TURBAN vs livin legend
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO dick riding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-06-04 at 02:16 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

TURBAN has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 10:57 PM.

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 10:59 PM.

livin legend, mr ultra ,you bout to meet allah
smoke you like some 4 foot hookah
just another,well i'm faster than a cheetah
send u packing back to russia, me i 2step u hula
you jus dance forget rap, i do it all while sippin a cola
sit back in ma lawn chair with my pistol
not to be hostile, dont you go postal, so i'll be gentle
you cant even afford a rental, got half of the puzzle
and a lil of the intel, but your efforts are futile
went from legend to to scandal, all you do is ramble
i'll make sure to muffle the sound of the gunshot
tie the knot taught your, family will be distraught
i took your memorial and turned into the local mascot
pathed ur grave over turned it into a parking lot
you went from something, to oops we forgot

livin legend, mr ultra ,you bout to meet allah
smoke you like some 4 foot hookah
just another,well i'm faster than a cheetah
send u packing back to russia, me i 2step u hula
you jus dance forget rap, i do it all while sippin a cola
sit back in ma lawn chair with my pistol
not to be hostile, dont you go postal, so i'll be gentle
you cant even afford a rental, got half of the puzzle
and a lil of the intel, but your efforts are futile
went from legend to to scandal, all you do is ramble
i'll make sure to muffle the sound of the gunshot
tie the knot taught your, family will be distraught
i took your memorial and turned into the local mascot
pathed ur grave over turned it into a parking lot
you went from something, to oops we forgot

u wanna elevate here let me "help-ya"
bring more beef to ya ass then "hamburger-helper"
lyrics have u retire from this rap shit like aids forced johnson, ervin
heater leave 88 shells in ya ass like michael irvin
how u gonna step to me ya lyrics are played out just like erik sermon
slugz light ya on fire so like the usher video ya burning
right now i'm just playing around cause i don't wanna "rip-ya"
u a bitch so i'm gonna gut u in an alley like "jack-the-ripper"
rhino tips leave ya ass wrapped up like a "pack-of-snickers"
look thru ya binoculars cause i know what ya viewing
lyrics leave u scared and bandaged like "patrick-ewing"
i done been with ya girl she said u was no good so u need to "practice-screwing"
heater have u bent backwards like a yoga instructor
stack ya ass among my victims like a building constructor
battling u is like playing "cat-and-mouse" (under his avatar)
u a fag u got more men around u then a fucking "phrat-house"
ya names turban what are u part of al-queda
bitch u suck dick and swollow kids like they now and later's
the 45 put u under water like an alligator
i'll stomp ya ass like young buck, t.i., and "luda-cris"
have u praying to the muslim god like u was born in "buda-phist"
desert eagle carve ya ass on the wall "hiero-glyphics"
and u can't burn me dog cause ya lyrics can't reach me like "pyro-midgets"

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uppin, vote up on this battle people cause we needing votes

Voted For: Livin Legend

turban ya lines were str8 wierd kid was'nt feeling nothing in your entire verse shit was wack srry dawg,you need alot of work....livin legend ya seemed ta come simple n ya punches were weak but good enough to take this dawg,your structure was off which threw your flow off but your verse made sense..no hate jus being honest.....
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Voted For: Livin Legend

Livin Legend:
U came hard with yours. U had a lot of punchlines, some of them u need to work on though. I think u murdered TURBAN. Ya flow knocked me off a bit, but u did enough to win.

TURBAN:
U need to work on ya punchlines, flow, and all things in between. If u would have came harder, u might have had a chance. Keep workin at it.

Livin Legend got my vote.

uppin on this battle

Voted For: Livin Legend

murda that nigga cuzz u had it all tha way nice rhymes cuzz

uppin

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Voted For: Livin Legend

You won this shit all out....you blow his outta da water. Your punches was there and all that shit. You had a good overal verse. And da structure was there. You got this one..you got talent this is the dude I peeped you kill. Keep it up. Turban you need to come wit abit more fire then that. Add some HARDER punches and knock the nigga the hell out. Keep it up though...you'll get it.

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Voted For: Livin Legend

Livin Legend won diss
he had wordplay dat made his punches hit
nice structure n flow

TURBAN
ur structure was good but u could work on ya flow
u had no punches wordplay real vocab or metas
2 help it basically a plain flow which is good but
it could be better if u add those things nice battle dough

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