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Ice Pick vs lyricalflowz
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6 - 15 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no dick no hate no feed no crew. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 03:03 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:06 AM.
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lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:07 AM.
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Yo this pussy LFLOWS cant spit, its like he's experiencing vaginal dryness
And this is supposed to be one of Tha Councils finest Im tha king of text so start refuring to me as your highness Ya rhymes aren't near as foul as mine-is, probolly dont even know what grime is Cats is ready to sleep on ya verses, voters come to ya battles wit blankets like Linus/(cat from Charlie Brown/) You a virgin so how you plan to fuck wit my verse this round I'll have heads thinkin this is a football game cause youll be tha first down You wouldnt be able to spice up ya lyrics if you made em wear ya night gown Cats will think you steppin off tha thrown when I give you loose crowns/(teeth) Step up and get surved like coustomers at 24 hour diners This Richard Simmons is after me for bein such a phat rhymer I dont care how live ya bars are I'll make em all flat liners Ya skills is dusty like 40 year old coal miners And ya crew Tha Fam is filled with weaker players like tha FUCKING 49ers THIS IS FOR FUN DOESNT COUNT FOR THIS BATTLE< JUST A FEW EXTRA BARS I FIGURED I WOULD POST FOR THE FUCK OF IT I'll punch you in da back of ya neck and leave ya spine sore Yo answer this, whut exactly do you rhyme for?/ Try to share ya thought wit me and you'll get ya mind tore/ If you need employment after I ruin ya career I'll let you sell tickets for my tour/ |
Dude I Dont Even Have A Rapper
Never Created One Who Was This Verse Really For I Smell A Copy And Paste Act Son Also I Didnt Cheat He Fucked Up His Own Battle |
Thanks Man
Yours Was Cool As Well I Didnt Create A Rapper Though Homei So Why You Say That Shit Doesnt Make Any Sense |
I Wanst Beefin Either Dude
Im Just Pissed Off Right Now So I Didnt Meaan Anything By The Copy Ands Paste Shit My Girlfriend Is Being A Bitch Sure You Been There B4 |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
Both of you came good iight battle nice verses Lyrical: your shit was nice good verse overall nice lnies some funny one too you had funny but good personals made mer ROFL ok punches though though you could do some rewording init yuou hade nice good strucutre and ok flow Ice Pick: ya shit was iight to you had some messed up strucutre and ok flow ya punches were iight and same with ya personals VOte: Lyrical for a better verse Close battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147901 return the favor
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Uppin.............................................
I DONT HAVE A RAPPER SO THAT LINE SUCKS GOOD BATTLE |
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Voted For: lyricalflowz
ill vote for u cause i liked your flow better than his Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
2 pac is A FUCKIN FAG
I MERKED HIM b 4 i think I will check into IT BUT YOU FUKING SUCK AT RAP TUPAC |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
This was a pretty easy one to call, no hate or nothing but it was lyricalflowz hands down. A really easy win for him, his punches were on a level that was clearly above ice pick. I mean just about all his punches were personals, and as far as the rapper line. He was saying that there was nothing in your inventory. The flowz from both of you was a lil off, but Ice Pick you had a lot of streched lines that just threw your flow off, so it was tough to go along with your verse. I will give you that you did have a lot of good metas (24 hour diners, phat diners, and the charlie brown was nice) However they just werent enough to beat his punches, his were really commical. |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
lyricalflows gets my vote... much more complex his wasn't prediectalbe-and better punches ice picks was nice too- mostly jus the basic rhyme sceme but flowz gets my vote cuz he had harder punches,betta structure and a nice flow... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
YEAH QB SMASHER HAS BEEF WITH ME AND IS TAKING SON OF ISIS SIDE
SO QB YOU CAN FUCK OFF WITH YOUR FUCKIN VOTES ALSO L FLOWZ YOU MUST HAVE BEEN THE GUY SON OF ISIS WAS REFFERING TO WHNE HE SAID YOU GUYS talked about me for 2 hours on aim..... SAYIN HOW WACK I WACK, THATS WHY YOU CALLED ME OUT,,,,, I LIKE HOW SON OF ISIS HELPED YOU WITH YOUR SHIT..... I ALSO KNOW HE TRYIN TO GET YOU IN CLASSIC SO DONT DENY IT,........, Thats the thread im reffering too and the second i was done droppin my verse i got mad PMS for SON OF ISIS SAYIN HOW BAD WE MERKED YOU WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS WE SHIT http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147974 |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Niiiiiice Verse ICE An The Extra Verse Was Tight Too... But U Hit With Harder Punches n Better Wordplay.. Could Imrpove Ya Structre A Lil, But Nice Drop... Keep Elevatin... Lyrical Ya Verse Was Aight Too, Ya Structre Let U Down n Ya Shouldda Tried Mixin Hard Hittin Punches n Personals.. Aight Verse Tho Keep Em Comin... Hit My Battles Up Wit Some Honest Votes P E A C E Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
good drops from both i mean nice battle... both was on point that whole shit about councils finest was good for ice pick but the personals that flowz brought were crushin the whole sonic link haha... i think pick came with bettah vocad and metahs but personals and wordplay i'd have tah say went tah lyrical i'm all about personal and punches really and i think lyrical came with the stronger combination of both... vote lyrical BOTH STAY UP STAY ACTIVE VOTE OFTEN |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
OK ICE PICK THIS IS THE WEAKEST I EVER HEARD FROM YOU THAT FIRST BAR WAS A GOOD OPENER SECOND WAS DIRT AS FUCK THE LOOSE CROWNS SHIT AINT HIT EITHER THE RUSSEL SIMMONS LINE WAS WORDED WRONG GOOD ENDER VERY WEAK VERSE FOR YOU HERE AND NO PERSONALS THAT HIT GOOD YOUR EXTRA BARS HIT HARDER THEN YOUR VERSE FLOW WAS A LITTLE OFF TOO DAMN SUN I THINK YOUR IN THE TOP TEN ON HERE BUT THIS WAS NOT YOU VERY WEAK A 5/10 LYRICAL THIS WAS GOOD A BASICALLY WHOLE VERSE OF PERSONALS PUNCHES AINT HIT THAT HARD BUT NEITHER DID ICEPICKS DISSES WERE SOLID AND LINKS MADE THEM SUPER HARD THATS WHAT GAVE YOU A BETTER VERSE HERE THAT PHONE SHIT WAS DOPE THAT WHITE TEE SHIT WAS FUNNY THE RAPPER SHIT WAS BLAH BUT OK STRUCTURE WAS BETTER THEN ICE AND FLOW TOO 6/10 BASICALLY FLOW HAD HARDER AND WAYYYYYYYY MORE PERSONALS AND THAT PULLED HIM THROUGH HERE |
Yeah he also had son of isis
help him with this sit THIS WAS SO PREWRITTEN IT WASNT FUNNY WETHER HE ADMITS IT OR NOT HIM AND SON OF ISIS THOUGHT THEY PULLED A FAST ONE ON ME |
This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
aye yo uppin this for you guys...just want to see wat the vote count is.......but if oyu wanmt me to vote send me a pm
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it always happens |
This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
Can't vote on this one, so I'm just checkin' the polls. Ice Pick, we should battle sometime, no beef just a suggestion...
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Yeah i guess we could do that
___________________________\ Aint battled you yet |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
Ice Pick ...structure was a lil bit off but tha flow was still good ... you had sum aight punches ... nice wordplay too ... Lyrical flowz ... Structure was better than ice's ... personals were comin left right and centre ... he was outdone on that level ... nice wordplay and metas ... Overall ... lyrical got this coz his structure was better ... plus them mad personals ... ice ya still had sum nice punches though ... |
More Wack Votes
Fuckin People Are A Joke Im A Let This Slide Since I Fucin Sucked In This Battle Peace |
This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
ice pick won. i didnt even finish readin the other dudes
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This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
Whoa Damn Lyrical Flow
Nigga Had Personals And Punches And Wordplays~! Omg Merked Ice Pick To Da Death,,,,,,,,, I Cant Vote But I Wish |
Voted For: lyricalflowz
pick- nah man. the punches were just.......gone. i wasnt feeli ya verse, but i know u can do better. so just for the adaquete feedback...punches blah, personlas blah, wordplay blah, structure was ok, flow was iight just come harder next time.....4/10 LF- ehh ive seen better. and im serious about the links...STOP!!! no more links and dont explain unless u really have to. punches iight, wordplay blah, structure coo, flow bad, personals blah keep tryin and get more complex and witty....6/10 RTF....links in the sig. |
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