Elusiv G vs Yvonne
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 04:36 PM

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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 04:36 PM.

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 06:18 AM.

best not u make u mad, u cud b on da rag
I shud step bak, n raise a white flag
Cos hooked on PMS, u cud use brute force 2 beat tha best
U shud confess, dat women jus can't handle stress
Dats why yo lyrics, r 4eva at the health clinics
I cud hook u up wit Dr. Nick, n pay 2nd rate 4 a 2nd rate verse
U always seem to b wack even though u rehearse
U seem restricted, in a movie u cud b depicted
As a student to this teacher, a scholar to this preacher
I'll hit u wid mad pace, smudge ur lipstick across ya face
I'll Run past, and do a smash n grab
Steal all $2 out ya handbag, leave u standin' in ya gladrags
Cos u broke, or postin wack rhymes for posts
Or just a bitch ass joke, u kudn; elevate high on a 100kilos of coke
Yvonne, wat a wack ass lyrical name, b ashamed
U betta suited called "fuckin lame" like a pop Mc strivin 4 fame
Least it wud b da truth, cos sayin u cn rhyme is uncouth
607posts n threads, i dnt giv a fuk, u gon b dead
At timez im scared to test a vet, but u must b heaven sent
ur eighteen, sayin u luv to eat MC's
well girl lick the cream off ma bak n the chocolate from ma crack
Time for contemplatin', over, no more deabtin'
Its fact, stated, I was destined to win this, since I was created


BLAP!!!!!!!!! BLAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dR. nICK--SIMPSONS DOCTOR WHO GIVS TREATMENT TO POOR PPL
pms---in lamens its an angry ass girl on her period

vote and vote in detail. Peace

yo gee..you still wouldnt be smokeable cos the effect b 2 weak(1)
ur lines are indisputable,they barely irrelevant compared 2 ur sig
your punches are "flyweight",shit,you would never hurt a fly
cos u just wack in rap..dont believe?,herres a reason to cry
ya flows wud never go fast,cos it like the matrix,all in slo-mo
and its becos u got a barin fart..thats y u drop like a ho-mo
ur structure coming up like a pc disconnected,u cant win
cos ur spelling needs to be corrected AND thrown in the bin
admit it you suck..if not y u keep ya recs duck?
go to "big ben"& get ready,cos he gon clock at ur bad luck*




1-G=green=weed=it would never make nb go high...got it?


2- im refaring to this battle...and i said big ben cos he from the uk...



NB: most of the links complete the meaning of the line (eg : the links with his losses)


peace

yo gee..you still wouldnt be smokeable cos the effect b 2 weak(1)
ur lines are indisputable,they barely irrelevant compared 2 ur sig
your punches are "flyweight",shit,you would never hurt a fly
cos u just wack in rap..dont believe?,herres a reason to cry
ya flows wud never go fast,cos it like the matrix,all in slo-mo
and its becos u got a barin fart..thats y u drop like a ho-mo
ur structure coming up like a pc disconnected,u cant win
cos ur spelling needs to be corrected AND thrown in the bin
admit it you suck..if not y u keep ya recs duck?
go to "big ben"& get ready,cos he gon clock at ur bad luck*




1-G=green=weed=it would never make nb go high...got it?


2- im refaring to this battle...and i said big ben cos he from the uk...



NB: most of the links complete the meaning of the line (eg : the links with his losses)


peace

shit i made a mistake y'all to look at the post with the links................



sorry





peace

Voted For: Elusiv G

why I voted 4 elusive G...is because the punchez Yvonne threw where sorta off a lil...plus I like this line*Yvonne, wat a wack ass lyrical name, b ashamed
U betta suited called "fuckin lame" like a pop Mc strivin 4 fame*...it went smooth...

so
multis-E
punchez-tie
structure-E
overall battle-this was like watchin 2 hours of Girls gone wild....all hype an no action..lol...no hate

Yvonne-your junt was straight,but you should've hit a lil harder.

holla atcha folks!

uppin uppin y'all.......Vote n vote in detail.........Peace and Luv

uppin uppin y'all.......Vote n vote in detail.........Peace and Luv

Voted For: Yvonne

i vote for yvonne cos she had better punches which hit a lot harder than G'z and she put links which made her personals connect..and her structure was str8 decent....her flow was way better too...elusiv g sounded like he was talking to himself and he was just dropping wack ness...nothing of his verse rhymed...he got potentials but on my opinoin...yvonne gets this for a more decent job...

P E A C E

Voted For: Yvonne

i vote 4 yvonne
1.bcoz its all good
2.easyer to read
3.elusiv g has load of lines take way to long to read (its lame)
good battle
v/yvonne

n return tha faV PLZ ON MY BATTLE WITH PLAT

Voted For: Yvonne

she did good i hope this cat aint stupid enuff to face u again baby holla. another quality vote by (kahdaffi_black)

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

blah both wasnt as good id give this vote to yvonne for having more consistency and stronger punches

iight uppin this shit yo

Voted For: Yvonne

im voting on yvonne cuz this so called 'g' fucked up on his verse,lemme point it out-U shud confess, dat women jus can't handle stress-thats directed at all women,not her specifically
-but u must b heaven sent-arent you supposed to insult her,not call her an angel??
-well girl lick the cream off ma bak n the chocolate from ma crack-you got problems,thats sum weird kinky shit
and she had better wordplay than urs,half ur shits just there to rhyme,it dun make sense,this shit mite sound biased,it aint,this is just the truth

Voted For: Elusiv G

Tough battle to judge. Didn't see no punches that stuck out. So I fogot about the punches and went to multi...didn't see any of them. So I went to structure and G's was abit better. Plus you went longer so you had abit of a edge on Yvonne. But it was a close battle. Both came hard at each other. Keep it up.

o...return da favor and peep 1 of my battles too please. :help:

send the links then



uppin peeps uppin

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor wit n honest opinion

uppin peeps

Voted For: Elusiv G

g took it...betta punches...betta structure and flow...betta wordplay...he came wit mo energy 2...
yvonne didnt come as hard...and the punches werent as strong...but overall...nice battle...

Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne wins.
Punches were harder hitting,structure steady, line 1+2 didnt rhyme so fuck that off, make it rhyme next time.

Elusiv G structure was shit needs to all flow like..
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all lines the same length or a liittle bit over. punches were ok bit weak.
Pz.