sHoTTaBoY vs G:Deuce
 

PSA Tourney
G:Deuce (seed #7-PSA)
vs.
sHoTTaBoY (seed #11-???)

Battle Rules:

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 11:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 05:18 AM.

Mo'Fucka This Is The Battle TOURNAMENT..
I Aint Wanna Get Personal But I'ma Stick Yuh Head On My Wall As An ORNAMENT...

My First Oppenent Is G-DEUCE.....
I'ma Put Hollow Tips In Ya Tissue To DIFFUSE..
This Is Verbal ABUSE....
...I'm So TIGHT The Rhymes Got U Trapped In A NOOSE...!!!

My Seeds 11 An Yours Is Seven......
U My Nigguh n I Hate To Do This But They Do Say 'ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN'..!!!

Man, I'm More Deadly Than A Great White Clutchin A BAZOOKA..
So If The JabaJaws Dont Get Ya U Know I'ma Shoot-ya..

Bitch, U Wouldnt Be Hot Even If U Duplicate-Me..
..I'm Ya 'ROLE MODEL' n I Advise You To ''Tie Ya Penis Up n Jump From A TREE''..!
..People Sayin ''O Now He Bite Slim Shady''...
..Yea But I Made His Line Hot n This Battles Mine n Ya'll Want An ''ENCORE'' Like I'm JayZ..!
I Got An Uzi To Make Deuce Feel Woozy n His Mommas In Church Screamin ''O WHAT HAPPEND TO MY POOR BABY?!?!''..!!

Yo Is This Battle Not Valid Now Or Sumthin?

I Heard I Got Booted From The Tournament, VILLAGE GET AT ME MY NIGGUH

G:Deuce has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 02:43 PM.

Drop Yo' Shits Man, C'mon...Hurry Up

really really quick key

I lyrically bombard this wack mc with terminology from gods
Rob this cat from this win and rip his chances to defeat odds
My rhymes loft, and throw clips wit tongue twisting aerial deploys
Take my belt off, and let him get whipped let them kids in BabyBoy (Damn)
Ironicly spit words that sent text battles up in flames
Tattoo his thoughts wit terms, so your mind will never forget my name
Nose bleed by venom lines like a lyrical handstand
I fill my bars to his lungs, making lyrical hand fans
Then again, I don’t need to spit hard to take this nigga’s soul
Cause I’m seeing through him, since my words left more than just a bullet hole

Maan, I'm Battlin My Crews CO-LEADER Hahaha...

Damn I'm Preolly Bout 2 Get K.O'D..

Nice Drop DEUNCE, n Even For A ''quickie''

Upppppin 4 Votes Ya'll....!!!!!!!!!!

WTF? I Cant Type..

I Meant PROLLY* An DEUCE*
Upppin Anyway

fa sho, since my computer at home got fucked up, got to use the library at school. Good drop shottaboy. Lets get some votes now kid.......................Let the best lyricist (or better prepared, lol) win.....................

Aight Man, Good Luck To Ya....

Yo Where Can I Get A Sig???
I Want Me A P.S.A Sig...!!!

But Yo Lets See Them Votes...!!!!

Uppppppppppin

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

checking tha score.... nice battle... keep it up...

Vote removed

oh shit.......... my bad..............strobe DQ that....

Uppppppppppin

Uppin 4 Votes Ya'll...

Leave A Link n I'll Return The Favor

P E A C E

fa sho, we still uppin for votes, and strobe, dont forget to dq vp's votes..............................uppin.......... ......

Voted For: G:Deuce

G Duece wins because he had harder punches and was a lot clever with his approach thatn sHoTTaBoY. ShOttA came hella simple and that's the main thing that took him out of this battle. Flow was good on both sides.

ight, still uppin for votes............................................. .

Upppin On This One Ya'll......

P E A C E

still uppin for this............................................

Voted For: G:Deuce

g-decent shit here some punchs didnt really hit that hard an some where ight but u didnt need really much here ya metas where ight everything really was just ight to me seen better from u

shotta boy- WTF? i hope u didnt post that an exspect to win that shit all lmae no hate kid but elevate all that u said wasnt even a punchline in the whole mess of it elevate dramaticaly and really reallly really work on wording your punchs and tightin up your structure casue that shit was goin everywhere

no hate return the vote with me vs phantom

I Aint Votin 4 You After That Vote

The Fuck Kinda Dickhead U Think I Am

''No Hate'' Wtf Was That Shit?

U Think I'm Gon Sit Here n Be Like ...YTea The Nigguh Called Me Garbage But I'll Return The Favor!

Be Fuckin Serious U Dickhead

Patronizin Ass VET, Fuck You...

take what i said and elevate with it u fuckin dickhead

thats what im here for to make people better not tell them that there pile of bullshit was a nice verse

Voted For: G:Deuce

..Im Votin For G:Deuce, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But G:Deuce Came A Lil Harder With It Tho..

This was feedback posted for G:Deuce
 

both of ya were good but id have ta goo with duce cos he had better strucvutre and he had a beter punches

Aight Paramik, Appreciate The Honesty...

Aint Like Some Wack Ass Dick Riderz Like E LOOCH....

yea i no ya vote honestly too but i never give a bad vote
your good yaself juss keep elevatin

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

^^^^^^^^^^^^ WORD

O Shit Erased Dat Vote Sorry Mayne Erased Mayne

Vote removed

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY


I lyrically bombard this wack mc with terminology from gods
Rob this cat from this win and rip his chances to defeat odds
5/10
My rhymes loft, and throw clips wit tongue twisting aerial deploys
Take my belt off, and let him get whipped let them kids in BabyBoy (Damn)
3.5/10 ~Bad Key~
Ironicly spit words that sent text battles up in flames
Tattoo his thoughts wit terms, so your mind will never forget my name
4/10
Nose bleed by venom lines like a lyrical handstand
I fill my bars to his lungs, making lyrical hand fans
3/10
Then again, I don’t need to spit hard to take this nigga’s soul
Cause I’m seeing through him, since my words left more than just a bullet hole
4/10

This drop wasent that great ive seen better from u
ya punches were kinda there i got the idea u was
trying to get across.. but were played and simple
use some complesity ya struc is there good there

Umm overall gave ya drop a 4/10

Mo'Fucka This Is The Battle TOURNAMENT..
I Aint Wanna Get Personal But I'ma Stick Yuh Head On My Wall As An ORNAMENT...
3/10
My First Oppenent Is G-DEUCE.....
I'ma Put Hollow Tips In Ya Tissue To DIFFUSE..
This Is Verbal ABUSE....
...I'm So TIGHT The Rhymes Got U Trapped In A NOOSE...!!!
4/10
My Seeds 11 An Yours Is Seven......
U My Nigguh n I Hate To Do This But They Do Say 'ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN'..!!!
2/10
Man, I'm More Deadly Than A Great White Clutchin A BAZOOKA..
So If The JabaJaws Dont Get Ya U Know I'ma Shoot-ya..
4/10
Bitch, U Wouldnt Be Hot Even If U Duplicate-Me..
..I'm Ya 'ROLE MODEL' n I Advise You To ''Tie Ya Penis Up n Jump From A TREE''..!
..People Sayin ''O Now He Bite Slim Shady''...
..Yea But I Made His Line Hot n This Battles Mine n Ya'll Want An ''ENCORE'' Like I'm JayZ..!
I Got An Uzi To Make Deuce Feel Woozy n His Mommas In Church Screamin ''O WHAT HAPPEND TO MY POOR BABY?!?!''..!!
7/10

Punches were ok ya structure wasent that good and ya complexity was ok i guess ya vocab was emmm more mediocore and ya open and close was ok

overall drop 5/10

Upppiiinnn.........

Voted For: G:Deuce

shotta- weak punches cuz u was e-gangsta 'n shit which is terrible and the punches you had that werent e-gangsta, were just whack. you worked on tryin to use wordplay but it was all simple as shit......5/10

G :Deuce- not the shit but enough to win. vocab was :thumbup: punches was ehh, but more overall quality then his so you gunna take the win here.....6/10

v//g deuce
RTF...

This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

i thought you two were crew ne wayz i like shottaboi's better... much more ounchines that were harder...

uppin for votes...........................................

Voted For: G:Deuce

G:Deuce got this easy...i looked at this battle and thought who came wit the punches...and my answer was G...personals i looked not all there but G got my vote on them aswell...then the structure and flow...flow was tied both readble but G's Struc was better nicely layed out but a bit uneven...prolly would've worked if he centred his verse...Best lines...

G : Deuce
I lyrically bombard this wack mc with terminology from gods
Rob this cat from this win and rip his chances to defeat odds
/\ Decent opener

Ironicly spit words that sent text battles up in flames
Tattoo his thoughts wit terms, so your mind will never forget my name
/\ nice wordplay

sHoTTaBoY
My Seeds 11 An Yours Is Seven......
U My Nigguh n I Hate To Do This But They Do Say 'ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN'..!!!
/\ not feelin it particually but ur best line prolly

sHoTTaBoY i think u still need work on leadin up to punches it's still kinda ima do this and ima do that type layout...it don't work at this level...an aight battle but 1 sided in my opinion...

RTF in ma sig