PlaTinuM_ vs X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 08:06 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 07:21 AM.

PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 07:21 AM.

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shyt so you a new naughty boi stepin up da block//
ima make ya rhymez embarressed makin u feel like u wanna stop//
you know you cant beat tha multi platinum//
your shyt iz goin down like im attackin em//
you best be loggin out n neva comin back//
tha only thing ull get iz ur lack of slack//
I dont like tha way you flow//
i got 1 to da 2 to da 3 of ur sistaz they str8 h0ez//
to you iz wat ima be disrepectful-too//
your rhymez are top rejectful-foo//
stupid nigga your ass aint gon elevate//
ma last wurrdz is dat ur neva gon get a date//

yo dis guy wanting to battle me thinking is all good//
yo i will get da muther fucking nigga face in put it in the mud//
this is a face guy trying to rap iima taker dis fake rapper down//
he no im gonna win dis shit and hes trying no to frown//
this is gay i dont even have to try to win i got this battle hands down//
man he wins this it wud be lucky and id be outta town//
but i no dis fucked up retard wud never win me in a battle lyk dis//
i wud kick his ass like i was luda(chris)//(chris)=my name so i put it in bracets
ever diss hes dose its gonna go like a bullet n miss//
miss is best abilty i always hit coz im lyk luda(diss)//
not much more to say execpt this retard just got 0-2 to his record//
imma trip the muther fuker with a cord//
yo imma excited to c da vote 5-0 be4 we even started//
n i got the win lyk this guy is retarded//(witch his is)

**holla at me wot u think coz my last 1s were ShIt**

uppin for votez..... uppin for votez!!... voterz online?!
lol i admitt we weak fuk..

yo i c there nufer nigga hus gonna kick ma ass

cmon yall donnt sleep on it!!! uuppiinn ffoorr vvootteezz!!

im not waiting 2 year 4 dis shit so
UPPIN>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>4>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>votes

This was feedback posted for X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X
 

No hate toward either of y'all, but I refuse to even read this anymore... And that's just cause there's nothing in any of them that stays on track...

i wanna get this stuff over so vote plz.<<<<<<>>>>>>>><<<<<<<>>

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

xnbx

yo shit was weak and ultra simple. You didn't put much thought into this at all

not much more to say execpt this retard just got 0-2 to his record//
imma trip the muther fuker with a cord//
^please don't tell me this is the best you have to offer. Please.

Your stuff had no punches, no wordplay(none good). Had no flow. and "luda(diss)?WTF?

Plat

um this was also weak, but it was a helluva lot better than the competition. you had flow and a little punch, like a couple soft left hooks. Neither of you had any real personals though or wordplay, but plats had better structure too.

check the signature

Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

yo dis guy wanting to battle me thinking is all good//
yo i will get da muther fucking nigga face in put it in the mud//
[No real punch, just some weak disses.]
this is a face guy trying to rap iima taker dis fake rapper down//
he no im gonna win dis shit and hes trying no to frown//
[Man common, this was wack.]
this is gay i dont even have to try to win i got this battle hands down//
man he wins this it wud be lucky and id be outta town//'
[Ok This was better, but still wack.]
but i no dis fucked up retard wud never win me in a battle lyk dis//
i wud kick his ass like i was luda(chris)//(chris)=my name so i put it in bracets
[How da fucc do we know if thats your real name, no good.]
ever diss hes dose its gonna go like a bullet n miss//
miss is best abilty i always hit coz im lyk luda(diss)//
[Again with the luda, this aint good.]
not much more to say execpt this retard just got 0-2 to his record//
imma trip the muther fuker with a cord//
[This was so wack, but ok man.]
yo imma excited to c da vote 5-0 be4 we even started//
n i got the win lyk this guy is retarded//(witch his is)
[Not a good closer, real soft punch.]

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shyt so you a new naughty boi stepin up da block//
ima make ya rhymez embarressed makin u feel like u wanna stop//
[Weak Opener, real weak]
you know you cant beat tha multi platinum//
your shyt iz goin down like im attackin em//
[Not good, real soft.. better for a freestyle]
you best be loggin out n neva comin back//
tha only thing ull get iz ur lack of slack//
[Omg how wack! common man.]
I dont like tha way you flow//
i got 1 to da 2 to da 3 of ur sistaz they str8 h0ez//
[Crazy, wackness is in the air in this battle.]
to you iz wat ima be disrepectful-too//
your rhymez are top rejectful-foo//
[Nope, atempted a multy and it was not good.]
stupid nigga your ass aint gon elevate//
ma last wurrdz is dat ur neva gon get a date//
[This was the weakest closer seen in RV hestory.]

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Vote = X

Why?... = X had some weak punches just like Plat, but X's punchjes actually landed, and made some sort of sence.

ive only just started man give me a chance to gety out my real shit dere will be a time when i think of my real shit i will get all my lines exact but at the min im thinking of sumthing mor inportant than some rap siteya raps my life but theres also mor important this i gotta think bout right now or this line wud be exact

Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

i vote for naughty cuz ........ structure and punches were good and wordplay was awesome

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Voted For: PlaTinuM_

aiight this shit was sorta weak.....
opener - platinum
closer - naughty
flow - platinum
punchez - both pretty weak...
v/ platnium

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yo still uppin 3-1 uppin

im stil uppin for votez 3-2 cmon yall lemme have diz one PEEEEEECE

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

I dont like tha way you flow//
i got 1 to da 2 to da 3 of ur sistaz they str8 h0ez//

Gotta be yo best line up in there...u had some pretty~hard punches in there...flow was aight..structure didn't stretched out or nuttin...but all 2gether yo punches were hard...

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thx..... still uppin fo votez... dont be sleepin yall!

yo man 2-1 some of yo vote got d/qed
uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>dont leave us hanging yo

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Vote: Platinum

Lyrics: neither
Multies:Platinum
Structure: tied
Punches:Naughty Boy
Personals :neither
Wordplay:neither
Flow: pLatinum
Opening:Platinum
Ending: Naughy boy

Overall: Platinum

Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

NB gets this cos he had a decent structure...i gatta say both sucked but NB had more punches and better wordplay....and his verse flowed better than PLATINUM's verse....i'ld advice both to work on rhymes and structure..cos non of u both rhymed a bar....but NB takes this for better punches and a better structure...

holla

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

Platinum merked him. His structure flow metas and pucnhes were all dope. he had better concepts and delivery. naughty needs to elevaate

Voted For: PlaTinuM_

i vote platinum but this was very close, you both need to elevate more and come with harder punches and definately try get more personals..... platinums were just a lil harder which gave him this, also the flow was a little better!

also some of naughty boys lines didnt make sense, no beef... just constructive criticism yo!!

peace.... drop an honest vote on my battle please!! link is below

Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

naughty boy took this, both need to elevate though. naughty, your flow was all over the place through this battle, you need to work on that. neither of them really had a decent punch in the whole battle, their punches weren't aimed at each other, just more like free-style disses to anyone. however, i felt platinums verse was not better than naughty boy's, coz i wasn't feeling his structure or punches. both need to elevate.

v/ naughy boy

thanx 4-4 after u vote leave a link ill vote on 1 of ur battles

Voted For: X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X

aight NAUGHTY took this...

batter structure n some nice punches...
could work on ya vocab
(how much vocab can a 12 year old have tho? ...no offence)

platinum, u got some potential, juss gotta Use Yours Words Better...
An Imporve Structure

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