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String9487 vs Elusiv G
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 02:20 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 02:23 PM.
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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 12:40 AM.
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eh yo there aint a nigga dumber than him
only thing "elusive" about this G..is ya number of wins them things fly str8... at this fly weight dont dive late, or u end up wit ya mind baked n u aint a G u should use a "W" cuz u'd b hard pressed to find a "win" if u looked in front of u im fierce on tha rap, n u just simba on tha verse runnin ya mouth a little more n u'll b livin in a herse the slugs pop, make ya lungs stop givin u blod clots with nothin left to take a mug shot no need discussin, like he is bustin ya raps make me sick so i guess he's "discuss"tin u not hot dont believe the public look Britt boy put down the mic, pic up some Tea n Crumpets i aint even worried..ha like this boy could play me he so wack he couldnt get a "crew" if he joined the NAVY i dont need to go hard on u, ya rhymes get smashed in general on place u need to 'drop" ya verse is in a trash receptical im that incredible, n u stink, like any smoaker cuz im them Gator skin shoes, n jus "penny loafers" no comparsons, to compares a sin how this nigga would have the audacity to dare to win im preprared to grin, when ya dome is leakin throw a grenade, ya whole clique blown to pieces im sicka u, stop frontin like u tha bigga dude u a rusty shovel rapper.. cuz.... NO-body's "DIGGIN YOU"( ooooh) HAAAAAAAAAAAA |
String 9487, u must not b to clever
Damn brer, sound like an old woman buying thread God knows u werent thinkin, mind busy, concerned about blinkin' string aint strong son, 2 kill u wont even need a gun call ma lil sister, she'll break ur ass wit a nail clippa 2 me ur like canibus to LL a lil kid,elementary, a nigga who cant spell Cos ur rhymes fail to exhibt skill Next to u, homer simpson cud look ill this shit is simply no competition U post a verse, like its blank, like u not spittin Its like in "wack" ink ur shit is written I can guarantee u will neva c ur shit bitten If timberlake spat ur lyricks, he'd say he was slippin' u got no credibility and no legtimacy As an MC, ur as credible as clinton's testimony As a game, lets sit bak and role play Ur monica, u can suk me off every single day Hey yo, on the record, im not gay Its a punishment, 4 lil bitches tryin to play Ur pants fillin' wit excrement, sory but ma attack wont relent Ur a pussy, featherweight, bitch, punk this shits over........5,4,3,2,1 BLAP |
uppin for votes y'all ... vote and vote in detail .Peace
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uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit n honest opinion
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uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit n honest opinion
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Voted For: String9487
Damn....this was a tie and I wasn't gonna vote on it. Until I seen dat last line you dropped Stinger. Even though it was kinda of old you still got the win because of it. Your strcuture was pretty even from what I seen. And da punches ya were throwin both of yaw were duckin um. But that last one might have knocked Elvis G out. So...I give this to String. Drop a honest vote on this battle! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147817 |
Voted For: Elusiv G
Aight, String Self Glorified Even Tho He Hit Harder Punches... Elsuiv Got My Vote Cause Of Better Structure An Better Usage Of Words... Could Have Ended The Rhyme A Lil Better, But An Aight Drop.. String, Elevate n Try Not Too Self Glorify As Much... RETURN THE FAVOR P E A C E |
uppin for votes y'all. vote on this and il vote on urs and i honour ma word. 4sho. Peace
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uppin for votes lol................................shottaboy lost his mind
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uppin for votes lol................................
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uppin 4 votes y'all and they wuill be honestly returned and i will honour dat. word.
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uppin and uppin y'all...........................................
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Voted For: String9487
vote: string flow: string way better i thought punches: alot more effective creative: string with each line there wasnt no real comp... NO-HATE but eclusiv u need alot of elevating to do.... |
uppin for votes holl at me n i'll return the favor wit honest votes
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uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit honest votes
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Voted For: String9487
VVOTE STRING, ok this battle wasnt that good at all in my opinion.,,, STRING I KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER...... String had better flow , punches, wordplay and structure,,,, Elusiv, half your shit eiether didnt ryhme or has been said 1000's of times... No beef dude but you should up your vocab and try to use creative punches that will stand out..... Your verse was real basic with fillerish misdirected punches.... Go hit up my battle with typical |
uppin ansd uppin y'all....................................
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uppin uppin y'all..................................gd votes only!!
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uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit honest opinions or PM if u'd like one faster
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Voted For: String9487
vote: String9487 String9487: great punchlines, good personals, good structure, good wordplay, great metaphors, great opener, good closer, not alot of multi's ElusivG: ok punches, ok personals, ok structure, good wordplay, ok metaphors, not really any mult's, weak opener and closer no beef but my vote is string9487 |
uppin dis y'all uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
ight elusiv this is the second battle of yours i've read, i like ya shit ,feelin it but it dosent rhyme this is not a hate thing i'm jus saying you could rip cats a new one if u had a better rhyme scheme think bout it peace out
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Voted For: String9487
String9487 Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... Elusiv G Punches were good too not as hard as String9487's tho... Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... |
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