sHoTTaBoY vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 04:27 PM

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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 04:28 PM.

I Got This Lil Fuck Bendin Over Backwards 4 Me Cause Of 'MANIPULATION'..
He Came Too Me Askin To Help Him So He Can Get AFFILIATION..
Man If You Drop Ya Pants 4 Elton John You'd Still Get No APPRECIATION...
After I'm Done Lyrically Abusin You I';ma Ram The Mic Down Ya Throat In CONCILATION..
...If This Was Face To Face U'd Be A Choke Artist Caused By Asphyxiation...
..Ya Emotions Are Locked Up n My Lyrics Are The COMBINATION..

.....I'ma Open U Up n Put Ya Heart On Your Sleeve..
...Nigguh U Juss Got MURDERD n If Ya Dont Believe Me Juss 'AskJEEVES'

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 05:32 PM.

ima straight murder this clown like his "name" suggests...
"finish you off quickly", you like an unwanted maths test...
you belong in kindergartten wit your weak "nursery rhymes"..
beggin on the street...only time you gona see tha "dimes"..
this guy spits his abc`s wit e`s...but only causes zzzzzz`s..
got us all sleepy...peeps prayin please,stop hittin them keys!..
you a "middle" weight...but ur spits turn me off like a "light"...
you a "dyke",coz the way u punchin,ud think it was a pillow-fight"
you a rap "baby"...so i freewheel ya outta here like a trike..
only chance u got of elevatin,is to b reincarnated as a kite..

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

my vote goes to shotta..
his punches just came harder...tha flow was pretty decent *fell a littler tho*..tha structure lack'd and tha vocab was aight..
mani yo verse was good too...structure was good, flow was aight..and tha vocab wa ok...
But shotta took this one becuz his punches were harder..(to me they were tho)

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shotta boy took this yo..
good flow..hard punches. nice sims just straight out firyah from the start against ur opponent but it still need improving

Aight, Much Appreciated Ya'll...

Proppz MANIPULATION, Hot Verse
Uppppin 4 More Votes Ya'll

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Shot u won
*A Hint dats not a dude
but nice verse lil wordplay nice punches
good flow could work on structure but good

Mani
ur good seen better ur wordplay wasn't really workin
diss time so ur punches weren't all dat good u had
better structure n ur flow was tight but u coulda did
better

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Yo, Hold Up? MANIPULATION Is female?

daaaaaaaaamn, i didnt know that.......

i'm sorry i did u like this then mani, dont be mad...juss appreciate n holla at ya boy hahaha!!

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

ok shotta you aganist a femcee do research your punches now mean nothing here disses were ok for a man but not here flow and structure was streched work on that vocab ok a 3/10
manipulation good opener ender was ok a weak verse for you also but good flow and structure and a decent vocab pulled you through a 5/10

hahah, i had no idea it was a femcee, she set it up n i accepted, i juss flowed but daaaamn

she got rhymes 4 weeks dont she?

propps to that chick

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

i'll give it to manipulation, you had better punches, better personals, only the opener was a lil weak , both had good word choice but manip kept it simple and easy to get ha'i'm a lil under the wind so i need that now peace asap

d1-Astrat if you dont know dont ask peace

vote//manipulation

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

U got this both came aight in this i admit ShoTTa i thought u had sum nice rhyming there kept the flow nice but the stuc lacked a lil and ya also went a bit self glory which isn't good...steer away from that...

Manip another nice verse u had sum nice punches, ur personals were on point, the wordplay was good rhyming was also decent, sum multies too u had the whole package in this keep em comin...

RTF on ma sig

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Vote: manipulation

Lyrics: Shottaboy
Wordplay: Manipulation
Multies: Manipulation
sturcture: Neither
Punches:Manipulation
Opening:Shottaboy
Ending: tied

Overall: Manipulation

mad dog thats a bullshit vote, i didnt self glorigy at all.....

but LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ me bein 3-0 ahead before i went to bed now its 4-3
lmfaooo wtf

I Got This Lil Fuck Bendin Over Backwards 4 Me Cause Of 'MANIPULATION'..
He Came Too Me Askin To Help Him So He Can Get AFFILIATION..
/\ self glory

Man If You Drop Ya Pants 4 Elton John You'd Still Get No APPRECIATION...
After I'm Done Lyrically Abusin You I';ma Ram The Mic Down Ya Throat In CONCILATION..
/\ 2nd line self glory

...If This Was Face To Face U'd Be A Choke Artist Caused By Asphyxiation...
..Ya Emotions Are Locked Up n My Lyrics Are The COMBINATION..
/\ 2nd line the "my lyrics are the combination"

.....I'ma Open U Up n Put Ya Heart On Your Sleeve..
...Nigguh U Juss Got MURDERD n If Ya Dont Believe Me Juss 'AskJEEVES'
/\ the BIGGEST self glory of em all

Not a bullshit vote aight get it right u need to focus more on dissing not i can i am i will i have that's self-glory dawg work on ur disses more and u'll notice ur verses will be better in themselves

was up wit that shotta?........u sayin my verse is gud,......now cos u losin u getin upset?....i mean lets b real here.ur verse was aiight, but it wasnt gud enough..np punches..it was average.so stop tryin ta sway n who knows u mite get a few newbs up in here n snatch the win...

LMAOOOOOO

Hirl ''NO Punches'' Comin From The Elementary Ass Punches U Threw
U Wouldnt Know The Meanin Of Vocabulary If It Slapped U Upside Ya Head.....

An DAAAMN, I Didnt Even KNOW You Were Female, Check The Verse, I CLEARLY STATE I THOUGHT YOU WERE MALE...

An By The Way Your Actin U Got Man In You, Like A TomBoy Or Sumthin....

An WTF About Newbs?

Dumbass Vets Thinkin Only Other Vets Know Talent, Vets Are Homo Dick Ryders That Vote On The People With The Most Wins n Dont Bother Even Readin The Lyrics.. (Thats My Opinnon From What I See In Peoples Votes n Coments)

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Damn.....hard as one for me to judge here...damn. I think Shottaboy squeezed this one through his ass. He had some nice multis...nice structure and some punches in there. The Elton John line was nice. But...manipulation you had a hell of a verse there too. Everythin shotta had you had. But i'll give this to him because of the vocab. But witout a doubt it was a nice battle from both.

whoa..........u think u got vocab coz u put sum big words at the end of ur lines.
thats all ur verse was.
u got sum big words,stuck em at the end of your lines...
they didnt even punch or notin,,,,

fuck it.......wicheva way this goes....we should battle again......
put in in efl 4 real votes........

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

uh oh nigga i like hiw words lyrics he killed that nigga wit tha furst and last verse