Ghost354 vs Ice Pick
 

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Check in by: 09-08-04 at 03:13 AM

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Ghost354 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 05:05 AM.

smell pussy when he pickin around it becomes a potnet aroma
u 24,dummy post ya diploma...
......but me i just post punchlines to leave the post in a koma
blow ya head off an laugh now thats faceless entertain-ment
rvs sickest? nigga you aint it...
you gettin out of character like skitzoz at a court araignment
your flow like unreasonable promises its bound to be broken
hes with gay marriages y u think him an his homo verse is elopin
claimin u at work when ya past experience is a rap board artist
u never goin platinum ya album might make rust thats the farthest

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:59 PM.

9-11 dog i see you hiding in the SHADOWS

Ghost Yo verse was like indians rubbin sticks...but the fire ain't startin
"Ghost" rhymes is grease fires...."mines" is pure arson.
Bout to increase ya fan-base...when I leave ya face on a milk carton
September 6th....I'll beat you "Daly" like Carson.
Total request....fuck ya car...I'mma total ya chest
My first four bars fuckin totaled ya best.
You ain't "hard" when you spit...the only thing "harsh" is ya breath
Ya rhyme was as strong as a crackhead's max on the bench press
Deep down In ya heart you know skills are basic at most
He's Not "tight" enuff.....that's why his name is GHOST

lmao no hate u must not have tried to hard bein 49-7 an all


that wasnt very good verse from u

Yeah And Your Verse Fuckin Sucked

What Is Your Point And Look At Your Record

U Must Not Have Tried Either

Every Line You Said Was Wack

battle the people i have an see how fast your pretty record gets demolished


untill then shut the fuck up you fuckin herb usin ghost punchs an shit LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

nothin more played the fuck out besides that

Uppin.............................................

Voted For: Ice Pick

Aight In My Opinnon This Was One Sided...

ICE PICK Hands Down
Better Punches, Nice Melody n Vocab An Yop Notch Structure...

Ghost, Elevate In Punches An Humour...

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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

checkin out this shit
ice pick did good her his made me luagh

need some votes come ppl quit bein so damn lazy!!!

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Ice Pick -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Ghost354 -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

Voted For: Ghost354

ghost had a better structure...and his punches werre better cos they hit harder..ice pik's lines were stretched and that gives him a minus...cos he talked only about ghost's name..

ghost...had more wordplay and personals...which were pretty cool..i liked 'em...gd job!!

his structure was just as fucked up
YVONNE

FRIEND VOTE OR AN AIM VOTE

YOU TRULY DROPPED ONE OF THE WACKEST VOTES I SEEN

DID YOU EVEN READ MY FUCKIN VERSE

FUCK OFF AND DROP ANOTHER LAME VOTE LIKE THAT AND MEET THE BLACK LIST

WANNA BATTLE BITCH

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what a pussy i dont up battlez like u do when i dont even have aim fuckin dumb ass nigga

This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

hus lookin ice u come wit da same shit all the time its gettin boring but w/e works

Voted For: Ice Pick



smell pussy when he pickin around it becomes a potnet aroma
u 24,dummy post ya diploma...
2/10
......but me i just post punchlines to leave the post in a koma
blow ya head off an laugh now thats faceless entertain-ment
rvs sickest? nigga you aint it...
you gettin out of character like skitzoz at a court araignment
2/10
your flow like unreasonable promises its bound to be broken
hes with gay marriages y u think him an his homo verse is elopin
2/10
claimin u at work when ya past experience is a rap board artist
u never goin platinum ya album might make rust thats the farthest
1/10

ya punches were kinda simple didnt really have any complexity or hard wordplay here and ya struc was bout tha best thing u had goin in this drop could use some more elevation
altho your gettin lotz better


Ghost Yo verse was like indians rubbin sticks...but the fire ain't startin
"Ghost" rhymes is grease fires...."mines" is pure arson.
2/10
Bout to increase ya fan-base...when I leave ya face on a milk carton
September 6th....I'll beat you "Daly" like Carson.
2/10
Total request....fuck ya car...I'mma total ya chest
My first four bars fuckin totaled ya best.
1/10
You ain't "hard" when you spit...the only thing "harsh" is ya breath
Ya rhyme was as strong as a crackhead's max on the bench press
2/10
Deep down In ya heart you know skills are basic at most
He's Not "tight" enuff.....that's why his name is GHOST
4/10

ya punches were weak and simple i figured u would of came alot harder than this u had nice complexity and structure u could use a lil elevation in ya delieverence and choice of beter setups
cuz u are basic in those departments

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice got this ,nice verse man....some nice wordplay n pretty original punches personals were decent,n flow was pretty good......liked the carson line personally...ghost aight spit but jus wasnt connectingf that was the only thing your verse was lacking;..............
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