String9487 vs LEazy
 

Battle Rules:

20 bars max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 06:46 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

LEazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 06:50 PM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 01:56 PM.

Just checkin the for this damn battle...last fool didnt show the hell up. Go figure.

yo...didn't forget about this battle. I've been busy as hell wit all these other battles and shit. I'll have u a verse if not tonight then by tomorrow.

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING

eh yo any MC's that step, i toasted most
u get ya face peeled off like a Post-It note
ima choke this trick, the pussy broke his clit
ima set off fire alarms when i smoke this bitch
on ya battles, u couldnt pay me to vote
ya rhymes stuffed full of shit like Jenna Jameson's throat
u flow aint hot, its overbaked, lines sag like they overweight
dis clown get "capped" like a Polar State
ima grab ya cash hold, n wait
ya punches wouldnt b "inline" if u put em on roller skates
just one bar to kill, i dont waiste 2
only thing this nigga squeeze is his Colgate Tube
i blow away fools, Its Eazy see
retire wit Eazy-E, u blind thinkin u see me G
how dare u spit now, u aint prepared for this round
like the weapons in Iraq, ya win is nowhere to b found(ooooH)
I'll see u lata thug, u aint in the players club
hide ya face in all black like Darth Vaders mug
n no vest can delay the slug
leave u poppin out ya shit like them big ass Cicada bugs
im slick wit the flow, i talk greasey to win
a lose dont bother dude, cuz "L"s are "EAZY" for him
HAAAAAAAA

**Cocks da gun**
Feel da PAIN I dealt ya BRAIN who u fuckin wit NOW//
This niggas a right leg cause he stepped up and got left on da GROUND// ((Damn....))

I burn to da third DEGREE ask anybody they'll AGREE//
Showerin a bitch in roses is da only way u make a chick HORNY//((Think bout that one))

I stay PACKED fire u LACK and that's a FACT//
Makin CDs is da only way you will ever burn a TRACK//

Bein grounded is da only time you ever been LOCKED UP//
Dump his body in da ocean wait till he hits shore then you'll really be WASHED UP//((Ah...))

I cock and PULL until my gat aint FULL//
Beatin me is like a chick havin sex wit a cow full of BULL//

Battle any NIGHT cause my rhymes are always TIGHT//
I'm guessin he's from Kentucy but this chicken still couldn't give me DELIGHT//((hehe))

**Start blastin da hollows at dis nigga**
I suggest you just QUIT, it's a bad HABIT, blow him away like SMOKE//
Oh I get it, ha ha, you beatin me was a JOKE//((LoL))

Wacth me close this THREAD cause i'm killin this cat DEAD//
Ima piss on his face so I can say urine over your HEAD//((ur in..get it?))

You can't win watch this cat FAIL and BAIL//
Only way u deliever raw TEXT is if you had unprotected SEX wit ya MAIL//((woah!))

I spit educated rhymes you'd think I was in COLLEGE//
Blow ya brains on ya carpet that way u can say u was really droppin KNOWLEDGE//

I do this rap shit foreal I run my SET//
You like white boys that can't touch da rim...you just hanging on da NET//((o shit...white men can't jump!))

**They hitten em so let's see him drop**
Punches hit hard I know you feel da SORENESS//
You could be a EXORCIST and still not possess ILLNESS//

After I shoot I watch this cat twitch and FIDGET//
So this will be short and sweet like homosexual MIDGETS//

No disrespect but this cat String is a FAG//
And he's just like a crack head...always got da L in a BAG//((He always got a L))

Battlin me was a MISTAKE i'll end this battle cause he needs a BREAK//
Cause this cats so damn dumb he stairs at orange juice cause it says CONCINTRATE//

**Lemme wrap this nigga in a body bag now**
Punces to da face wit this ass nigga String see STARS//
Cause my lyrics are runnin this nigga over fast and furious like i'm spittin CARS//

uppppppiiinnnnnnnnnnn..........will return da favor!

upppin for votes.....i will return da favor and peep ya battle!

uppin for votes dont sleep on this one, hot punches!!!!!

Voted For: String9487

Vote string better flow, content , delivery of punches and way better use of the personal at the end of ya verse
im slick wit the flow, i talk greasey to win
a lose dont bother dude, cuz "L"s are "EAZY" for him
That was a pretty nice closer


LEAZY, work on your structure and your punches are ok but seem all over the place or misdirected,,,,,Or either that been said to many times..
ALSO guntalk and murder hurt your verse......
No beef but you are gettin better,,,,,


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Voted For: LEazy

ayo shit mayn, that fucker was hott....... you got this no problem mayn, you hit hard, hard with with your rhymes, nice job mayn....

vote:leazy

uppin for votes.....i will get back at u and peep ya battle and drop a honest vote.

yo ill explain that more............ his rhymes were better, his punches hit harder, i was jsuit feelin his verse more, he had everything need to win teh battle///

favotire line:
Punces to da face wit this ass nigga String see STARS//
Cause my lyrics are runnin this nigga over fast and furious like i'm spittin CARS//

Voted For: String9487

opener: string (close one)
meta's: both (great meta's)
multi's: none
structure: both (nice)
flow: string
punches: both
personals: string
closer: leazy

ya both spit some hot shit but my vote goes to string9487

vote:

no hate to any of ya

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Voted For: LEazy

ok this was a battle and thats it kinda boring

LE:
first thing when you doing long battles like this don enter twice after each bar
pretty good flow but not the best
punches were ok not good only ok same wit personnals
mullts none that i saw
wack opener and closer
5/10

string:
ever thing you said about him was bad
no skill in writting
the punches you did have were weak and not really about him
ok opener and closer
4/10

winner le

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This was feedback posted for LEazy
 

daaaaaaam!!!! this is a hard one to call

LEasy - "after i shoot i watch this cat twitch and fidget/ so this will be short and sweet like homosexuall midgets" runnin em.

string - ya flow aint hot, its overbaked, lines sag like they overweight/ dis clown get "capped" like a Polar State - runnin em.

shits hard. i would say tie but that aint cool....so im sayin LEasy...ONLY because his lines hit hard every time. string had the better beat and flow....but leasy just had the hits. nice battle

Voted For: LEazy

ok vote goes to leazy he had better punches.!!! punches to lazy, flow to lazy,intro to lazy,ending to string so overall to lazy. string you need to work on your flow

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uppppinnn..this shit is almost closed...i'll vote on ya battle if you vote on this.

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Voted For: String9487

shit this was some long ass shit...you guys should only drop half as many lines so it isnt as annoying to read...
String-your verse was alot better than LE's because you had some good personals like the closer.Your punches hit hard an your structure wasn't too too bad.I liked 90% of your lines like the rollerskates line,weapons in Iraq(that was a HOTT line) and pretty much every other one.Your flow was nice,and your wordplay witty.
LEazy-your verse sucked,no offence but nothing was really a hardcore diss in there...you had 1 or 2 decent lines, but the rest was plated and wack.Either you didn't try,or you need some serious elevation.Work on your structure,wordplay and ounches because it was all weak.

V/String.

Voted For: String9487

GOOD SHITZ YUNG MEN BUT ONLY ONE CAN WIN AND I CHOSE STRING KUZ HE HAD BETTER/CREATIVE PUNCHES LIKE BATTLE PUNCHES THAT ORANGE JUICE PUNCH THAT l USED WAS KINNAH KIDDY I THOUGHT l WOULD HAVE WON IF HE FLO WASN'T SO LONG EITHER BATTLES CAN'T LAST 10MINUTES KUZ NOT EVERY CAT GONNA READ ALL THAT SHIT YA KNO. YALL BOTH WERE FULL OF GOOD SHIT THO THA NEXT TIME I BATTLE I'LL ONLY DROP THA HOTTEST YALL TEACHIN ME LESSON ON DIS SITE.

WHY: FLOW, STRUCTURE, LEAST LINES WIT BETTER PUNCHES. KEEP DOIN WHAT YALL DO MAYNE YALL BOTH SIK

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This was feedback posted for LEazy
 

i luvd leazy verse, he killed it with his closer do u wanna battle me

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Voted For: String9487

aight, string got this
better flow to the brain cells, nice mix of punches an metas, few decent personals, just a decent drop on the whole
(just checkin up on ya rhymes for when we battle lol)

leazy ya flow was aight, structure let you down, but ya came pretty hard just ya structure was off

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