UnKnoWn-KiLLa vs CODEE
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 09:58 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

UnKnoWn-KiLLa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 09:59 PM.

CODEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 10:00 PM.

U better run, cus im beatin u witout breakin a sweat/
Ya 14th battle on RV, ill be sure not to make him forget/
Cus a one eight seven is about to be comitted/
I gotta explain to him how to battle, this kid just doesnt get it/
Your name is wack enough but what the fuck is with your avatar?/
It looks like Hannibal turned Transeves and got a boob jar/
But unfortunately like a phone bill I'll leave you torn and ripped/
I was born to win this battle as if God prewrote the script/
the outcomes not grey, u shoulda been a goose and ducked/
he from milwaukee, no wonder this kid just got bucked/

aight yo listen I'ma start by sayin u got aids and they full blown.
u at the end of the earth nobody knows ya thats why ur "unknown."
tryin to battle me is like goin up a hill with rollerskates thats steep.
I think its time to get out my broom and make this one a clean sweep.
Also u sayin u hard and comin up like so some magical "killa"
U real fluffy and soft and feathery just like a plump pilla(pillow)
U probably think that u superman on the streets go get your cape.
For u to get pussy u'd give $200 to the cheapest slut and yell out "rape"
It didn't take me long to put this down not even a second look
Only time u gettin close to somethin wet is when u layin in a brook
This ain't a tale about a man and all of his tribolous glory
In due time my rhyme will blind u like the Ray Charles story.

cmon dawg post ya verse dawg..............

uppin for votes.

oh yeah I don't know where u got that shit but I ain't from milwaukee

thats why its freestyle ~~!~~!~~

dont gota go from whree yea live

uppin ^^

cmon guys we uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: CODEE

give it 2 CODEE
had a nice flow pretty good structure
but not 2 hard of punches good enuff dough

Unknown
ur structure was tight n da flow but
work on wordplay n punches not just u
CODEE 2 ya had nice flow but it won't stand out
cuz u don't have those things so work on dat
nice battle

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: CODEE

this nigga had more ryhtm i was feelin it more pun. and more feel to his rhymes

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin 4 votes let's get'em in here come on and keep'em honest y'all

a yo whats up with gettin these votes disqualified I should b up 2-0 right now uppin 4 votes y'all and keep'em honest

Voted For: CODEE

Vote: Ccodee

Lyrics: code
Multies:neither
OPening: COdee
Ending:tied
Wordplay:neither
Personals: Unkown..........hectic diss of his avatar
Originality: codee...ray charles story
Flow:tied
Structure: unknown
Overall: codee

a yo uppin 4 votes everybody keep'em comin in y'all

uppin

This was feedback posted for CODEE
 

kinda one sided but id say codee had the battle with better punches

uppin uppin upin upin upin

Voted For: UnKnoWn-KiLLa

la la la la laala la

lets get this over with either way it don't matter just get it done

Voted For: UnKnoWn-KiLLa

better flow i think, about = in punches yet unkown killers body and structure was better i think

Voted For: UnKnoWn-KiLLa

i think unknown was a lil betta in dis battle. he had a pretty good flow goin n had sum nice punches. like tha ripped n script i liked. n his vocab coulda bin betta but he had it goin on so....
vote=unknown
if u kan return the favor
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Voted For: UnKnoWn-KiLLa

this battle goes to unknown killa cause he had some funny punches and I liked his GOD line.His structure was ok and flow was aight.Nothing special with multies or witty wordplay from either.CODEE,your verse wasn't as bad as some other ones I've read,your only decent line was the rape line.Work on your wordplay and personals too and youll get better.
V/unknwon
return the favour.

Voted For: UnKnoWn-KiLLa

aiiiiiight, killa got this...decent flow to the brain cells, nice connection of bars, decent personals, neither had real hard hittin punches, but everythin else goes to killa, he got this with the overall more complex verse