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Wicked One vs String9487
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20 bars max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 09-07-04 at 02:56 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 03:00 PM.
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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 03:00 PM.
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Fuck tha verses you write...
I'll murder you and return ya to tha earth like tha circle of life... You've failed my expectations, and tested my patience... But never elevated to my level, you were left in desperation... This is a 'diss-appointment' you showed up late for... You fake whore, my punchlines don't just crush rhymes, they break boards... I'll take your soul too,kick you in tha sides while niggas hold you... Leave you bent outta shape lookin more like an Oval... Bitch don't move, my lyrics make you still,I am texts truth... I'm so damn ill I could sneeze on tha keyboard and bless you... I'm tha vet who has yet to lose 2 back to back... Fuck droppin keys,if you joined tha 'hip-hop police' you couldn't battle rap... This kid will crack and split in half like tha rest of my enemies... He will remember me as tha man who made him look like a pair of parentheses... You couldn't flex on me if you used more steroids than olympic teams... Your scripts are weak and slept on cuz your dope...in ya dreams... Lyrically your 'ass-backwards', just a confused troubled youth... To be forward wit four letter words your K-C-A-W... Son its true this cat is really wack, you'll never blow up... And your middle lacks and filling, I can see thru you, you have no guts... |
STRING IS IN THE BUILDING
eh yo i'll load the clip n bust it n spit them things at u bigger than the chicken nuggets its too late fam, u too lame man i'll send ya body bustin thru the wall like the kool-aid man dog u been bitch slapped, so get back before i click-clack, big mac's at ya 6-pack ya shits wack, what' this whore gon do? u garbage even "open" mic "closed" the door on u i could get drunk n drop n still b hotter than u uze a bitch, stop rappin switch to pottery dude when i get on a track, like T.I. ya music is "trapt" abusin ya raps, fuck that put 2 in ya back u losin the facts, u shoulda declined this match my punches knock ya posture like ya spine's detached wicked thinkin hes' hot, he livin a fable my rhymes always on like digital cable u aint winnin nuttin, ready to lose the tally u from brooklyn? u gon make Fab wanna move to Cali wicked couldn't beat me if he put 4 verses down cuz im takin niggas to school like Board vs Brown me for him in a battle, thats an evident switch im about to evict RAPVERSE's resident BITCH! HAAAAA |
Voted For: Wicked One
u had sum aiight lyrics mayn it was koo so did string but wicked had this on me cuzz he had more hmm how do i put it more since in his rhymes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Wicked One
lol .. whata battle ima have to give this one to my boi WickedOne...my boi came fire...lmao Wicked one damn you boi you had a sick verse... you .. had some sick ,decent punchlines... some were hitten hard ..and breakin his jaw... but some where just light punches giving him bruses..lol..naa'mean... multies were good .. some of them were alittle off at times... personals were there but i really wasnt feelin it that much... structure was alittle off some lines were alittle streteched but it still mad your verse okay to read... overall you had a nice and well rounded verse 8.5/10 String9487 damn son you surprised me alot..when we first battled you came weak ass hell....but here you came mad hard playa..but im sorry you cam alittle short..punchline were decent some hitten hard.. but some just feel off...multies were decent.... personals were decent ...overall you had another well rounded verse... but Wicked took this one sorry... vote-wicked return the favor me vs troop thankz |
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i voted for wicked cuzz he had better punches and his punches where decent he had sum ill rhymes mayn
string u was nice to u had sum nice punches but overrall i think wicked got my vote |
Voted For: Wicked One
Wicked One: U had tight punchlines (that K-C-A-W one was the tightest). I liked everything about your verses. You were lyrically on point. Ya flow was good, and ya structure is good. String9487: Your's was tight, too. Ya punches were tight, and ya structure was cool. I just think Wicked had a little harder punches than u did. Wicked got my vote. |
uppin for votes good battle wicked
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uppin for votes good battle wicked
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Voted For: String9487
well strin g had a weak opener but then he came out on the rest the ohte rguy had good vocab better then strings tho but string won with lots of ease: punches: string vocab: wicked one opener: wicked one closener: string metas: 2/10 string multi's: straing v/ string return the favour in my battle verse shake-spear in my sig thanks peace |
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Voted For: Wicked One
funny shit and it was all one person and that is ....... Wicked one wick you got good flow and style and there was some funny punches and personals. but the rhyme symce was off. best line:Son its true this cat is really wack, you'll never blow up... And your middle lacks and filling, I can see thru you, you have no guts... String9487: the flow was wack and some of the songs i heard before, so i think you should get banned cause of this line:when i get on a track, like T.I. ya music is "trapt" |
AKA ur a fuckin idiot why should i get banned bcuz of that line
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Voted For: String9487
aight, strin got this one... nice to see u been elevatin string... decent wordplay, some aight punches (could have been better) an some okay multies, just keep elevatin string, nice drop tho homeboy.. wicked, ya verse was aight, seen u drop alot better, maybe u understimated string or sumthin.. ya vocab seem to lack imagination n creativity this time around, not as many hard hittin punches either, keep em comin tho dogg an no hate, just givin my opinnon an vote... return the favor ya'll p e a c e |
Voted For: Wicked One
AY wicked had dis shit. cuz of some good punchlinez. SOme of em hit real hard/ Structure was better with longer lines andwordplay was good. String it was aiight son keep elvatin and u will get it. V. Wicked wit better wordplay and structure. Puchlines ayo holla at dis battle its 4-0 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149402 |
LOL ^wow a d/r vote........funny my punches didnt hit hard??......lol......aight aight anyways uppin..........
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LOL ^wow a d/r vote........funny my punches didnt hit hard??......lol......aight aight anyways uppin..........
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Voted For: Wicked One
punches:wicked one personals:string multis: string metas: wicked one [most off strings had no effect] vocab: wicked one flow: tie v/ wicked one.... close battle but wickeds punches edged i t out good battle! |
Voted For: String9487
this wuz a hott battle...but i counted 5 hard punches for Wicked One and 7 for String...super hott battle tho...both of y'all keep doing your thing and keep RapVerse from falling into the arms of theez garbage mc's. |
Voted For: Wicked One
aight string decent flow some ok punches but your complexity lacked,n your punches were kinda simple closer was funny but nothin overly personal in this verse of yours,structure was weak,vocab could be improved also,but an ok drop.... wicked one,1 of your better drops,lacked real personals but your punches n vocab were more complex n flow was on point for the most part...hip hop police,funny line punches were slightly better seemed more thought out n some connected... overall wicked gets my vote 4 more consistent connecting punches..decent battle..... return the favour http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149670 |
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