succ macokk vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Links
No Quotes
Only text all that extra shit is gay

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 12:10 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SUCC MACOKK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 12:11 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 12:25 AM.

im gonna whore the shit outta you you damn ho:laugh:

No need for 'struggle' he 'doulble' every win with a loss as a champ(1)
Yea he 'street' but too 'weak' i elevate on him like off ramps(1)

Cant 'flow' but too 'slow' and fo real he starting to tempt me(2)
This a 'presidental' textual election and ya ballot box is empty(2)

The 'end i see' ya homo 'tendenciys' getting shown inside
Ya name is 'succ macokk' on a site thats 90% guys(thats sooooooo fucking gay)





1)he has double as many losses as wins he say hes street ok then im a off ramp since i elevate above him
2)he says everyone hates on him but no hes whacked and a ballot box is what votes go in for presidental elections

In PM U told me not to use links cause U were prolly scared I'd prove U a fake*...
And U prolly should know that Ur 'shit' isn't 'deep'...not even if 'dropped' in a Great Lake...
Don't battle lames? Please do rethink that untrue statement**...
Nigga, the only way U'd make it 'underground'...is if Ur mamma locked U up in your own basement!!...
Shit you're username is all frosted up and cold....just like your verses...
And you couldn't 'control' this damn battle, if U was using 'vodoo' curses!!...
In the E'style threads, U said U'd put me 0-1...
Then U no-showed twice,and said U KOed me,when I had dropped vs. no-one!!

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Voted For: Empire

lol...gay personal was sooo punny...lol..not a bad battle but empire came stronger in it,the finisher was the best line in the battle,succ macokk,your punches were way to simple,
mostly played also,even with the links n qoutes i still think the 1st verse was harder hitting..sorry jus being honest...
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Voted For: Empire

emipre took it because his flowed better, both needed a lil work but empire had the better punches and what not, better structure as well, did succ go over the limit?

o well dont matter
vote//empire

there is no limit^^ its 6 unlimited lines....uppin...

Voted For: Empire

Hehe...the last line was nice. You flipped his name on his good. You had some nice vocab...good flow and some good punches. You won this by that last line. But sukk was right there wit you. Line for line I broke it down and you got that win because of that last line you used. Both of yaw are nice. Keep up da battlin. O...return da favor and check out my battles.

This was feedback posted for SUCC MACOKK
 

lol just checkin out this battle suck macock you got good sucture but no flow and yer vocab sucks no hate but its feedback you realy shouldent think yer the best cuz thats the way you talk to everyone empire took it to you haha but i cant vote im in the same crew as empire

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Voted For: SUCC MACOKK

good shit ........ voted for succ macokk cos i feel his style (kinda like mine in a way) .... good punches, personals.... flow was sometime lagging .... but hey .... battles are won on personals

dont lemme take anything away from empire.... good tight easyreading spit..... good wordplay and punches.... funny personal.... maybe if i was in another mood i would have voted for you if you know what i mean

tight ass battle .... one of the better ones ive read on here

peace

Voted For: Empire

Opener - Succ, was stronger than Emps
Closer - Emp, Succ, yours was weak dawg
Punches - Emp, Succ you coulda used those punches on anyone, get more creative and focus on the specific person your battling
Personals - Emp, he had more and explained them too
Metas - Succ, thats prolly what he used for 85% of his verse
Multies - Emp, he actually had some, succ didnt
Structure - Emp, much neater
Vocab - Neither had anything great

succ: You need to elevate on Punches and personals, but not only that, I feel you gotta fix up your structure cause it kinda throws off the flow of your verse. Find a format that you can really feel, and clean it up by keeping sentences together without the ....... everywhere.

Emp: You merked this guy with half as many lines as he did. Well done man. I usually give eveyone an area to elevate in but you seem to be commin along fine. Keep doin what your doin man. No hate.

-Vote Empire...