livin legend vs realistnicca386
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
what up nigga battle? :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 07:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

realistnicca386 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 07:28 PM.

You wanna battle, the ill mathematical?
My motherfuckin' brain is IBM compatible
Technique is foreign, far from being borin
My style is hard like cancer spread as fast as my lancer
I run threw your crew like the flu when I bomb it
My styles like AIDS cause aint nobody want it
You frontin like some try hard
But I'm a Street Fighter like Jean Claude
And I'll split your shit, fool
Right down the middle
Play you like a fiddle
I got a fetish for titties, I nibble on the nipple
Then trespass on your property like Monopoly
You're like Amir who cant rap properly
Take evasive action
Flip like reciprocal fractions
I'll turn the heat up on you to watch you're meat blacken
Nelly think you're fly, but you just got electrified and fried
Fuck around and get your mouth slapped dry
How can you battle me and possibly survive
You could never see me and walk away without a black eye
But you only ...how much years old?
So im not gonna be so cold
I'll just see you in the next roun'
Actually better yet just give me the crown!
ready or not nigga here TONY come

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 01:14 AM.

to beat me nigga u better bring a "whole-army"
nigga getting mad cause he lyrics can't get a "hold-on-me"
i strap syntex to ya chest so u can say i put u "on-blast"
like roy jones jrs. record yours "won't-last"
heater fuck up ya whole frame put u in a full "body-cast"
lyrics grip u up like u was put into "god's-grasp"
except u won't see light you'll just see the heater spraying
45 lock u up flexing it's muscles like a boxer weigh-in
i'll leave ya body crusted like "chapped-lips"
and leaves more holes in ya then addicts involved with "crack-pits"
while the desert eagle fold u up like a restauraunt napkin
i ain't lil john but we can get it on and crackin
let's get this crunked my pump take ya life away i'll put u in the trunk
i'll launch ya ass into orbit like a "space-shuttle"
and leave ya blood lying on the ground like it's a "rain-puddle"
my lyrics bring greif misery and despair
i done killed u nigga so it's kinda hard to compare
can't u comprehend what i'm spittin
words leave a stench on u like my lyrics were shitting
i'm a lyrical monster i'll consume ya whole "crew-up"
leave ya brains on the ground and make it look like u "threw-up"
my punchlines hit everytime i rhyme, use ya mind cause right now ya life is losing time
u can even bring ya tools to save ya
heater have u screaming out like u was going through labor
leave a grenade on ya door as a gift like i'm ya next door neighboor
then put blades to ya neck like a mach 3 gilette shaver
tech let more shots off at ya then hockey, mvp i'm the best player
u wanna see jesus i'll kill ya and have him come to ya door like a sunday prayer
i should be r.kelly cause i put more kids around ya girl then a full week daycare
u a bitch u on ya period then use some midol
let heater throw ya ass off stage like american idol
and when i spit i bring the flames of hell so u better rap like kanye west in a church with a bible

Voted For: Livin Legend

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uppin, make sure u guys explain ya votes good cause their disqualifying alot of votes

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Voted For: Livin Legend

yea you took it

punches:LL
metas:LL
hits:LL
STRUCTURE:LL
stretched out lines:LL

but u had alot of good word choice return the favor

heres the link return da favor... o yea i should add a little more , you had alot of good word choice and it worked off of each other, it was sorta long but kept intact nice drop eitherway

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=148516

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Voted For: Livin Legend

ok i dont even need to vote on this battle for rhymes realistic nigga needs to b DQ for STEALIN RHYMES from Canibus
in the Fantastic Four part 1 freestyle. But even still if u take out the rhymes he stole he lost anyway. Dont come in here stealin rhymes son now nobody can trust u at all
im just sayin u pretty much ruined ur rep from now on
but Legends punches were hittin reall good and i liked his structure .

holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147861

heres the link if u dont believe me he stole canibus's shit
http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/dj_c...an_four.clu.txt

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Voted For: Livin Legend

Aight LEGEND Killed It...

More Complex Rhyming Scheme From Legend..
Hit Harder Punches n Metas..

Both Could Elevate On Ya Personals n Hit Humoress Lines..
But Nice Battle..

Keep Em Comin Legend..!

Realist Ya Flow Lacked Creativity, It All Seemed Kinda Elemntary, Step Ya Game Up n Ttry Diffrent Styles...

But Much Proppz An No Hate

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P E A C E

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Voted For: Livin Legend

Im Votin For Liven Legend Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But Liven Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

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This was feedback posted for Livin Legend
 

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Voted For: Livin Legend

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!
so loooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng
livin was much better verse better pucnhes better everything
even tho i only read half each of ur verses bcoz they were so long but my vote gose 2 livin
pz out