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mistah_tate vs $ik Wit It™
Battle Rules:
5 Barz (10 Lines) No D/R Votes No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-03-04 at 01:15 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
mistah_tate has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 11:20 AM.
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$ik Wit It™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 11:22 AM.
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You Yourself, And Conjured Enough 'Street', To Block The Continuous Punches Im Spitten' To Save Ya Health
I Transform'd This Ring For You Into A Livin' Hell, I'll Single Handedly Retire Ya Pen-And-Paper Back On The Shelf I 'll Leave You Shifted, For Even Thinkin' You 'Gifted', Your Whack-Ass Verse Is Simplistic, And I Just Ripped It Use My Mind To Decimate Ya Vision, Use My Infared Beam's To Take You Out With My Perfect Precision My Repetative Punches Depletin' Yuor Body Of Essential Nutrient's, And Fryin' Ya Brain Like Computer-Chip's I Just Murdered This Kid, He Was Severly-Tortured Through Out This Entire Battle, As If I Was Cracken-Whips I'm The Definiton Of Your Destruction, Causin' You Cerebral Damage, As If It Was Paint That You Was Huffin' Like A Volcanic Eruption, I'll Leave Your Mind Scortched, Burnt, Like The Evil Devil's Corruption I Write Immaculate Word's, I'm Straight Causin' Your Brain Several Strategically-Placed Tactical Burnz A Fraction Of My Power Is What You Yearn, You May Be Undefeated, But Im Gonna End That Power-Surge |
how dare you call yourself sik, when u barily been sneezed on gotta lean over and cough on u nigga, only way ya get ya ill on you must be an aspiring gardener, you so good at battlin herbs u still tryin to find yourself, similar to a white kid from the burbs how u got over 1 thousand posts and only managed two wins u anti-social bitch, get off the net and go make some real friends u flat outta luck, leave you with a slur in ya speech like young buck dimes see u and the expression is yuck, pasty face from the cock that u suck and its no secret that most of ya votes are blatant dick rides but i wont put it against u, u must make a lot of friends in gay pride |
uhh dawg, you went ridiculously over the bar limit, what the fuck is that about
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Voted For: $ik Wit It™
he had it more serious i like ya shit mayn nice cuzz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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thats not ova 10 lineas...d/a...uppin for votes.. |
uppin for more votes...
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not a punchline rapper, and my bad you right it is 10 lines, your shit is just superstretched
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yea it is a little stretched out cuz i capitolized tha first letter of every word but anyway...uppin for votes..
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Voted For: mistah_tate
Vote mistah tate SIK WIT IT, mad stretched lines and ya flow was off to me, u had good use of words and wordplay, good vocab i always like that,,,,, I dont know man i thought you could have done better than this,,,,,, I Write Immaculate Word's, I'm Straight Causin' Your Brain Several Strategically-Placed Tactical Burnz A Fraction Of My Power Is What You Yearn, You May Be Undefeated, But Im Gonna End That Power-Surge That was the only thing i liked every thing else seemd fillerish..... MISTAH, harder punches , personals, much better flow..... you must be an aspiring gardener, you so good at battlin herbs u still tryin to find yourself, similar to a white kid from the burbs how u got over 1 thousand posts and only managed two wins u anti-social bitch, get off the net and go make some real friends Those were the dopes part of his verse, over all TATE CAME WAY HARDER http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=145755 |
Voted For: $ik Wit It™
blah this was a kinda wack battle but its iight yo SIk: ya shit was very fucking streched and ya sturcutre wasnt good not the best ive see from you also ya flow was a lil off but ya punche awere good and so were ya personald so that nmade a difference MIstah: ya shit was not that god either ya flow was ight ya strucutre was better than siks though ya punces werent that good like the first one that wasnt that good yo need a lil improving Vote SIK |
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Voted For: mistah_tate
tate took it , his flowed better sik your rhyme was tyte, but it was jus to overplayed and it didnt flow all that well, both metas and personals on both sides, like readin both, but it was close, and tate took it by a little bit "how u got over 1 thousand posts and only managed two wins u anti-social bitch, get off the net and go make some real friends " that was my favorite line ha |
drop an honest vote and e'll RTF..
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Voted For: mistah_tate
give it 2 mistah_tate had nice wordplay good structure overall good flow hard punches not much vocab but good enuff verse $ik dawg ya lines is too stretched it fucked da flow u was sik wit vocab had pretty good punches but no real wordplay n e thing else but nice verse give a honest vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle |
Voted For: $ik Wit It™
dis was wierd to vote on mistah tate... ur shit was aight how u got over 1 thousand posts and only managed two wins u anti-social bitch, get off the net and go make some real friends dat shit was funny! but it couldnt hold up da whole verse...da rest was filler da closer was ok... sik wit it... hot multis good flow...some of it was sik... I Write Immaculate Word's, I'm Straight Causin' Your Brain Several Strategically-Placed Tactical Burnz i love dat kinda shit! but it doesnt always hold up to scrutiny cuz niggas wanna c punches...das y it b wierd to vote but i deffinitly respect it...niether really had punches...but sik showed hotta content n vocab n da will to win... good battle... id like to battle both of ya! soooo fuck sik...fuck tate...im out! peace |
Voted For: $ik Wit It™
ok mistah first and 3rd bar aint rhyme punches and disses were all played and weak flow and vocand was decent a 3/10 sik good ass wordplay and flow good ass vocab punches were not too good but still decent enough and disses were ok thats what got you this really but you lead in all catagorys a 6/10 |
Voted For: $ik Wit It™
wow this was a pretty decent battle but ima have to hand this one to my boi sik wit it .... sik wit it nice battle, your punches were iight but ive seen better from you... nice flow, multies were iight and that what i really liked about your verse,personal's were okay not really good..overall nice job overall really think you still need to elevate alot but it was enought to get the win from mistah.. and your structure was good but like mc's your was off at little places... mistah your Verse was good , your multies were average, your punclines were average...and some of it didnt even make sense damn son read ya shyt before you drop it ,personals were good but it wasnt enough to win and i really think you need to work on that,your structure was okay alittle off to read , but i still think your verse was okay and really need to elevate alittle... Vote = sik return the favor in that b |
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