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Paramik vs Shottaboy
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting you check in first Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 09-06-04 at 09:06 PM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 06:07 PM.
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Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 06:35 PM.
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Dogg Look At Ya Avatar, No Need To Self Harm Cause I Beat-You...
I Think U Chokin Homie, Somebody Call 9-1-1...This Is An EMERGENCY RESCUE...!! I See Ya Battle Record n Respects-Due... But What Hot Emcees U Faced Besides Me Dude?... You's A 'VET' That Means I'ma Smack The Shit Out YOU Juss Cause Of Ya ATTITUDE... You Bitch U Claim U Throwin Up 'RAGS' Well That'll Explain The Shitty MOOD.. I Dont Know Where The Fuck U Got The Name PARAMIK.. All I Know Is Everytime I Post Sumthin On Here U Ridin My Diiiick..! My ''Dome'' Stays On Ya Mommas Mouth Like A Model Wearin LIPSTICK.. ...Ya Rhymes Comin Up Shorter Than An Oompa Loompa So I'ma Paint U Orange n Call U NICK...!!.....Muh'Fucker! Explanations... U Claim U Throwin Up 'RAGS' Well That'll Explain The Shitty MOOD..(Rags = Tampon = Periods = Bein In A MOOD) ...Ya Rhymes Comin Up Shorter Than An Oompa Loompa So I'ma Paint U Orange n Call U NICK...!!.....Muh'Fucker!..(Oompa Loompas Are Orange An NICK Because Of NICKELODEON) |
Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance…
Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants. I agree he makes an ass out of himself his weight makes him fall… Kid says that his lines are fully assed?, must not have any at all. I mean your wack, ya punches and structure is like dog shit in a pile… Your crap redefined, ya verse more messed up than ludas hairstyle…. I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school… It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool! What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do. Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you. |
ok done let people vote now
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Aight, I'm STILL At School 4 One.....
An TWO...Nice Verse, U Obviously Had Ideas About Whut U Was Gonna Say 2 Me Before We Even Accepted This Battle... But Nice Verse n Upppppin 4 Votes...!!! |
Uppppin Ya'll...!!!
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Upppppppin Ya'll.............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uopping in this shit
votign niggas or is the post count to high??? |
I Think The Post Count Too High?????
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Voted For: Paramik
this was a decent battle but still one-sided... flow: para punches: para creativeness: para vote: para he just had a better flow more hits that was harder and more creative point blank but no hate.... decent battle |
This was feedback posted for Paramik
cute fuckin finisher ngga
let me know when u want it.... |
Vote please
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aight props to both battlers here. but here's the verdict.
flow:paramik structure:paramik vocab:paramik punches:paramik Seriousness:paramik best line:paramik "...It's like the days, before lent the way i'm passing over this fool." worst line:"...ya rhymes comin up shorter than an oompa loompa, so i'ma paint you orange and call you nick." why:shotta your structure needed a lot of work, i found myself confused at first and this is never good. Some stuff didn't sound right together and things like that. and overall this verse just lacked creativity and seriousness, the nickelodeon reference, was bad and well chidish. But in truth paramik was only slightly better, but you guys were all well in the same boat. but paramik had better structure. |
Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance…
Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants. i dont like this line Dogg Look At Ya Avatar, No Need To Self Harm Cause I Beat-You... I Think U Chokin Homie, Somebody Call 9-1-1...This Is An EMERGENCY RESCUE...!! I See Ya Battle Record n Respects-Due... but this ones much worse..... opener paramik My ''Dome'' Stays On Ya Mommas Mouth Like A Model Wearin LIPSTICK.. ...Ya Rhymes Comin Up Shorter Than An Oompa Loompa So I'ma Paint U Orange n Call U NICK...!!.....Muh'Fucker! nigga r u serious? this is ya closer? come on step ya rap game UP!!!! What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do. Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you. real fuckin cute nigga u lucky your oppenent was so wack! closer paramik You's A 'VET' That Means I'ma Smack The Shit Out YOU Juss Cause Of Ya ATTITUDE... You Bitch U Claim U Throwin Up 'RAGS' Well That'll Explain The Shitty MOOD.. fuck is this garbage? u should be dq'ed fa wackness I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school… It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool! the only line i like and barely.... paramik wins |
hey no poll to click on but you send it to complaints cuz dis is an explained vote
I REPEAT I VOTE FOR PARAMIK |
You's a patronizin bastard aint cha man?
fuck outta here with them garbage ass votes.... patronizin us both, nigguh fuck you... |
haha
Maku jaillin and hottssh, I barely tried... you kno me i really dont try that much in battle only if i face a experienced vet... I really used 4/10 of my skill |
Voted For: Paramik
Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance… Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants. I agree he makes an ass out of himself his weight makes him fall… Kid says that his lines are fully assed?, must not have any at all. I mean your wack, ya punches and structure is like dog shit in a pile… Your crap redefined, ya verse more messed up than ludas hairstyle…. I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school… It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool! What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do. Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you. ...................... breakdown: lines were aight, closure was a filler(cat line) rhymes were original for the most part, had nice word play... best punch:I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school… It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool! ^^nice comdedy...shotta boy's verse was wack n all, had horrible opening which made me lose focus on his rhymes quick. no challenge, due to these causes... vote: paramik |
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Voted For: Paramik
Paramik -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out.. sHoTTaBoY -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho.. |
Voted For: Paramik
easy...better punches and a couple coo personals in there...i was feeln the whole style of the flow... shot had a okay flow, but i wasnt too much feeling it, he had a couple coo punches in there, but not all of em connected. elevate on ya skills and keep practicin...good flow |
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