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WORDPLAYA vs konfuzed
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10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 40 Check in by: 09-05-04 at 04:24 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 03:25 AM.
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konfuzed has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 03:25 AM.
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I'm gonna guarantee
You lack COMPLEXITY when ya NEXT TA ME, With the strength of my punches, You'll think I'm the NEXT ALI. You say you're a WORDPLAYA, Well, then call me the WORDKILLA, I murder each LINE 'bout four TIMES, Cause I am the rap ATTILA. The heat of these lines I bring, Cause more smoke than HYDROPONIC, When the SHIT that you gon' SPIT Will sound like Alanis and "IRONIC". In the world of rhyme, I'm on it, battlin' my way up to the top, Why would you accept this challenge, When you're just gonna be BEGGIN me to stop?! "No, please, Konfuzed, I quit, cause you're on FIRE, I'll never battle again, After THIS beating, I'm gon' RETIRE" Most people will think I'm less, While they think you're so much more; And that's a bigger mistake Than draftin Bowie first in '84! (over MJ) By most of the verse vets, I guarantee, my rhymes are HATED, But all the WHILE, I bring STYLE, Prove to these HATERS I'm UNDERRATED. Shit, these WORDS ain't from the BIRDS That you're used to rappin against, Since you's the PLAYA, I guess I'm the COACH, And I say your ass is BENCHED. You hear that, son? I said you's ridin the pine pony, You're an alto, I'm a Soprano, And you're gettin whacked like my name was Tony. I'ma go ahead and label this As the "up the river" BATTLE, Cause's you're in "de Nile", Plus, up Shit Creek, without a PADDLE. |
got heat seekers fluids leekers dat blast like speakers
got so much LEAD in da clip i luv da game follow da LEADer (a)'LIVE4THEDAY' matter of fact not even 24 hours * if u was immortal God himself u couldn't comprehend da power u 'Flower Girl' so i guess u basically meant 4 'Weddin' (wettin) wit da heat n ya bed da piss on yo sheets is spreadin bein beheaded won't forget it so he can't be copeastedic rhymes nutty so smash it 2 peanut butter den i spread it so pathetic so i 'BEAT' diss bitch wit 'CLUB(s)' like Tim ** 2 leave wit a lil body n a big ass head like invader zim wish u was him well i peeled his cap n WIN(d) hit im blind so i guess u can say dat i literally Blew His Mind *LIVE4THEDAYS is his IM ya **Timbaland Record Company is called BEATCLUB |
uppin for votes... uppin for votes... uppin for votez!!
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uppin for votes...
Leavin' ya used, abused and konfuzed... |
uppin for some damn votes on this piece... holla back...
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uppin for votes... y'all sleepin on this one, fa real?
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yo we still uppin 4 sum honest
votes ya we'll return da favor |
Voted For: konfuzed
yo i like this niggas rhymes it was mad nice yo do ya thang hommie Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin for some more votes on the post... holla wit some honest votes and i'll vote back, dawg.
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uppin for honest votes... we'll return da favor if y'all holla...
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Voted For: konfuzed
ok i like both of them but konfused had stronger punches +more of them wordplaya i liked urs though 2 man |
try to be detailed in y'alls votes if you can... that way, there's no more DQ's and I can work on whatever I need to work on... We'll vote back fo' ya... honest votes, dawg.
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uppin for votes... detailed votes... we'll return da favor...
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uppin this mothafucka again... surprised? nah, me either...
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uppin for some votes y'all... holla at your boyz wordplaya and konfuzed fo' diz one...
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Voted For: konfuzed
Aight, I Think Kon Just Has This One... The Usage Of His Words An His Structre Got My Vote... Wordplay Had Better Punches But Lacked Creativity An Structure... Both Keep Elevatin My Nigguhz Return The Favor n Vote On My Shiiiiiiit P E A C E |
Voted For: konfuzed
woa....nice fuckin battle. The punches where there...wordplay and personals. Shit...You got this because I like the structure you had and some punches you threw were connecting abig harder. But this was a hell of a battle. Keep it up..yaw two are hot. Return da favor and gimmie a honest vote on this battle. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=148175 |
uppin for votes... let's get this thang some more votes...
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i up for votes more than anyone ever has... but it's gettin the record up thurr...
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Voted For: WORDPLAYA
wordplaya took it.... wasn't really close.... Konfused dont get stuck on self glorification... thats now how u are going to merk people just keep spitting disses... play there names w/e... but you need to focus on that... you will elevate 1 vote/ Wordplaya.. |
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yo we still uppin 4 vote ya
so cum vote on diss battle we will return da favor |
Voted For: WORDPLAYA
nice multis to start it with werdplaya.. punches- werd personals- none werdplay- werd multis- werd Vote- Werdplaya additional- make it more compex, by adding witty metafours and that will help your punches also, experiment with werdplay too.. |
yo still uppin diss battle
i will return a honest vote so cum give a honest vote |
holla atcha boyz on dis one... comin down to the wire...
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Voted For: WORDPLAYA
Im Votin For WORDPLAYA, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But WORD Came A Lil Harder With It Tho |
yo im still uppin 4 votes
so cum give a honest vote and i will return da favor |
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Voted For: konfuzed
check it wordplaya... good but nothing stood out it was just a good mood tho u got repetitive with that spread shit...ok flow no real punches coo' word play n srtucture...short for an unlimited...but good konfuzed... good shit...hot flow thru out...first line was good but da middle lacked substance...filler but it flowed well...nice structure...good content wit dat mj shit...last three lines were hot... konfuzed got da vote for all around better verse fuck konfuzed...fuck wordplaya...im out! peace! |
check out typical vs drastic measurez
i'll drop a link |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148867
^^drastic measurez vs typical |
Voted For: WORDPLAYA
word playa got it cuz he had more better vocab but less wordplay but i found his punches hard...10/10 nice floww and structure...10/10 konfuzed you were ill but i found ur punches utterly nonsence...(no hate) the rest was ill...4/10 flow and structure were good...10/10 overall... wordplaya...20 konfuzed...14 v/wordplaya... |
thanx dawg atill uppin 4
1 last vote will return da favor so please vote |
uppin for votes... don't sleep on this one yall, it's almost over...
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Holla On Some Votes... Uppin Dis Mothafuckin Thang!
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uppin this thang for votes... come on y'all... let's end it...
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