Livin Legend vs Golden shellz
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feeding
no hating

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 10:15 PM

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Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 10:16 PM.

homey check it
so ur new to rapverse, so consider ur career ended i could give u a win but but, just consider this as one that I ended.
me wanting to bust ur ass is a good enuff reason
u like the KNICKS so ull win wen they have a 20-0 season.
wanna make it to the playoffs, not this year
oh shit BRAVO get the fab 5 i found another Queer.

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 10:34 PM.

what r u doing, that's only three bars, u need to up that

read my nigga six line=3bars

look, it's only three bars, up it to at least 4 or 6 bars, who wants to only do 3 bars

u done bucked up to the wrong nigga just cause u claim to be heavy
i'll put more cylinders in ya ass then a 2 door chevy
i got slugz that i let off i call them "holding-hell"
once them shits pierce ya body i know i'm folding "golden-shellz"
u a ho in this rap shit so i'm "pimping-u-faggot"
if a dick flew past u why u was prewriting you'd probably "quit-to-grab-it"

Voted For: Livin Legend

Im Votin For Livin, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Livin Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...Holden...ELEVATE MORE MAYN.....

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uppin

This was feedback posted for Livin Legend
 

livin ur verse was even wit his but he was harder... keep at it you'll come thru as you al ready have...

Voted For: Golden shellz

golden shellz nice cut ups i think you fukkin rocked him he had sum good lines but you got em worse dogg that ending wuz fukkin funny shit dogg peace dogg

Voted For: Livin Legend

man this shit was close, both of you were ill and cheeky but my vote goes to livin legend, well done

ok uppin here this has been goin on too long now........

Voted For: Golden shellz

hmmm
this was a close one
i think golden shellz had the more consistent bars..
nice connection of punches an personals, the battle was short n sweet i guess so theres not much to comment on but goldenz punches n personals connected alot more effectively so he gets my vote........

legend, ya opener let u down, other than the opener, ya verse was tight...
if u wouldda used a diffrent an more effective opener, i wouldda voted for u

no hate, just tellin it how i see it

return the fave yall

p e a c e

how long has this been goin on man its craze comeon yall uppin this

this is mad nuff old now can yal vote so we can get this over with

Voted For: Livin Legend

ok ias i said i hate this 6 lines battles but come on it was a bad battle all one side:

homey check it
so ur new to rapverse, so consider ur career ended i could give u a win but but, just consider this as one that I ended.
you total messed up bad line any way from what i no livin ain't that new
me wanting to bust ur ass is a good enuff reason
u like the KNICKS so ull win wen they have a 20-0 season.
don't see the point in saying this. are you give him props?
wanna make it to the playoffs, not this year
oh shit BRAVO get the fab 5 i found another Queer
would have been funny but worded wrong so can't give it to you

u done bucked up to the wrong nigga just cause u claim to be heavy
i'll put more cylinders in ya ass then a 2 door chevy
not bad but are you infering cylinders to be bullet cause i ain't never them called that
i got slugz that i let off i call them "holding-hell"
once them shits pierce ya body i know i'm folding "golden-shellz"
kind wack but i see what your saying
u a ho in this rap shit so i'm "pimping-u-faggot"
if a dick flew past u why u was prewriting you'd probably "quit-to-grab-it"
funny lol nice closer

livin wins

This was feedback posted for Golden shellz
 

wack fuckin battle and golden shellz im callin you on bitch for a name change shit you change the name of your sigs and i change my name of my rv name so if you win i change mine if you lose you change yours...pm me ill set it up..quick lines

holla at ya boy uppin this battle iight yall......

Voted For: Livin Legend

iight dis was a weak battle but still a landslide at that...here da breakdown

punches - LL...simply becuz they were definately alot harder hittin n actually made sense...idk what golden shellz was tryin to put 2gether but it wasnt workin

personals - blahh...tie...basically cuz there was nuttin 2 serious from either one ogf u

meta4s - LL...he had some weak ones but they were there...i think GS had one or 2 but they was even worse...THE META IS SUPPOSE TO BE HARD HITTIN ALONG WITH THE PUNCH PPL !!!

wordplay - blahh...LL at least he tried to do suttin different but makin it seem like he was usin some wordplay...still was kinda wack...definately more complex then GS verse tho

enjoyment - LL...simply becuz his punches were alil funny...more direct...n alil bit harder...weak battle but prolly cuz it was only 6 lines...cheya

Vote - Livin Legend

i wud apreciate it if yall wud return an honest vote on the battle in my sig...

~1~

Voted For: Livin Legend

u done bucked up to the wrong nigga just cause u claim to be heavy
i'll put more cylinders in ya ass then a 2 door chevy
^^^^pretty nice intro, 6/10
i got slugz that i let off i call them "holding-hell"
once them shits pierce ya body i know i'm folding "golden-shellz"
^^^^mmmm, not bad, flow was a bit of though, 5/10
u a ho in this rap shit so i'm "pimping-u-faggot"
if a dick flew past u why u was prewriting you'd probably "quit-to-grab-it"
^^^nice closer, 7/10

pretty nice verse here, punches kind of weak and flow was a bit off but good verse. total, 18/30

so ur new to rapverse, so consider ur career ended i could give u a win but but, just consider this as one that I ended.
^^^^^rhyming ended with ended!! dont like it, 3/10
me wanting to bust ur ass is a good enuff reason
u like the KNICKS so ull win wen they have a 20-0 season.
^^^^na, dont like it either, flow was crooked aswell, 4/10
wanna make it to the playoffs, not this year
oh shit BRAVO get the fab 5 i found another Queer
^^ha, nice closer, 8/10

first to bars i didnt like but the last bar was nice,
total, 15,

vote goes to liviv legend, good battle here,
please return the favour and drop a vote on one of the battles below

psss.......return the favour k, drop a vote on the battle below

Voted For: Livin Legend

homey check it
so ur new to rapverse, so consider ur career ended i could give u a win but but, just consider this as one that I ended.
[COLOR=Red]What the fuck was that. Improve.[\COLOR]
me wanting to bust ur ass is a good enuff reason
u like the KNICKS so ull win wen they have a 20-0 season.
[COLOR=Red]Wasnt feeling it need to elevate.[\COLOR]
wanna make it to the playoffs, not this year
oh shit BRAVO get the fab 5 i found another Queer.
[COLOR=Red]Closing was good. score 4/10.[\COLOR]

u done bucked up to the wrong nigga just cause u claim to be heavy
i'll put more cylinders in ya ass then a 2 door chevy
[COLOR=Red]I liked that line good job.[\COLOR]
i got slugz that i let off i call them "holding-hell"
once them shits pierce ya body i know i'm folding "golden-shellz"
[COLOR=Red]nice line. very good punch.[\COLOR]
u a ho in this rap shit so i'm "pimping-u-faggot"
if a dick flew past u why u was prewriting you'd probably "quit-to-grab-it"
[COLOR=Red]Very strong and amusing punch. score 9/10.[\COLOR]
Vote=Livin Legend