me frown/
2/10
but you remind me of a cunt bitch like a cop/
that makes me fell like nockin you up and make you drop/.
1/10

well that shit was intresting* ya punches were lame didnt connect at all u didnt have any wordplay and ya complexity wasent there and u had 0 personals and u didnt have structure so u need 2 elevate b4 u think about gettin into another battle


nigga curve ya attitude cause i know ya jealous
faggot walking around trying to stunt wearing perry ellis
5/10
so i show "no mercy" when i crack down on wack emcees
hollow tips blow through ya head leave ya skull all empty
5/10
desert eagle throw slugz thru ya fitted
lyrics leave stains on ya career like i just shitted
5/10
u trying to pull a win on me u dumb fuck
head shot so gruesome cops cover ya face like young buck
5/10
from letting lead fly my heater stays hot
and leaves white lines around ya ass like a acme parking lot
5/10
when u see me u better stand up like a field of crops
and u still couldn't win if u had michael jordan take ya last shot
5/10

ya punches were ok and ya complexity was ok ya structure was kinda onpoint but it made it look kinda stretched and atleast u had some personals in there wasent a really good drop but it was better than your opponents