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sHoTTaBoY vs Wicked One
Battle Rules:
6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 03:31 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:34 PM.
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:36 PM.
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I Dont Know Why He Callin Himself The 'WICKED ONE'..
RapVerse Got A 'COWBOY' When It Comes To 'CONSTRUCTIN' Rhymes So Hand In Ya RESIGNATION... ..This Boys Play Actin,He Got The Leadin Role In The 'wack Emcee' DRAMATIZATION.. With Dumb Fucks Like WICKED ONE RV's Got A 'TICK;' InFESTATION.. ...Your Rhymes Are Causin Nothin But AGRRAVATION... I'm Fuckin U Up Worse Than A Crashed Plane n This Ya FINAL DESTINATION... Man, This My First Battle On The ELEVATED FRONT LINE... You Couldnt Stop Me From Merkin U Even If U ''TURNED BACK THE HANDS OF TIME''.... Man This Is DINNERTIME, An I'm So Hungry I'm Bout 2 Turn Legit n Get Eat Up Your Verbal CRIME.. |
Okay...Take GET Out Of The Last Line Cause I Fucked Up....An COWBOYS Are What Construction Workers Call Lazy No Good 4 Nuthin Wack Builders,, Ya Know?
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Brace your dentals as I attack with traditional fundamentals...
Foundational old skool rocker here to take back bitten rhymes-rentals... Scared stiff ya only flow is perspiration... I'm weak? Why'd your played verse reek of desperation... Fist flying prolific with much inhuman gore ballistics... My killings are the entire fillings of war statistics... I'm tugging this war, wristed hands rip, the wraths swift... To snap kids breaking joints pressuring points thrusting cracked ribs... So u best stay awake like my ex on Spank or Tom Hanks lookin for a date out of Seattle... Cuz I definitely shoot more than Blanks as I dominate u like Forrest Gump and his handy ping pong paddle... quick spit......1 |
Voted For: Wicked One
ok shotta no hate but he merked you some of your shit aint rhyme here and your floe and structure was streched wordplay none punches were ok a 4/10 wicked good ass wordplay and vocab was dope good punches this was fire sun good disses excellent everything here a 8/10 |
it ALL rhymed, But Okay...
Uppppin 4 Votes Nice Verse By The Way, I Admit Your Shit Was Better n I'll Be Shocked If I Even Get A Vote |
Voted For: Wicked One
this was an iight battle but both of ya came alittle weak.. |
^^ shyt lol
here my full vote: wicked one: Brace your dentals as I attack with traditional fundamentals... Foundational old skool rocker here to take back bitten rhymes-rentals... haha nice opener Scared stiff ya only flow is perspiration... I'm weak? Why'd your played verse reek of desperation... pretty decent Fist flying prolific with much inhuman gore ballistics... My killings are the entire fillings of war statistics... nice... I'm tugging this war, wristed hands rip, the wraths swift... To snap kids breaking joints pressuring points thrusting cracked ribs... lmao... that was hot So u best stay awake like my ex on Spank or Tom Hanks lookin for a date out of Seattle... Cuz I definitely shoot more than Blanks as I dominate u like Forrest Gump and his handy ping pong paddle... lol.. nice closer shorty boi I Dont Know Why He Callin Himself The 'WICKED ONE'.. RapVerse Got A 'COWBOY' When It Comes To 'CONSTRUCTIN' Rhymes So Hand In Ya RESIGNATION... not really feelin this opener ..This Boys Play Actin,He Got The Leadin Role In The 'wack Emcee' DRAMATIZATION.. With Dumb Fucks Like WICKED ONE RV's Got A 'TICK;' InFESTATION.. decent ... could have been worded better ...Your Rhymes Are Causin Nothin But AGRRAVATION... I'm Fuckin U Up Worse Than A Crashed Plane n This Ya FINAL DESTINATION... ... decent .. Man, This My First Battle On The ELEVATED FRONT LINE... You Couldnt Stop Me From Merkin U Even If U ''TURNED BACK THE HANDS OF TIME''.... Man This Is DINNERTIME, An I'm So Hungry I'm Bout 2 Turn Legit n Get Eat Up Your Verbal CRIME.. nice and overall good closer but ima have to give this one to wicked one good battle both |
Arch You A VET...
You Should Know You Gotta Type An Explanation... This Vote Should Be DQ'ED, But Its All Good Cause I Got Merked, My Verse Was Garbage An I Juss Kept Drawin Blanks n Couldnt Come Up With Nothin That Creative This Time... The Better Man Won On The Day... Good Lookin WICKED P E A C E |
Uppin....................Vote People......Leave a Link if ya want......1
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Aight Thats Better ARCH....
Upppppin Ya'll....!! |
Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
Shit...toughest battle I had to judge since I been here really. Damn, I give this to u because of structure. Even though yours wasn't all that better then his. But i'll give it to you. Don't quite understand your opener or finisher but i'll give you some stuff in da middle. But his punches were good to. The pig pong paddle line was hot. But I think you got this one because of the hands of time line you dropped. If it wasn't for that line you would have lost this battle. Both yaw are hot..keep it up. Peep my battles and vote please... |
Voted For: Wicked One
iight I thought wicked one won by a close one Wicked one- ok verse better than ok good personals and punches it was good nice shit thats all I can say for a quick spit shottaboy- one thing i didnt like was the capitals loose them ok punches and ok personals but not as good as wicked thats why you lost overall you did good and almost one vote: you'll see |
Appeciate The Honesty.....
I Liked ThisBattle, Even Tho I'm Loosin This Is Prolly The Most Competitive Battle I Faced On This Site.... Much Proppz WICKED Holla Wit More Votes Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin |
Voted For: Wicked One
aight this shit was a no contest win for wicked... first of all shotta you need to elevate dawg... u rapped the whole time just rhyming "ation" sounds like dranatization...infestation...destination....resig nation... you need to make more of an effort man, it was a 14 line max and u droped 10... make the effort to spit an extra couple lines... i wasnt a big fan of your structure either dawg... no hate just sayin elevate man... wicked i liked your verse.. good punches and i like your structure... elevate on multis and personals but you won this one...... VOTE- WICKED |
Uppin this.............leave a link yall if ya want...
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
Jus sum feedback to this battle i jus wanted to see what yall said :thumbup: an ok battle but i aint gonna vote
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naw u should vote...
i let myself down in this battle poor lyrics n stuff, tried a diffrent style n didnt really pay off juss drop an honest vote n i'll return the favor p e a c e |
Voted For: Wicked One
i vote 4 wicked 1 1.better puches 2.better structer 3.everythign was better good battle plz return the fav on my battle with plat |
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