Ekademic21 vs Ice Pick
 

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Check in by: 09-09-04 at 02:52 AM

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Ekademic21 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:01 AM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:05 AM.

you was better off not even steppin to dis
cause bitch i can see right thru the mist,
ur raps is like talkin to a wall they dont even exsist
wanna battle dawg quit writin words and put up ya fist,
we all go thru trials and tribulations
but damn ur stuck in da gay situatuion,
man dawg u might wanna forget your past
ya know the times u let ur dad ejackulate in ur ass,
but shit i dunno u might wanna go back
man my pencil is runnin out of lead so i asked fifty
can i borrow some out of his leg so i can finish this verse quickly
just remember now when u was face to face
against the greatest of greats,
i never make mistakes ya raps are stuck on the shelf as a waste of space, i rap so smooth over instrumentals u couldnt copy me if u had a fuckin stincil,
man i aint even shittin u
pull down ur pants a procced the fuckin bitch in u,
ill spit at you and mimik you and riducule what ever it takes to proove im a sick individual, rippin u a new asshole and thats so walkin the streets talkin the beef like where the lasso,
talked shit till the day i was born
gonna talk shit till the day that im gone,
gettin pleasure when i see cats react when i spit
rippin a track like i had a rash in my lips,
im never nervous on this earth surface
cause everything thing i spit is perfect,
u better belive ima very disturbed person
my flow is jsut tight gettin striked
like i was holdin a key wit a kite,
when im approachin the mic im nice,
1 verse turned into 2 and 2 turned into 3 like a jubalee,
u so weak u cant even step in da booth with me,
u couldnt see this shit comin if i pooped in ur eye lids
with the beat soundin like it was produced by pirates,
stright out of left field how else could u describe it,
im to sick how da hell could u deny it,
my new shit i can tell that ud like it
and if not then fuck u go to hell if u dont like it
fuck this shit its beded, and if u copy my shit u betta say ekademic said it!!!

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Ek dude listen up

You would have to kick a thousand *bars* juss to be as fresh as me/(bars of soap)
I snatch mics aggressively, Battlin me is like givin Einstein a quiz, theres no sense in testin' me
I'll slice you with blades so youll rest in piece/(peace)
I'll throw jabs with mic in hand and give ya teeth *Gaps* and attach C-4 to ya Old Navy fleece
Yo rap Tactiz are wack, you wouldn't be impressive with the mic if you trained it to do back flips
Im know to crack hip wit phat scripts spitin lyrics till Im dehydrated wit chap lips
Emcees think im from the mid west tha way i bring Missouri/[misery]
I spit wit fury, every phrase causes you another in-jury
Your a feminine rapper *just hittin' puberty*,you on ya *first period* like students in tha mournin'
Im a give u a verbal warnin' hop inside my Ford, honk my horn then, leave dents in ya skeleton and start swervin'
I'll damage ya, have you like Soul Food, movie and series, two different cast
Let tha truth be unmasked, my punches are so savier you wont live past tha blast
My punches are spoken so fast all you'll hear is tha crowd start to laugh
Let's see, one injured emcee plus two verbal assaults equals an easy victory for ICE PICK shit you do tha math
These skills is too profound for to apprehend-A-win
My words'll push your thoughts back so instead of posting a verse u'll try to Sign in-A-gain
EK be my guest & get HYPED cause I'm like rit-A-lin
U couldn't FREAK it if U battled in the MISSIONARY position'

yo i gotta quetions for yall whos gonna vote for this shit....it took me 30 minutes to write mine....mother fucker wouldnt post yesterday it took him 2 days

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Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick took this..

punches- Ice
flow-Ekademic
multis-Ice
wordplay Ice

only thing that Ice pick didn't have was the flow... just structure your verse a little bit better so your punches can have more power... cuz i feel myself stretching out jsut to finish ur bar.... but nice line su worded them pretty good...

vote/ ice pick

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good closer... i give you this on punches and meta's
alone...

U couldnt FREAK it if u battled in the MISSIONARY position '
^^^
lmao- gonna remember that one for a while

vote:
structure: N/A
meta's: EK
punches: EK

oops got the names mixed up... so change that to ice pick

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Ice Pick
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Ekademic21
Punches were good too not as hard as Ice Pick's tho...
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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easy win agian both ya strucuter was messed ya flow goes to ice pick punches goes to ice pick and same with the perosnals but this was pretty one sided

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Voted For: Ice Pick

aiiiiiiight

ice got this, better flow, more complex rhyme scheme, an some hella hard hittin punches...

lacked humour ice, but not many people care for humour in rhyes, but i think humour brings the best out of disses...

but on the whole nice drop (loved the missionary position thing, pure genius lol)

ekademic, ya flow was aight..

ya came a lil too elementary if ya feel me?
ya opener was BLAH, an ya finisher wasnt that much better, openers n finishers are sumthin that catch attention, so work on that yea dogg?
nice rhyme tho, just could improve, structure, vocab n metas...
no hate, just bein real with ya'll...

return the favor

p e a c e

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wow....too much on both parts. both of you need to slim your verses down like crazy. it gets boring after a while to read redundant shit.

ekademic - yo...i stopped readin your shit becuase it got boring man. stop using little words to rhyme like "deny it, like it"...condense it to punch hard man

ice pick - you had some nice ones...but if you were a hard mc your rhymes would be understood without having to explain shit in parenthesies. plus your lines are way too long...what kind of beat was your head flowin to

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Does anybody believe in structure and flow anymore?
Guess Not.

Any how.
Eka
Your lines were too short. Not to the point. and farfethed.
Your metiphores an wordplay was rather dumb.
for example.
beef like where the lasso
Not liking your verse at all.
Ice Pick
Way to stretch a bar into a line.
Other than your structure the quality was fairly good.
I liked your closer.
EK be my guest & get HYPED cause I'm like rit-A-lin
U couldn't FREAK it if U battled in the MISSIONARY position'
Only thing is. stop bre-a-kin things up an CAP'in like that.
Believe me. We can see punches. Don't need Help.

Pretty easy take for Ice I think anyways

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Omg I Seen Dis Verse Before I Swear Grrrrrrr I Got Da Link Toooooo Ha Ha Banned Fool Watch In Da Next 5 Minutes Wathc Dis Nigga Going To Be Gone Lol

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick brought the wit in his verse.. both had sum wordplay, ice pick's stuck out more.. both structures were fucked up so neither with that.. best closer was Ice Pick.. Ekademic your closer was played terribly.. opener wasn't too bad.. the harder punches came from Ice Pick.. watch the wordiness, Ice Pick, you could have delivered sum of your punches better but your words were inverted at places.. this was one-sided basically, but not bad on either parts.. good luck with this battle.. but Ice Pick took the win, my opinion..

my vote/ Ice Pick..
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