illuson vs Mad Dog
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r votes
No h8 votes

Aight lil boy lets see if u can step up like u say u can...after all u said u'd beat me in a PM technically a callout...so you first :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-06-04 at 10:42 AM

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Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 10:43 AM.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 10:45 AM.

this mother fucker wont shut the fuck up tryed to jump ashanti and got cut up ya aint no thug ya lil mut/

or a g ya corny raps might work in crawley ill have ya in the same ditch as chris farley/

ya talkin bout popin shit please the only thing ya pop is ya mas zits ill burn ya ass with lit grits/

im eatin ya alive im so despised i dont win these stupid battles but ya know inside these battles is mine/

im bein serious no one wants to hear a rapper that drinks tea
ya cant see me/

ya only claim to fame is this bullshit website i dont belive ya hype ya like weed about to smoked thourgh a pipe/

923 post come to the west coast see how much ya can boast yar getin burnt like toast ya have to tell people to vote like most/

they cant do it by them selves after this im put ya boring rap style on the shelf begin for help/

tear of ya trousers and expose ya pussy ya like crumpts musshy/

mother fucker bite me i got ya ass in a choke hold fight me
look back at my battles and bite me/

this damn puppys lucky i aint murderd em in the u.s no ones ever heard of em/

dont even try to prusit its over ya blew it/

post ya shit lready ya pre wrighting lil bitch hes probaly lookin thourgh his cds for shit to bite

Illusion u's a wack cat no chance of gettin famous,
Master Minds?...if thats so how come ur crews brainless,

Ur flows and strucs fucked no future should be named dis-illusion,
U joint the wrong crew coz u ain't clever u jus good at mass confusion,

U couldn't get hott if u connected wit all vets by using fusion,
Because dawg ur lyrics ain't magical...they jus an illusion,

Too much on ur mind...so ur disses reverse to self personals,
U shoot blanks like troops wit no arsenal goes to battlefields...
...leavin in a herse n all,

U got exposed to tell the truth it hurts extortin-ya,
Crawl up ur moms pussy...so she can start abortin-ya,

wow dissing my name very orignal.so how long of a pre wirght was that?
ya ass is lucky in england cause id of fucked up by now.

/\ look no-1 sees ur attempts @ swaying so hush...

Voted For: Mad Dog

OMFG.. This was one sided..

Punches- Mad
Flow- Mad
Complexity- Mad
Assonance- Mad
Vote- Mad

uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Voted For: Mad Dog

or a g ya corny raps might work in crawley ill have ya in the same ditch as chris farley/
^^^Illusion seen diss line aint gone say where but seen it
plus fix ur structure it'll mess up ya flow it kinda worked diss time but fix it n e way

Mad Dog won hed had a good flow nice punches n a personal
nice shit
give a honest vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

come on whered ya see it? try to expose ya bitch

uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

This was feedback posted for illuson
 

or a g ya corny raps might work in crawley ill have ya in the same ditch as chris farley/

ya talkin bout popin shit please the only thing ya pop is ya mas zits ill burn ya ass with lit grits/

^^^^ zit lines are played out...that was corny


923 post come to the west coast see how much ya can boast yar getin burnt like toast ya have to tell people to vote like most/

they cant do it by them selves after this im put ya boring rap style on the shelf begin for help/


^^^^ Structure is bad man...better that


mother fucker bite me i got ya ass in a choke hold fight me
look back at my battles and bite me/


^^^Not real complex

uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

Voted For: Mad Dog

mad dog wins

beta structure,beta metaphors....more personal and harder hittin punches.

illusion....u put aloot wack lines up that did nothin but rhyme..
i.e- drinks tea?.......wack
ur struc was fucked.if u split ya lines in half.itd b spot on.strrrrrrreetched.

mad-dog u were overall beta.although i didnt think ur rhymes were as gud as usual....but u won easy

vote-mad dog

Voted For: Mad Dog

Mad Dog won this one...the punches were betta, and tha flow was aight...but Mad Dog got illuson tho'..he just came harder

Voted For: Mad Dog

illusion.. kinda stretched, decent punches, decent flow. but xhoppy in parts..

Mad... good punches. decent personals... nothin wrong with ya flow..